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Nice chapter, My manly tears leaked slightly...
so, wait. does Miles have multiple soul disorder or something?
first?
AW FUCK
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epic chapter, cant wait for the next one
646138 Sry i was testing somthing but awsome ch i hope the next one is just as good and dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png
Nice back story.
I think we need to add another OC maybe later in future chapters? Just a suggestion so
don't get mad if don't like it
JUST REALISED
PIRATE OF THE CARRIBEAN DEAD MAN'S CHEST REFRENCE
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I wonder, in Terridissia is the saying the same? "If you go black you go deaf"
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646704 lol it would seem so my friend. That one time he freak out must have been wat caused it. The time he attacked that hydra.
Celestai and I drop to the ground as a deafening explosion erupts on part of the building. I look out the window to see the two giant metallic men pointing their arms at us, one smoking lightly.
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No not mental problems more like his magic did this.
649377 when did they reference that in this chapter?
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Is it just me, or does the grey haired guy remind me of The 1st Master and Thanatos, The 11th Doctor
racists must burn. I hate racists.
7371624 sacrifice sacrifice sacrifice all the racists into the valcano
JUST LET ME SLEEP DAMN YOU!!
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Aaaaaaaaand sexists, and almost anything ending in "ist".
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Yeah! Burn the Baptists!
"He has his magic is flaring at its peak," the "is" is unnecessary and breaks the flow.
"His usually smooth black lines and jagged and make sharp turns." the first "and" should be an "are"
"A WHILE, BUT EVENTUALLY LOSS." I think "Loss" should be "Lost"
"The two of them launch at each, colliding into each other and" the thread seems to be lost after the first "each" seems like the intent was "each other" but it got moved into the second clause...
"I could have lobbed her head off four times." again, "lobbed" should be "lopped"
"one of the militarizes on site orphanages."
Hey I'm new here and I'm black and I hope we can be friends