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Apple Bloom sees a vision of the future, one so horrifying she'll do anything to stop it, even if it means having Diamond Tiara fall in love with her. Will Apple Bloom succeed in this endeavor? And if she does what will her friends say?

Edited by Telaros

Chapters (8)
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The best story ever is finally up. Brace your britches people. It's going to be a BIG storm of CHAOS tonight!
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Oh yes, this will be glorious. I'm going to need more popcorn.

Ha ha! I knew it was Discord. Let the fun commence!

This is glorious already.

There was no way Diamond Tiara could resist her brand new curly moustache.

I see our Apple Bloom has learned from Spike.

:moustache:

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Damn straight. :moustache:

Now I HAVE to read this.

I mustache you how that's going to work out.

"Peace between the warring countries will all but cease"

And so will war between peaceful nations!

wow, that advanced quickly.

I haven't laughed like this in a while. I can't decide who's funniest in this chapter, but Silver Spoon is definitely up there with her comments about the pizza alone. I was wrong. This is beyond glorious. Keep it up.

Pizza from the trash for Silver Spoon :pinkiecrazy:

Well.....That escalated quickly. :moustache:

... what?

Scootaloo, you blithering idiot.

P.S.: Sweetie Belle is so adorable, I think I'm going to shrivel up.

What?! Scoots, you imbecile!

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..... maybe not, its either her being truthful or her simply trying to drive the two apart.

Oh my god.

I know the perfect love interest for Scootaloo.

So..... To get two ponies (obviously in love) to not want to date the each other, you stuff them in a bag?

lolz.

Two chapters in and I'm torn. I'm desperate to find out what happens next, but I find this type of humour cringeworthy and even embarrassing.

It's the stark opposite of a train wreck. There I know I shouldn't look but I can't help but stare. Here I know this is worth reading but I can't help but look away.

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This is a comedy first and foremost. If you don't find this kind of comedy to your liking you may be better off just leaving with a downvote...

Though if you're a kind, caring individual you would upvote despite the fact it's not to your liking...right :twilightsheepish:?

Please check the text formatting. The second part of this chapter is in italics due to a broken tag.

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I apologize for the inconvenience (aka: major fuck up). Thank you for pointing out this error, I can't believe I didn't catch it.

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Thanks for your fast response. Minor mistakes or not, I enjoy reading this story. :pinkiehappy:

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I'm just glad I decided to check to see if I got any new comments, was about to go to bed :twilightblush:. Having half my chapter in italics for an entire day would have been...pretty bad in my opinion.

And I'm glad you're enjoying it, hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter as well!

This is sheer awesome!
I love it!

“When you wake up, on your desk will be a apple with a blemish. That blemish will resemble a diamond tiara. If you see this apple when you wake up, you will know I speak nothing but the truth.”

See if you can spot an obvious error! *eye twitch*

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Hmm...

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OH! It's redundant!

...Right?

Scoots is just a bag of good ideas in this story.

:twilightsmile:
And ScooTiara is confirmed, and AppleTiara wins!

Flawless Victory

now we need to have a second story where scootaloo and rainbow dash fall for each other! who's with me?!

Seriously?!? I know one pony who has feelings for Scootaloo.

3797459 just get Pinkie she will do it all for you.:pinkiehappy:

:facehoof: SCOOTALOO YOU DUNCE WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?!

Hmmmm I guess you stuff someone in a bag to get them to fall out of love , interesting.

3818210 Am I to guess right that it is Rumble?

I started off really liking this story. Not to say that I totally dislike it, but the humor in the last two chapters misses the mark quite a bit. Plus, cute Sweetie was adorable and funny, while psycho Sweetie was... disturbing and not in a funny way. :pinkiesick:
Still, nice attempt. Have a thumb, but not a fave. :twilightsheepish:

--Spade

Goddammit Scoots :facehoof:

Sweetie Belle will make a fine yandere to some unlucky pony one day. :rainbowlaugh:
All in all, cute read.:pinkiehappy:

Love the random Lion King reference at the end of this chapter. :rainbowlaugh:

Scoots wat r u doin!? Stahp!

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