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Frosthowl


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The son of a human and the Princess of the Night, Prince Starfall is a newly born child who grows up hearing stories about the heroics of his father. However, as he delves deeper into the strangely obscured history of his family, he soon finds out what was being hidden from him.


Edited by, Zenith042
Extra help from, Jonah Fun

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 198 )

2806336 This is from the previous story yes, The demon always speaks in bold.

Everything will be explained about his past, his father and why he had to sacrifice himself in the end.

Thanks for the writing info. Its not really my speciality:unsuresweetie: I'm working on getting an editor for the story but my luck with editors is the same as the state lottery.

I'm glad a you continued to write this. I like the last story and this one looks to also be good.

2806903 :) Thanks for the encouraging comment, I'm not a heartless bastard And I will release all the chapters that I finished before putting it on a stop, tho it will take a week cuz I accidentally deleted chapter 18 and I'm at chapter 22. Along the story I will also explain the past so you guys can get an understand what happened during the year that we missed out. and I was thinking of writing a Equestria girls chapter where Anthony follows Twilight her there...But I don't know yet:P

2806923 Thx for the info cant wait to read the next chapters

I Iiked this chapter, the use of the diary with the story allowed you to show the bond of mother and son and the struggles of Luna in one chapter.
Good Job , and I look forward to seeing more.

:twilightsmile:

2853201 Thanks, this is just what I need to keep writing the story:twilightsmile:

man that's just D'AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2863405 There are more AAAAWWW'z on the way but I need Likes before I can make em happen:unsuresweetie: Do you know how expensive it is?

maybe.

9000 bottles of whiskey perhaps?:ajsmug::ajsmug:

Now that was a good start to a story. I can't wate for the next chapter. I do hope it will be soon. Keep up the good work.

2903782 Will be released on the first August.

Question first, is Friendship is Thicker than Water required reading? I ask because I really like Children of Equestria stories (they are just so adorable) but need to know if I have to read the other first, if not I will probably read it later, but I just have so many other awesome stories I am also reading it will probably be on the backburner for a while.

P.S. Friendship is thicker than water is actually the point of the original saying, the full saying is the blood of the pact is thicker than the water of the womb, ever since I learned that it irks me when people misuse it.

2941341 Not necessarily, I will paint a picture of everything that happened in the story. Where he came from, his closest friends, his sacrifice and other important events and characters. so you dont have to. but it helps to understand. But honestly I think that finding out through APJ is more exciting:P

P.S Its supposed to be a reference that blood bond isn't indestructible, Anthony and his brother have genuine hatred towards one and other, while James and Anthony are more like brothers than his real one.. I had originally intended to name APJ (A Mothers Love Is Thicker than Friendship) But that sounded too cheesy:P

2941341 There will be lots of Aww moments dont you worry about that:raritywink::raritywink::raritywink:

Oh! If you are going to read the second story...I'll only say that its not the best written story...Just so you know

2944116>>2944125 Awesome, then I guess I will get started on this one, and like I said, it will probably take me a while to get to the other one, I have 380+ stories on my Read Later list, some of which are pretty long, so who knows when I will get there.

And there we go, all read. Very nice so far, now to return to the endless waiting for new chapters.

2945114 Actully Im happy to tell you that the chapters will be released on a every third day basis. After the 5 th august I'll release them consistently until I have no more chapters left.:) Chapter 2 and 3 scheduled for first and fifth august

Nice chapter, it's making me want to read the other story, but then that would be ANOTHER story I'm currently reading (I am reading like 5 different ones at once). Can you provide some basic over view on Humans in equestria. Like their power levels, their apitude in magic, do they all get wings ect.

2968229 you will learn in time, however I must warn you that the other story is...Horribly written.

Comment posted by Frosthowl deleted Jul 31st, 2013

2968243 You mentioned, however one of my favorite stories has that disclaimer prefacing it in the description, so I am not deterred.

I request Fan-art of Starfall, by brain is having a hard time of picturing him (doesn't help that I cant tell one age from another mentally) For now, I will base him off of Prince Onyx, just with red hair.

Comment posted by Frosthowl deleted Jul 31st, 2013

2968505 Oh I want to say but you will just have to wait and see my friend and clicking that like button wont hurt yer chances of seeing it sooner:trollestia:

2968524 Already clicked, now to wait.

My thanks go out to
U for making a
Fantastic story. I am curious as to "What the
F:scootangel:k" is going to happen, so
I guess I should keep reading.
No one should have down-voted your story,
So to help reverse the effect have a thumbs-up.

2974809 Derpacorn:....... you my friend are an epic son of a b:moustache:ch
Frosthowl: yet another good chapter my friend! Only a couple of gramatical, spelling, and (possibly) word choice errors in this chapter. Keep up the good work!
-SR936........OUT LIKE THE SON OF B:flutterrage:CH I AM!!!!!:raritywink:

2977190 To bad it only gets a view count of 4-6 viewers per day...Its sad that 2k clopfics about the most original couple in the universe *Cough cough* Apple dash gets several thousand :unsuresweetie:

2979140i know right, it's all the origional ideas that suffer :fluttercry:.... but the orrigional ones also prosper very well in time! so keep up the good work!!!
........sr936..........out....*yay!*:yay:

Haha and human curiosity takes over like it should :rainbowlaugh:

August 16th...... MY BIRTHDAY!!!!:pinkiegasp: you shouldn't have! :twilightblush: :raritywink:

2986857 I just said I promise there wont be a manticore in the next chapter

2986813 you're right, I shouldn't have. I've rescheduled to the 17 th:P MUHahahahahaha:moustache::moustache::moustache:

2986436 Yeah, but for every like (starting from 25) I'll shorten the wait time by a day :raritywink:...I'm not kidding, for every like I'll shorten the release day

2987422 calm down it's just an educated guess you don't have to rip me a new one

2987477 No I dont, But someone else will have a new one in the next chapter...It will get...Messy:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp:

To let you know I am enjoying the story. I do hope to see more soon. keep up the grate work.

Dragonfox :moustache:

2995143 you could always show it by liking the story if you already haven't:P

2987428O MY GOD! HE KILLED MY HOPES AND DREAMS!!!
YOU B*****D!!!!!! :raritywink:

Die like a true soldier then get bitched slapped back to life by your father.

3017680
or a drill instructor screams him into life.

Rejoice! Rejoice! The story has been updated!:derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:

I have now left a comment. I like where this story is going.:twilightsmile:

3053626 I left a comment for you and I like the nice comment you gave me:twilightsmile:

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