favorite character is applejack and i have been a brony for a while now
After Spike and Twilight go through the portal from the human world to the pony world something goes wrong. Spike is still a dog, but he starts to notice a few things. He could now understand the other animals perfectly, and he starts to lose his feelings for Rarity. But he does start to have feelings for somepony else.
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I like how this story is going so far. I think it will be interesting! Lol in a good way. I like the idea of Spike as a dog.
Your grammar is better that a lot of others, but maybe it could use an editor... If you want one, I'd be happy to help.
Keep it up!
So Far..............................So Good,
Keep it up
Good start. I found enjoyment in reading it.
This video I have posted on every one of my fan fics and I do think you all should give it a watch.
Love it
hmm so far i'm liking it keep up the good work
`Annabell242
yay another spike as a dog fic
If I were the Dragon Dog, then I would avoid the hyper-active collie.
I've noticed that you don't capitalize the I in the word I'm. That was a little bit of a turn off, but I do wish to see what happens next. Best wishes!
His Dog Form gave him the ability to understand animal speech!!!
its rockin
Loving it.
Found a teeny mistake:
Unless Twillight was sad that she couldn't party with some construction parts, then you probably meant girls.
Haha. I didn't see that comming....
3848652 And that's fixed thanks for pointing that out.
Hmmmmm. Very interesting. This is gonna be interesting for Spike. And the girls.
Yeah! Owlicious!
Woo! 
I loved the story so far it awesome I can't wait to see what happens next and that video was so sad and so beautiful I loved it to.
This chapter was awesome I loved it all and it's so awesome that Spike can think with animals I can't wait to see what happens next to Spike and the others to
Ahhhhh yea
I love it keep up the awesome work 
THIS IS EPIC!
cant wait for the next update!
If you're curious about what my oc looks like click his name here, Baker Song
3962280 [Insert Tom Baker/River Song Joke Here]
Hay what happen, it's been so long. Did you give up.
4010954 No, just waiting on the response from my proofreader.
Sounds like you need a assistant proofreader
4025112 Is that an offer? Because if it is, and this can go to anyone who wants to be a proofreader for this story, you can go through the chapter I just released and send me a pm with the grammatical and punctuation mistakes.
Cool chapter, been awhile since I last saw a chapter from this.
I'll help ya out with the grammar and whatnot if ya need it or whateves!!!!!!!!
4025311 Well, as I said in my comment right below yours is that, if you want to do any kind of proofreading then send me a pm with the grammar and puncuation mistakes from this chapter. Or at least some of them.
4025159 Nah. I propably would see evrything perfect or try to force you into some ideas of mine which happen to me from time to time.
4025159 + English isnt my home language. Sorry.
Interesting story. I enjoyed reading this chapter and can't wait for the next.
Either he heard Winona talks or it's love at first sight.
Welcome back to another cliffhanger episode of "Pass Out".
Omg each chapter keeps on getting better and betterm
Absolutely loving this story
More chapters now please
4035728 me too
I had. More the flash sentry idea about twilights love interest after the hole equestria girls stuff
Spike should be worried about the 'heat cycle.'
4112478 Why? Haven't ya heard that dogs sniff each other's butts all the time, but I do know what ya mean though.
4112442 Ya, not a fan of that shipping, no offense if you do. Bbbuuuttt, I rather go down these paths and you will find out later why!
4112561 I bet for Winona he smells like nachos and if Spike smells her it will smell like apples.
4112634 Maybe, but then again maybe not.
howdy, bakersong it's me Annabell242 the one you took the challenge of writing this story and just finished reading the new chapter and im liking where it's going so far but have a question or two about the pony shiping if you don't mind me asking first question is a simple one is this a herding universe or a monogamous one or a combination of the two my second question is who are you actually gonna pair with twilight if this is gonna be a regular 1 on 1 shiping with twilight if it is a herding one you don't really need to answer the second question but it's always good to know to avoid confusion .
anyways loving the story so far with spikes and winonas romance; it seems to be starting off nicely being sweet and innocent keep up the fantastic work . i'll be eagerly awaiting future chapters ~Annabell242
4112717 Ah, so your the one that put the idea in my head when I was drunk on new year's eve. And yes I was drunk when I accepted your challenge sadly, but it was lucky for some reason I remembered an idea the next day about this story and wondered where it came from. As for your questions, yes in my head there is herding in this world of Spike The Dog. But, as for if it will actually work out, that is unfortunately a matter that I would like to keep disclosed for right now. And I hope you enjoy the story!
4112740 ah good to know i tend to prefer herding fics ,well depending on the pairing really but good none the less, and fair enough i suppose i shall watch as all the cards are dealt and the hands being played with, as i sit back and let the events unfold before mine very own eyes. so i shall leave you with that and bid you a fine good night and shall turn in for the night.
~Annabell242
Well, I really like the story so far. Funny how Winona got Spike's attention away from the butt-sniffing.
More chapters please
I know why Opal wasn't there.
4155532 Oh, do you now?