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So far so good dude, this shows a lot of promise. Though I will need more info on the world you are trying to make. Is this like a year or so after Twilight and the rest died or much longer.
You have my attention
4169243 Thanks for the feedback and sorry about the confusion. This actually starts a year after Twilight died, so it's about a good 70 years in the future. She was the longest living element.
4169247 Thnx !
hmmm, ill put this in my read later list.
seem interesting enough, even know i tend to stay away from these types of stories.
I am interested in where this is going, the Spike x Gilda group has me very interested since there is SO few of this great pairing
. I wish i could have gotten more of a taste of the story, but it is only the first chapter so that is normal. I do want to see the next chapter to see what happens next and see how Spike's life is like now. (only hope he isn't SUUUPPPEEERRR depressing to be around lol)
please continue, i wish to read more
You've set something up, and it's pulling me in with a lot of curiosity. That's good that you can grab people. Only complaint, all to work with right now is the prologue, so good luck trying to flesh out the rest.
4169274 Thanks, that makes more sense for Spike to still be sad about their deaths. Anyway this is a promising start.
He sounds like the Dream Lord, Morpheus. That's a reference to Neil Gaiman's "The Sandman". The main character is really mopey... kinda like Spike.
If I had a nickel for every time this pic is used, I'd be rich.
bot bad but you need to give us a bit more info on what happened if this event will play such a big role
You have done the worst thing in this world friend. You have gotten my attention. This was an Idea I had on the back burner for a while now. I didn't feel I did it justice, let's see you at the plate.
This first chapter was great. It sets the mood for the whole story and it is dark, with just a splash of hope. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Sad, but continue, please.
Well Ladies and gents lets begin the feels coaster... keep your hands and hooves inside the coaster at all time.
I shall follow this story... along with some tissues.
This has a good (depressing) feel to it. Looking forward to the reactions and back story from when the princesses had to be there for Spike and how they're relationships are now.
Your off to a good start to what could be an amazing story. Just take your time, give us the details on the back story and don't be afraid to ask for help if you need it.
Also looking forward to see were the romance comes into play. Actually hoping there's some past and future love for Spike.
The past love doesn't have to be with, Twilight, but in my opinion that is the best one
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Good Job! Keep it up!
i like it. your first isn't bad cant wait to read chapter 2
Oh my Celestia I am so excited for where this story is going and I will be following the whole way there.
you write an interesting prologue im following this
Must updated must updatedMUST UPDATE
Shame, another dead account
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Agreed, that got heavy FAST, and I'd have liked to see how it turned out
Where's the updoot?
This is gold. Please start this back up please
Still favorite this tuckedaway at my heart strings
Dang really hoped it wasn't a dead account