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Wow, that map... Uhmm.. No wait, let's go away from that.
Good chapter
Big fight between celestia and miles is coming
Awesome, can't wait for the next chapter :P
Can't wait to see what happens next!
The Mare Destroyer 6000 eh? I agree, an impressive pick.
Celestia employing assassins? Wow, she is desperate.
I smell a possible plot twist
Something tells me when miles got told that he felt kinda like this
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I've got a feeling the trap's going to be worse than Miles anticipates.
Miles should go to that Australia
...ok then.
also, i did a little research. congradulations. unless i missed a story (and it's fully possible), you have th' second-highest chapter count on FimFiction, second only to My Little Caboose: Blue is Magic, at 201.
I'm glad Luna told off Celestia.
celestia needs to be bitch slapped and i mean shit miles is already technically king so he could just hold that over her head
that chapter was... interesting...to say the least. waking up storm was hilarious by the way.
1225856 well. FoE is 200 something chapters I think (the original)
1231025 you're thinking words. th' original Fo:E has exactly 45 official chapters, an epilouge, and an afterwords.
also, th' original Fo:E isn't on FimFiction. i know, Kkat has an account here, i've talked to her, and she's shattered my dreams.
1225193 I know I'm fucked up!
nicely done
NOOOOOO ENGLAND!
Mexico is connected to florida
Fuck you over-protective-Celestia
1226826 He could, but I really doubt that doing so would improve his relationship status with her, or her acceptance of Luna and Mile's status as husband and wife. It's kind of like the martyrdom mentality, sure you can do it, but it will only rally Celestia's rebellion against them. For Mile, it's a last resort tactic or weapon, not to be used unless all other options have been exhausted, because doing so will likely result in either a permanent enmity with Celestia, or she'll harbor bad feelings against him for a long, long time. And we've seen how easily she forgives him *sarcasm* for the death of her father and mother. Even now she harbors ... less than charitable feelings for our human protagonist. So yeah, that's my take on Miles being King and using it on Celestia.
Wait, wait ,wait! Soooo let me get this straight... Luna is crying because she thinks, what she told Celestia was unjust?... DAMN HELL LUNA GROW A BACKBONE!!!
I mean really what the fawk?! So when Luna goes renegade as Nightmare Moon she gets punished and send to the moon by Celestia for a thousend years imprisionment, but when Celestia threatens to kill Luna's lover, goes paranoid somewhat because she fears to lose her sister truly thinking she might have gone nuts again, Luna actually believes that Celestia does NOT even deserve to have at least a communicative punishment, despite the fact that Celestia was really wrong this time?... This story could use a Navarone, he would verbally serve and argumentatively overwhelm Celestia, making her out to be the very vallian Nightmare Moon once was...
"There were no secrets between the Spartans and the Citizens of Terradisia."
... what about the spartan training? wasn't that a secret?
it looks like someone made that map in art class...
1231025 Fallout Equestria? It's about 45 chapters unless you mean something else.
I think I know what would have started that massive war. Tony Abbott and his big mouth all-out blaming Russia for MH-17. I know many people think that they did it, but Tony is pissing off the leaders of a VERY powerful nation. Yay! Australia's gonna get nuked!
3640805 no that's classified. Big (small) difference.
Hmm...
There are a few contradictions in this story, particularly the Spartan training being secret, but then in this chapter the Spartans not keeping secrets AT ALL from Terradisian citizens. However, in the name of a rather good story, I can ignore the contradictions.
The one thing I'm having difficulty ignoring is the absolutely atrocious editing. You say you have an editor, but there are typos all over the place, the wrong (there, their and they're), (were, where) etc. The worst one however is the apostrophes of possession. There are absolutely countless instances of incorrect use of apostrophes...
There are many, many instances where an apostrophe of possession shouldn't be used, but has been used. For example, when you are using a plural, you will write "the pony's played in the park" instead of "the ponies played in the park"...
I mean, this is actually a really good story. It's just really difficult to get past the spelling and grammar issues.
It's easily fixable, thankfully. I was trying to read another story the other day, and got halfway down the first chapter before I gave up. Their grammar was much worse than yours, and their story had absolutely no depth at all. Within half a chapter, the story went from three or four people in a room (with no character description or anything, to a purge like event (rapture) and then the 'protagonist' being given a choice to go to whatever world he wished. Said protagonist had no character depth either...
Your pace is rather good, and the story itself is very deep. I just think you may need to rein in your editor a little, because they're not doing their job (see that? correct they're and their) all that well.
If you would like a second editing pass I would be more than happy to help, but you'll likely get inundated with corrections, because there are a LOT of them that might need to be made.
"Hey Celestia? In the words of Miles; Go Un-fuck yourself."
"Bitch."
So the giant holes in the map are from nuclear war. What is the giant black spot in Asia?
7628411 most likely land that hasn't been charted by the ponies
7735278 no, I think it might be griffin territories
the only major difference in the map is that BRITAIN IS MISSING!! BRING IT BACK!!
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It rather looks like erosion and gradual flood rather than drift. Something had hit NA, but in general this looks like result of partial loss of polar caps. Vulcanic activity as well.. large flat islands missing - Britain, Japan, some in caribbean. Madagaskar changed shape. Small groups missing as well, while it looks like Bali became a cancer
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also your not giving volcanoes and other surface land making Peices of nature
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2 inches it not a tenth of a mile.
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Let me dumb it down
MAGIC HAPPENED
I don't know if someone already asked or did it but could you add translations at the end of each chapter when someone speaks another language? Please?
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There is already a blog post for latin translations
Brony on!
Communism?
Wtf happened to america shit half gone lmao