• Member Since 21st Mar, 2013
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Grimm


Mostly harmless.

Comments ( 72 )

this is amazing, i would ask for more, but its too perfect. :heart:

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Thank ya kindly. :raritywink:

This just might be the best applecest story I've read yet. Kudos, you just earned a follow.:twilightsmile:

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Well damn, much appreciated. :ajsmug:

Wow, I really loved this story, great job! :pinkiehappy:

Oh this is just brilliant :rainbowlaugh:

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Clearly you haven't read Sweet Apple Aches.

This fic was still super sexy though. I was half expecting strip-poker but this was even better. Good job.

Oh sweet jesus, that was incredible.

I have never seen something quite like this. Bravo!

~Skeeter The Lurker

I... I just... that was incredible. I'll echo what was said above: one of the best Applecest I've ever read. :ajsmug:

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Apple incest is wincest!:ajsmug::eeyup::braeburn:

Oops, on a re-read there were a couple of lines of speech missing. Not sure what happened there; possibly an issue when I uploaded from Gdocs. Regardless, I've fixed it now so the bits in question should make a little more sense. Sorry about that.

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:rainbowhuh:Skeeter, do you read EVERY fic on here? I have never not seen you.

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He's actually stuck in a trademark Eakin time loop, forever doomed to spend an eternity reading fics on here and commenting through space-time in present day. :facehoof:
Certainly explains the quickness of his reading. :rainbowderp:

At least, that's how i'd like to envision it.. :rainbowlaugh:

This is an awesome wincest story, and right when I was looking for one too! I loved the interaction between Brae and Mac, it gave it a show-like feel with their banter at the beginning and I could really see the scene as you had it set up. Liked and followed, please keep up the good work :moustache:

Pfffkajkajkja the end was just fucking hilarious! Nice work

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I'll try not to disappoint. :scootangel:

Would like to see some kind of sequel.

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I'm afraid at the moment I've got no plans for one. I'm happy with it as it stands, and I like the idea of leaving the ending open to imagination. Perhaps that'll change, but for now I've got plenty of other things to be working on. :twilightsmile:

omg that was funny as hell! XD
too bad theres no part two i would love to have seen how they react to each other to this lol XD

oh that good old apple family loving. :applejackconfused::eeyup:

I was half hoping when they went back she would be gone, leaving them to wonder if they actually just banged AJ, but I suppose your ending made up for the lack of mystery with comedy. Bravo! :yay:

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It's funny, that was actually my original plan for the ending, but the last scene was just too good to pass up. :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiegasp: this was awesome! :rainbowkiss: I love this story.:twilightsheepish:
I love clopfics:twilightblush: ....:rainbowderp: I'm a clopper.:pinkiecrazy:


I think it would have been better if :ajsmug: would've gotten herself together just long enough to vamose and leave the guys wonderin "Did we just...?:pinkiesick:

Just my pinion you're the athor

Buckets...
I came buckets...:trollestia:
Like...:ajsmug:
Favourite...:pinkiecrazy:
Follow...:moustache:

mmmmm dat der be cream of the clop for sure , you even made most of the poker terminology understandable for non card players like myself.....

Oh, wow. I loved this. Applejack's secret fetish was pretty good on its own, but I absolutely adored the way neither stallion was willing to give up in the name of "pride". Typical male posturing leading to their downfall.

And I, for one, thought the ending was perfect.

And that's how we do it down here on the from!:ajsmug:
That was hot, depraved and funny.:twilightoops: And I loved it!:pinkiehappy:
Good Job!:trollestia:

Good sir, I demand a followup, a spinoff, ANYTHING!!! :raritystarry:

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I really wasn't intending on doing one, but there's been so much demand for it...

Maybe. I've got plenty to do before then. :scootangel:

Will you hate me if I say that I mainly came here for the Poker?

Typical male peacocking.

I found this to be a fun and very exciting read. I really enjoyed this and it had a great payoff. I'm curious what made AJ want to bump uglies with her kin, as it's not explained all that well, and the fallout of this taboo rump under the table. It's a fair applecest story. :moustache:

I love you

And to think it was an innocent game of poker :ajsmug::twilightblush:

Awesome, greenthumbed.

"I'm scaroused..."

And then they had another awesome threesome.

Right?

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That wouldn't happen to be the one on FanFiction.net, would it?

someone took inspiration from your work
(needs more plot) tumblr

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Wow, ain't that something? :twilightsheepish:

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Isn't Ambris the best artist?

You know, soldiers in 'Nam used to do something like this. The Game of Smiles? They'd all sit around a table, and a chick'd give 'em head underneath it. First one to smile or moan lost. :rainbowlaugh:

Heehee, a real smug smiler this one. Well done.

Alright Grimm! Nice storywriting! I wasn't sure what to expect when I read the description, but this is great!


You just earned a follow!

That ending made me think their would be more chapters.

Could've gone without the sex.
I think Poker Games are intense, that's why I read it.

Oh my gawd, that ending!:rainbowlaugh: This is one of the best fics I've read in months! Well done!

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