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And we wait
Hmm i thought Patches was a spinnoff of Explodey.
Son of a! Now I got to read that one too. Dammit! You sir, drive me to ponies.
1185862 You say that like its a bad thing
1185880 It's the best of all things!
right!!!.... i have been agreeing to much lately.
Wait what? I don`t even... .
A guy that explodes on occasion,some guy that doesn`t want his love to know that he`s not gay,a living bagpack and GOD.
That is the craziest turn of events i could have imagined....and i like it.
Waiting for the next crazy chapter
The sense has been restored. I like this turn of events. The more random there is, the better the chance for further expansion, which generally leads to really in-depth and long stories (not that this one hasn't already accomplished that much). Keep it up!
FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK! YSAID THAT THINGS WILL BE EXPLAINED IN THIS CHAPTER! You lied to me! Now my brain is even more fucked over! Y YOU NOW EXPLAIN! This chapter left me even more confused than it did yesterday! mrrbvdsiwebcfewocewbudwh bq2hioqsckj
1186523 No to sound like im whoring out my story, but read it and it will make more sense, do take in mind however I write a lot slower then TB so my story hasn't quite caught up to this point yet
Thank God the crossover is only 21k words. So help me if you were to link me to a few hundred thousand word story with the insane schedule I'm trying to make work......
So, every time Patches explodes, I think of the movie Big Trouble in Little China. Specifically this part.
If you haven't seen the movie, it's definitely worth a watch. Instant cult classic.
1187650 Oh my god... I never thought of that. Now I will always think of that.
crap! i have enough to do already!
1187295 I think I might look into that. All of this mind fucking has really taken a toll on my poor brain. Thanks! herpaderpaderpa there goes my brain... again
Erm....what the fuck?
1191032
you and me both dude.....
wot
1185824 me too.
Crossovers? WHY WHAT THE FUCK ftw -_-
*exasperated sigh*
Now I gotta go and read that now. Like I didn't have enough on my plate playing catch up with your story...
my brain hurts WHAT THE FUCK
I JUST READ -.-
explain please
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (freaks out)
so that's equestria's version of the dark brotherhood
Buck the what?
MY head... hurts...
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT! THIS STORY WAS GREAT BEFORE YOU CROSSED OVER WITH THESE RANDOM ASSHOLES! NOW IT'S JUST A FUCKMIND IN THE HOLEASS!!!
GRAAAHHHHH!!!!!
It better get better soon.
Yeah fuck you for doing this. I'm veeeeery fucking close to just throwing this shit out of the window.
This chapter confused the ever loving shit out of me the first time I read it. Rereading it I realize it's because the entire chain of events is messed up.
Wow, you put your religious beliefs in with the storyline? That was a gutsy move.
Remember that random 'insane' pony from when cabbage patch showed up. Remember how he said hail the king. Am I the only one who sees this?
Has anyone noticed how backpack its a TOTAL spin from Dora the explorer? Both the backpacks have TONS of random useless shit in them
And just like that u lost me.
The demon within ponies just appear
Randomly with hardly any real reason.
That's just bad writtibg all together.
I'm done. It was fun while it lasted.
I'd like to think im good at knowing where a story is going but this has just shot that idea in the plot (not that a poke in the plot is axbad thing)
It's been good so far but I'm bowing out.
OOooooohhhh . . . O.K.
3451775 Gutsy, and completely obnoxious.
4674746 have you read any fics written by full-on religious people? Seriously, some of the shit in those is just ridiculous. Like one on Fanfiction, I think it was called "Hero Rising". The main character is really religious, and when he gets to Equestria, he's given missions by God, and near the end of the story, he's given angel powers and walks around with a halo above his head.
A FUCKING HALO.
That story was so riddled with Bullshit that I had to stop reading. It made me sad too, because the storyline was pretty good, but it got WAY too religion heavy, so I had to stop reading it.
It's ok if writers want to voice their opinions about things through fics, but it pisses me off when the storyline is just about centred around the writer's religion. This one was made worse by the fact that the opening chapters didn't have a trace of religion in them, the main character (Crimson Blast) and Rainbow Dash got with each other, had lots of glorious smex, and Crimson got really overpowered, so shit was good. Then, about twenty chapters in, right when the story got rolling, BAM! In comes god, who then tells Crimson to do stuff, and so then everything that happens later in the story is "Done in the name of God".
Seriously, if you're gonna write a fic, leave Religion out of it.
Now i have to read his story!
what the fuck just happened??? IM SO DAMN CONFUSED!!!
I can see that the future will hold more explosions...
Sweet Luna, I hate regenerators...
I used to read this day in and day out, and for some reason I stopped and started ignoring it. But now I'm at it again and it's a little hard to continue where I left off last, but I think it's getting easier after the last 4 or so chapters.
Ps. I'm glad it's still getting g updated.
You know what makes a bad story? One that doesn't follow the rules of its own universe. Once you establish a setting and set in place a foundation to build your story, every time you violate that foundation irreparable cracks begin to form.
I can't help but feel we are reaching a critical number of these cracks. Now humanoid spirits not only speak but can undo the Icy Void at will. There are ponies that know everything about Terra. And Miles is falling apart after killing would be assassins. All for the sake of a crossover?
I truly enjoy learning more about what happened to Terradisia and how it relates to Equestria but all these loose plot lines are making this story more of a chore to get through. We can only hope some of them eventually get tied up rather than forgotten. (See Elements of Harmony bracelet)
OK. Lessons to take away from this:
Crossovers between authors while one of the fics are still being written are bad.
Protagonists full of bullshit meeting is worse. One story will always suffer from the dickwaving that ensues.
If something comes back after you kill it, kill it again, then while it's pulling itself back together, kill its friends. If all else fails, teleport them into the Sun. (Nobody can keep the equations in mind blah blah blah fuck that space works, aim straight up, and pick a magnitude)
THIS STORY IS FUCKING 1 MILLION+ WORDS LONG
AND YOU HAD TO CROSSOVER WITH ANOTHER... FUCKING RANDOM AUTHOR???!?!?!?!
HRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHH I JUST WANT TO RIP MY HEAD OUT RIGHT NOW...
still unsure of what just happened but whatever
Well that was stupid confusing and sucked
Everything has been awesome so far but this was a poorly written and confusing chapter. I have no idea what just happened here and taking a look at the comments it seems i am not alone. This chapter may need a rewrite to make more sense.
Это какая то психоделика!