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I couldn't really follow what exactly was happening, but you managed to pull me in with the remarkably descriptive way you showed just how good Luna was feeling. But then again, your word choice leaves much to be desired. You seemed to give out pretty much the same three sentences slightly restructured.

Overall, all I can say is, this is kind of hard to follow at times, and it can feel a bit repetitive, but damn, tentacle sex with Luna deserves a fav just to see where you'll take this.

Also, props for sensible tentacles. Typically these sorts of things tend to be littered with rape/inflation/impregnation/physically impossible stuff. I don't mind those things at all, but this manages to be more tasteful.

Although it's kinda wierd that she's recieving electric shocks. Unless I'm reading it wrong.


That's a kinky thought.

So much better than the typical rapefics that tentacle stories generally are. I found this to be pleasantly erotic, and significantly better than the typical clopfics on this site. Upvoting and favoriting this one. :pinkiehappy:

Has a fair number of typos and errors compared to Moaning Crown, but the quality as a whole is extremely good. A proofing pass or two and it will be on par with its predecessor for sure.

:moustache: Instant fav and thumbs up even if I still don't read it yet (busy at the moment).
:pinkiehappy: Can't wait to give it a good read.

:pinkiecrazy: I love you...

Anybody else want to bring their girlfriend to this tree? Or is it just me?

tentacle softcore porn... I LOVE IT :yay::twilightsmile::raritystarry::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::pinkiecrazy:

A pleasant read, though I wish there was more to it. Nonetheless, fantastic as it is. :moustache:

You sir deserve more recognition 'cos this 'fic was amazing! :pinkiehappy:
Like, fav and follow all the way :twilightsmile:

I really liked this one. So sweet and sensual, I was almost seduced by the tree from through the screen. I hope you write more stories about the strange tendril-bearing plants littered around Equestria. Thank you, sir. :pinkiecrazy:

This is a beautifully written, sensual story. I'm impressed by your use of metaphors, well done.

bravo love it :pinkiehappy:

I gotta say, the this is the probably the best Luna story I've read.:twilightblush:

I rather enjoyed this

Auuhhh, this is nice.
It had a pretentious massage feel to it that I rather enjoy, because I'm douchey and pretentious.
Seriously, though. I love it.
Well written. Beautiful story. Slow and steady. I was even seduced by the tree, i was more relaxed than i have been in years. Thanks.

I loved it. :heart: I love you. :pinkiecrazy:

A perfect sensual story.
Well done :twilightsmile:

I know what kind of tree it is. It's a pussy willow.

... I'll show myself out.

Anyways, fantastic fic.

Read for being the second highest rated clopfic featuring our dear princess of the night. Not disappointed in the least. I'd say this is the best clopfic featuring said princess on the site!

Thanks! More please! :twilightsmile:

While this was enjoyable, I was disappointed by the lack of Celestia's involvement... Why is this in the Princest group?

I liked it. Nice and naughty. I saw someone else comment on it being in the "Princest" area, and I must agree...unless there will be a chapter two where they try it together...? It also seems like she could need a second "treatment"...her tail hole only got probed a little :rainbowwild:

One thing: Luna doesn't have arms, only legs (unless she's an anthro in this story?)

What a charmingly romantic tree. Equestria needs more of these. :twilightsmile:

Sensual and gentle lovers for the win!

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