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CrypticMetaphor


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Now THIS is something to be read. You sir deserve my like and follow.

I came for the cover

My dick told me to come here.

So you've finally done it...

Good luck with this, my friend.:twilightsmile:

(Mature for sex scenes at certain points, don't come in expecting it up front. This story has a plot, enjoy it. Now this is my first attempt at every clop scene.)

You sir... had my attention at 'this story has a plot'... I'm willing to give this a try, something tells me that I will be impressed.

You know, i have never asked this before, But what do ya find interesting about this particular story?

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Well for me, it's a few things, first off... I'm a sucker for interesting plots/themes that I've personally never seen before and this is just that. It's not just one pony sent by accident, it's multiple, willing and knowing ponies who show up actually prepared (to the best of their abilities) for what lies ahead. Second, I've rarely seen a Celestia ship-fic do any justice to her the last ones I recall are Spacecowboy's 'Fly too close to the sun and she may never let go' and 'Solar Embrace' by Abramus5250. The others were senseless, poorly thought-out lust driven fictions that put Celestia through all manor of sexual deviancy including two of my most hated forms (incest and rape). Finally, I guess I have a soft spot for the original princesses, seeing them in good, long stories where one or the other develops a romantic interest always seems to pull me in to see how the author will do it... and now the spotlight is on you my friend and all I have to say is... leave me impressed.

ok at frist I though this was going to be an ok read but this is something I can read over and over again and not get bored of it I was thinking tht it was going to pull a eguestrian girls on us but you did not and I think by that you dogged a bullet so cant wait for chapter 2

I will probably skip the sexual stuff, but I will eagerly wait for a new chapter nonetheless :) .

3548723 I like it because the humor is decent, and instead of randomly finding themselves in the human world by accident, they went willingly.

My first clop with a plot, now i have four active stories to update, ENJOY!

I thought all clop had a plot (or more) in it.:rainbowlaugh:

3548910 Hello, fancy meeting you here.

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I'm everywhere a story with promise is, like I've said before, I'm a sucker for a good story.

Great story, update soon.

Cadence with Double Ds!?!

You had my interest before.

NOW YOU HAVE MY FULL ATTENTION

im honored to be your 100# like

Keep going, story looks good, if you need ideas im plenty of them. Really plenty.

My English is far from perfect but bear with me plz

As we say in spanish.
¡Que te vaya bien!

keep it up i like this:twilightsmile:

what celestria do with the guy wallet?

Holy shit, it updated! :pinkiegasp::heart:

this is getting interesting.

Whoa! I did not expect the sudden update. A pleasant surprise.

good for you, can't wait for next one soon

Fez McMasters? Reference to That 70's Show? idk.
Liked the update, though, could you make your chapters a bit longer?

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I can only write so much o3o

Weird I knew a Fezzini McMasters, he was just like that too, but he move to Frezno.:trixieshiftright:
Still thanks of the update and I hope to read another.

Thanks and good luck

3852734 I'm with you when I saw this I had to jog my memory to remember what this story was and then I was like "oh shit its the story I thought was pretty cool" and here I am now

I feel the need to punch this 'Fez' individual very, very hard...

I have a feeling that "fez" will be kicked, punched, and kneed in a very sensitive spot for boys.

Sweet! I'm glad you're continuing this. I look forward to it :pinkiehappy:

3858647 Hello there, didn't expect to see you here.

Edit: Silly me, I just realized that you were here a long time ago.

Cadance needs some clop in this or am I the only one thinking this.

Yep Cadance needs to get laid in this fic too!

4002384 But... She's married...

4022734 Are you suggesting Shining gets in on the action, or...?

4022753 Shining Armor? Captain of the Royal Guard? Prince of the Crystal Kingdom? Brother of Twilight Sparkle? Husband of Princess Mi Amore De Cadenza? That Shining Armor? Yeah he was thrown in character with little background story.

4022760 I will repeat..... Who the hell is Shining Armor?

4022765 He showed up in the finale of... I believe it was the first season. Chrysalis attacked Canterlot during his wedding?

4022768 I guess you don't get it do yea? Whats the point of a clop fic if Cadance is screwing Shining Armor? No thank you. I want her and a human to bump uglies!

4022773 ... Huh, never thought of it like that. But, then again, I'm not one for cheating, even if it's just fiction.

When is the next chapter. I like the story, it's interesting.

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