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If there's anything I can compliment you on it's the speed at which you pump out relatively good chapters. Still, many mistakes get through, but no other writer that I've seen can do this amount of work so fast. So, uh... have a moustache
I shook my head when I saw that this had updated. Two chapters roughly 12 hours apart, it's just insane! I love it yes, and I hope you keep it up. But still, I'm worried that you'll exhaust yourself. Don't wear yourself out man.
so... many... chapter! it is truly epic!
nice, i face palmed at the last part to.
Gahh! why you have to seperate Miles and Luna
His so fluffy! Man I love his reaction!
Why can't he knock? And Miles retakes the awkward sex moment lead.
Why does the luna romance have to end? why must good things stop sad faic
538058 HA! Just try and stop me!
Sooo is it really the end of Miles' and Luna's relationship?
540097 .... who are you asking?
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Anyone who knows?
540193 sweet! OK, who knows?
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Y-you?
Awwwwwkkkkwaaaaarrrrrrd...
Also, I love how nonchalant Miles is after fighting. "So, how'd it go?" "Eh, you know... Didn't even get hurt. No big deal."
What he's really thinking... "I'm too much of a badass to give a fuck."
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I think he's getting used to having to deal with the assorted bullshit that happens on a semi-daily basis.
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YEAH!! (Now I want that roided out white pegasus as an icon)
is this really the end of Miles and Luna? i really hope not
YOU BETTER FIX MILES OR ELSE and make him immortal so he can spend some god damn romantic time with Luna.
also F-Flut-FLUTTERSHY!?!? I THOUGHT YOU WERE MINE T____T
Get a wolf LIKE A BOSS.
Break up with Luna LIKE A BOSS
Walk in on sex LIKE A BOSS
Be a badass LIKE A BOSS
Kill some snakes LIKE A BOSS
I am so happy I spent my points to have miles walk in on twilight and fluttershy so worth it
LOL dat big mac
DAT scene with Mac and shy
My god, can't. Remove. From. Mind.
I know it was meant as more of a joke than being serious, but I always hate it when people paint Fluttershy as an OOC, assertive, etc. pony when she's having sex. It just bugs me to no end because nopony would act like that during sex if a very close friend walked in on you, especially if that person/pony didn't know about the couple and had no warning, double especially when it's Fluttershy. Fluttershy would probably be the person BEING dominated during sex, not the dominator (I don't know what the correct term would be).
Same kinda thing with Rarity being an OOC tough, ultimate-fighter type, but that's for later in the story.
2752290 I understand your sentiment about that and respect it, but when I was approaching this I had a different mindset. I took the approach of Fluttershy being shy around people she's not familiar with. When she's with people she knows, she opens up a bit more. In this case, Big Mac would be the person she's the closest with, as you already know why. And for the dominatrix thing, I figured it to be something she find exotic to do, being the one who is usually being bossed around. That's how I approached it, if you don't like it, that's fine. You are entitled to your opinion and I respect that.
Brony on!
Celestia is pissing me off now, but I understand where she's coming from. This is just heartbreaking, to say the least.
That's ok, though. Fluttershy yelling at Big Mac like that, as well as the fact of how many times Miles has walked in on couples, made it better.
Also, I should seriously consider not reading the comments for this story from now on. there are way too many spoilers!
Angel is traumatizide for life now. LOL!!
544032 I was excited to sing that whole thing but then you just had to put breaking up with Luna on there!
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well celestia should just suck a big fat slimey cold bag of cocks
walking in on mac and flutters. if they weren't both so shy i'd have sat and watched.
7286065 Thank you very much i agree with you 100%
No way... He wasn't knocked out...
Who are you author you can't be the same no one passed out in a coma this chapter wheres the real author
You ship Flutters and Big Mac?
Angel Bunny has been traumatized. Wow.
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Mind blown.
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Hell has frozen over....
I believe it is "decent"
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Fluttershy is scary when she is not scared.......
I suddenly like Fluttershy a lot less... ;D
But in all seriousness... they're all kinda fucked up. I mean, I don't know what Rainbow's and Rarity's damage is, yet, but they're a lot less heroic and a lot more like people. Maybe a bit too much, to be honest. They really seem a lot more "Miles' friends" than they do "Element Bearers" - and I'm thinkin' it has something to do with how the original Elements are based on 'em...
It really seems as though for the past millenia, the Bearers (I assume there's been more than one group) have been, essentially, molded into Miles' friends, over and over.
ахах я так полагаю что сцена с Биг Маком и Флаттершай запомнилась всем в основном и как то эпизод со змеями уже не так читался потому что этот образ ранее с трудом мог выйти из головы! Вы думаете я извращенец да? Не, я думаю все же Автору удалось создать интересный момент в этой главе который вроде как не причем оказывается! Эппл Блум вообще не терялась!
Gosh dang it, I've had enough of this bullshit. I wanted a long story to read that ISNT filled with porn every other chapter, it's fucking disgusting. I'm out. I REALLY liked the character relationships, the basic idea behind the story and all that, but THIS is just too much.