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inb4 morons... rly great work on this man... i c u churn em out pretty fast too
only one problem im finding, but its a personal one... i read rly fast...
so 3000-4000 words is quick work for me...
352698.......Oh my gosh i read fast too......
Great work as usual!
man tear for the last part
352698 me to a 12,000 word in medium for me
So...who the fuck is Barbra?
Uh... I'm assuming you think the Latin name, "Miles", is pronounced like the English name, "Miles". It is not. It is pronounced like "Mee-less". "Mee-lee wee-lee" sounds so much worse than "Spikey wikey".
:)
Let's all be friends yaaaaay
How the hell story this crappy has so much chapters and likes?
352698 20,000 takes me about 45-1 hr minutes to read.
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Why would you have read up to chapter 12 if you still think it's a crappy story this far in?
Clearly most people don't agree with you, if it "has so much chapters and likes".
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Barbra is God.
So much win! I have to stop or my head will asplode!
Either that or I gots chores...
199 chapters left....shit.
I DON'T HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO READ THIS MUCH IN ONE DAY!
*favorites*
2848926 takes me twenty minutes.
3942260 Pretty sure it's only been an hour and I've gotten through twelve chapters so far...
3093628 and 200 PAGES OF WiN!!!11!1!!!1!1!1!11!!1!
I was starting to hate storm cloud, but at the end of the chapter I liked him.
The end on that chapter made me tear up. THOSE FEELS MAN!
Great way to make new friends.
1841812 Barbra is love, Barbara is life
Fuck yeah, Pinkie Pie.
Bam, Friend zoned!
Twilight got shot down at the end there.
firstly pinkie you're amazing for what you said. secondly twilight just got friendzoned. and honestly I can see luna x miles already with twilight x storm
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"Friends
with benefits, that will snuggle by the fire while I caress your yoked bod sensually."Is what she meant to say.
I admire the dedication put into this work. However, half-assed segues into shitfic, prepubescent tear-jerkers I do not enjoy at all. 'Let's re-introduce ourselves after crying like little girls despite two of us being soldiers and one of us being an asshole!' Fucking...
I was okay with ignoring a few issues. Celestial calendar? Fine, whatever. Not like anyone really cares anyway how Miles came to the realization of his new circumstances. Not like there was a logical reason why he got sent to the future anyway. The poor dialogue during breakfast? Okay, fuck it. Might as well wait until everyone's present so he can explain himself... Oh, wait, another distraction. How fucking
annoyingconvenient! Twilight is sexually flustered over a little skin? Well... no, actually, that's not even plausible because everyone's naked around her, and Miles isn't even a part of her species! I mean, not that there's anything wrong with that. I just find shitty high school romance tension in general upsetting.Still, I was more than all right with ignoring the general inconsistency, if it wasn't for the puerile nature of the entire thing.
7968770 That's the thing that irritated me at the very beginning. Okay, he's an orphan, practically an outcast, being forced to join the military, and all of a sudden these random other cadets are his friends after knowing Miles for less than a day. Maybe THAT'S why your friendships were ending in failure, Miles. You never took the time to actually get to know them before suddenly being thrown three thousand years into the future.
Sorry, tallest, but I don't think I'm finishing this one. Not only is it hard to read at times, but its kind of going all over the place. And the poorly executed dialog makes matters even worse, I'm afraid.
5893517 Tease her, based Ponk! TEASE HER! Shipping for the shipping god!
Well, you could just ask a certain cyan unicorn. I bet she'll feel pretty ecstatic about the whole situation.
Oh that's savage.lh3.googleusercontent.com/-RuF08MQi_kc/Wdm4uoihYuI/AAAAAAAAA6c/qVg6eNR9hPcD_HuAQ2yeDYe98jQJwo3ywCJoC/w530-h311-n-rw/WutDafuq.png
Would you like some benefits along with that too?
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This feels so fucking out of place. I would get it if this was done later, but shouldn’t they oh i don’t know.... try to take the guy into a nice safe spot! Or at least the hospital! Then the author can talk about this anime harem trope later? The guy is having internal bleeding for Pete’s sake. I can see why there’s 200 dislikes... and this story might deteriore a bit more as I read this along. Hmmm... The first six chapters are fine, but when the pony parts are placed it feels like they don’t belong. I feel like the author should have put in more time on the past a lot more before writing the part of the mlp stuff in. I think it would have made the reading a lot easier to digest. Is there an actual rule that you must write ponies within the 6th chapter? Man, that seems a bit constricting.
I sense major tucking heresy.
I can't express how nice it is to finally after skimming through dozens of stories find a long story that I haven't read that isn't a herd, an overwhelming smut story and has had relatively realistic interactions so far I know I'm commenting on something from years ago but it's genuinely been very good so far