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i was just minding my own business while riding my bike to school and the next thing i know i am tumbling down a hill and land in a creek. then i get sucked into a sink hole and now I'm in Equestria. like i said my day just got weirder
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very interesting. I look forward to more.
Interesting... "strokes nonexistent beard"
if they don't kill you then man... then you are going to be soooooo expelled.
oh and FIRST!
3318102what do you me by expelled?
I just want you guys to know that I wrote the fourth chapter while half asleep so I will edit it as well as add a new chapter later today so please forgive the inconvenience
Hmm.... This is okay I see no probs author, just try a bit harder
3319930I mean if he gets back and the same time has passed
3322421 HA i get it
interesting
great now he has to see a dentist
they need to be nicer
oh god, i have a feeling who "attacked" him
Woooooooo I hate this.
*Smacks prier*
WTF was that for!!
I hate you prier.
Feeling are mutual.
Lets play zombies.
yes.
*Leaves*
LOLOL I hope he knows balisong with his butterfly knife. A PET?!??!! SERIOUSLY!?!?! A FRIGGING PET! HAH!
Amazing
what? no sexy party
3526094 i plan on making this story quite long but don't worry we'll get to the heated moments in due time and trust me there will be plenty.
First! I got to say... This story has potential, but requires editing. What caught my eye is Octavia not being a Fillyfooler. 'Til the next chapter my friend. I'll be watching.
I have to agree with 3538826 I thought Tavi was gonna be with Vinyl but i was seriously wrong. But its a nice thing. Also the way you described Tavi while she was cared, picturing that was absolutely adorable.
3546020 It's finally a change of pace. We barely have Human X Octavia stories on this site. We. Need. Moar!
3546421
Agreed, but take your time. No rush, its your life.
3549000 This guy here... He gets it.
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3550834
Lol
3553139 You, sir... Deserve a smile.
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3554208
Wow, that is so true
3554699 Indeed... You deserve another Meme!
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3554706
Mmmhmm lol
That was a lot of action, I hope to see more of this fanfic so don't take this much time to post the next chapter, please.
Very nice chapter. I especially like how he is trying to help with everything.
3679732 um special agent Octavia bond?
3703593
You saw Nothing...
Now this is definitely an improvement from your other chapters. Although, there are still a few grammatical issues like the capitalization for names of people and places, and slight sentence structure problems. All in all, I'm quite impressed by this chapter. Good show, lad.
Very nice chapter indeed
Looking forward to it
3482051 Reminds me of TF2
3526094 a sexy party? What does that mean? Forgive me if i dont understand, you see im from Finland.
4725377 a sex scene
4725588 heh, might be too early for a sex scene.
4725377 okay it one to three guys and three or more girls plus alcohol and other party drugs and some snack and some desert if you know what i mean
Imagine Breaker lolz
So far so good, *keeps reading*
Some errors here and there, let's see if you improve, next chapter
3709200 umm, 007.... Its 002... My cover has been blown. I am eliminated from the agency.
4708596 ?
4725377 booze + hot girls + a suspicious lack of clothes = a sexy party
Or just sex
4762472 yeah the story writer told me already but thanks.
AWESOME...SO AWESOME !!! He's a hero, and doesn't know it...YET !!
I was surprised that Celestia didn't stop the "duel" earlier. Was she seeing what this human was capable of ?