favorite character is applejack and i have been a brony for a while now
When Luna is feeling sadden and alone after two months of being back, she goes to a spot that views the entire city Canterlot, and the view is beautiful in the night. But then she discover's that she is not the only one who knows about this spot. Who is this strange Unicorn that popped up out of nowhere?
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Really nice story. Can't wait to see more.
I'm likin' this so far. Not the most original concept, but the execution's solid. My only problems are with the few grammatical errors here and there and the 'sex' tag. It's a bit unwarranted, considering nothing of the sort has actually happened yet. Still, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Another great chapter. I'm curious if Song will keep immortality if the creature is defeated so he can stay with Luna eternally, but odds are that's not the case.
3347983 yeah quite the mystery, but no sporilers for you
3348051 That's alright. I love surprises and don't mind waiting to see what happens. Can't wait.
At a restaurant and want to have a good laugh?
Make the waiter dance.
You're a friggin' princess, why not?
I always did wonder if Luna or Celestia ever did anything for fun other than constantly trolling the Six.
Well, we do, considering there was a whole episode on it.
DAT CLIFFHANGER TIMING
During the buildup, at that last part, my only thoughts were, "I swear, if he's an Alicorn..."
It seems like it might turn out otherwise, so I'm thankful for that. As for the next part... I'll leave that up to the creative members.
3376078 the contest i proposed isn't for the next chapter, its for a future chapter
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Ah, okay. I suppose I misread it.
for those who got confused, i edited the authors notes. the contest has nothing to do with the next chapter.
Being honest, I almost forgot about that episode... I don't even remember the title. Even then, I give you props for the subscure reference. I'm pretty sure that I can tell what's going to happen with the cloud (Not that the hints were that subtle in the first place), but considering how badly my Alicorn theory went down, I'll keep it to myself.
Though i do not give out any spoilers, i would like to hear some of your guesses.
Just to clear this up, i felt like i rushed the chapter a little bit to much and so that's why i took it down. Hope you guys like what i plan to do with the next chapter though, and hope you guys weren't really paying attention.
Oh snap song grew some balls and asked!
I noticed the last 2 chapters were once 1 whole chapter that you had posted before. I guess you took it down and revised it? Nicely done all the same. It did feel rushed before.
3439552 yes they were both one chapter, and the whole point of me revising it was because it was to rushed. so thanks
I just made my account really to tell you to keep up the story in summery it's a really good read! Finish what you have going here then you could possibly create spinoff story's for these who wanted it to end differently. Keep up the good work can't wait for next chapter.
New author's notes up in The Day of The Memorial pitching a new idea for the new plot. If you don't read the author's notes then do you think i should put the new plot i presented into a sequel? Or would you like me to add more chapters to this story with a new plot in mind? Leave a comment saying so, and also if you had an idea for an alternate ending let me know and i might right a spin off with the idea. Or better yet take the idea and write your own spin off, i would like to read it if you do.
damn just damn..........
this is very sad but very good
And please... when "i" refers to the speaker, capitalize it? Not doing so makes the writing look VERY unpolished.
3464051 It really is not something i can help, for if the spell check that they use doesn't let me know about any mistakes like capitalizing then i typically ignore them, but believe me i will be working on it in the future.
Onyx is the creature! Or that's what I believe
Great chapter as always
what the fuck.......
3474954 What? You surprise by the nice little twist? And before anypony ask, it may not be as obvious as what I made it out to be.
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your little plot twist...... im mind fucked and amused by it
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I agree. I think Onyx is the creature or some kind of form of it.
3476099 Maybe
This is MADNESS!
Madness?
This is A FIMFIC ABOUT LOVE! and what not...
I'm sorry for the delay but due to an injury on my left hand i'm gonna have to put the story on hold for a bit longer.
Lullaby for a princess........
That song makes me want to cry when I watch the PMV video
Typical pinkie. Always gotta break that 4th wall.
3510558got that right......
To tell all of you the truth I really did not mean to write Pinkie in there, it just happened without me realizing it. I think i'm going
if ya know what i mean.
Oh geez
Sorry about the switch in characters, just a minor change.
Damn......
3535271 so i take it you're liking the story so far? if so then good, do you need any duct tape?
3535279yes I'm loving this story......uumm what's the duct tape for?
3535301 well just in case something else happens that might cause you to blow your mind lol.
3535310hahaha maybe I will in the future.
Okay.... I did not see that shipping
Returning to song.... Damn, only one month
3550650 really did two chapters on it
3551254i shall kill my self for being so damn slow.......
3551383 oh and have a good thanksgiving
3551419same too you
oh, and i will try to do something for hearths warming eve.
okay the next chapter won't be updated until the twelfth, though if you all want i could do a quick filler chapter until then. Any suggestions for the filler?
Hahah YOGi bear reference!!!!!!!