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I read that chapter title, and I immediately think of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy.
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Well damn. I hoped someone would catch it, but I didn't expect it that quickly...
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Well, I just happened to have been reading that book a bit before seeing this, so yeah.
Oh dear, looks like someone learned magic that representated her coat color.
Don't Panic. That reminds me so much of that one Monty Python scene.
Let's hope that the stallion is a frood who knows where his towel is.
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The hoopiest.
Ahh, there it is. Great work on this, man-- hopefully lotsa people get behind the idea.
This story is actually really good. It had a great build, didn't jump straight to the naughty stuff, AND it isn't purely a clop tale. I enjoyed it, which is rare for me and clop fics, keep up the good work!
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Thanks a lot, couldn't have done it without ya.
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There's plenty more to come; the ride's just beginning...
And then... whatever Luna summoned/created dies a horrible death because she forgot to immunize its body against the harsh lunar environment and cosmic radiation
I'm looking forward to more
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Ah, how could I ever have dared to pass something like that under the eyes of scrupulous fanfiction readers? The rest of the story will have to just be a forty page essay on its entire biology.
Next chapter out in a couple of hours.
I wonder if that dream is going to affect what happens when she finally gets back to Equestria. I can already see her proclaiming her love to a bound Celestia in a creepy yet arousing manner.
3624077 Good to know. It'll definitely interesting read about Luna sassing him.
Did she just create life in order to get railed? D:
Mission Status:
Stage One: Get Railed.
STATUS: SUCCESS!
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And all it took was playing God! Who knew?
Keep up the amazing work
And when Luna returned to Equestria, she remembered this thought, and invented Hentai.
New headcanon right there
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Aww, thanks! I'll do my best; it's far from over yet.
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The vines from S4 were Luna's dream come true... Also this story is making me realise how few Luna emotes there are. None.
3628047 your welcome love the story so far
This gives me an idea of how the general story is gonna go.
Let's see if you can break my ideas wide open, hmmm?
Hmmm, so Luna created the ancestors of the changelings in a lust-addled attempt to quench her heat?
Interesting 
Aww, too bad. I was hoping for some little hybrids running around the moon in the future.
3627893 I know, Right? :D
Holy fuck, mah boner...
Buzz the first Changlings?
3647336 *looks at profile pic* bait
3650359 way below the belt!
Will there be a three-way sometime in the future?
Great chapter
-Sly Moon-
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I'm afraid not; I think Luna would at least stick with one pony at a time unless her heat got the best of her. That would be pretty hot though...
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Cheers mate, stay tuned for more!
3663283 I obviously will I
this story
-Sly Moon-
You may want to edit this part:
'A flash, blinding and brilliant, erupted from the centre of the ring, releasing a shock-wave that flipped Luna off her feet.'
A part of me is kind of hoping Luna and Buzz will form some kind of romance. Probably not going to happen, but it'd be very sweet, given how Buzz has shown that he's protective.
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Haha, that's actually the second time someone's called me out on that in one of my stories. I argue that ponies still have feet, the foot being the entire region below the ankle, and the hoof (which I assume is what you think I should change it to) is just a part of that, like a toenail versus a foot on humans. So feet is still 'correct', but I'll consider changing it just to reduce confusion.
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I can neither confirm nor deny how the story's going to go, because spoilers. We're only halfway through, though, so plenty can happen in the meantime.
I really have to wonder if Luna's not violating some god code or something here making life...
either way, good luck explaining it to your sister later! And if that succeeds, good luck not tying her down and having your way you incestuous mare you
Ah, so I was slightly off with my previous assumption
Hmm, a thousand years is a long time, I wonder what other creations or wicked feats Luna will make during the rest of her stay on the moon
3665588 Which is exactly how you know this is well written; you leave us wanting more and wondering exactly what's going to happen between the characters and such. Can't wait for the next
Arm, shoulder - yes.
Feet - no.
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See, I think arm's far more misleading than feet. I guess I'll change it though, too many people calling for it.
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No the arm is an official name of horse body part, where feet aren't.
And since fandom is using horse terminology, barding included, the foot sounds strange.
Edit.
See this picture that is quoted sometimes:
http://www.angelfire.com/ny4/ihadrillteam/images/horsediagram.jpg
suddenly I fear for buzz.
Did you just really... Oh Luna, you naive fool. :D
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It can only end well! That's what the Tragedy tag means, right?
...right?
I'm still really hoping for some kind of romance between Luna and Buzz, because reading this chapter makes me feel like there's still hope... but that tragedy tag makes me feel uneasy
Glad to see I'm not the only one who is apprehensive about all of this.
I don't think Buzz will ever see Equestria, sadly.
gonna call it... buzz is gonna die. I'm not happy about this realization but it has to be done
Luna if there is one rule that should always, ALWAYS be followed that is to NEVER EVER tempt fate. Because one of my favorite descriptions of reality is Murphy's Law which states "Anything that can go wrong, will go wrong." And tempting fate is like that is like a alarm clock reminding Fate of said law. It will go like so:
Fate: "Hmm something hasn't gone wrong in a while. . ."
Random person/pony: *Says the usual thing that tempts fate (what could possibly go wrong/etc.)*
Fate: "Oh! Why not let That go wrong!"
Anyway good chapter, and yes Buzz must die, so sad. . .
What part of her soul has Luna lost?
What was her sacrifice...
Now, that will be interesting to know.
You do not know how much I want to make a fanfic of Luna x Buzz
I give you a 10/10 for this story!
Beware of the Tragedy tag!
BEWAAAAAARRRRREEEE!!!!!!