Page generated in 0.061 seconds
Total duration
1,076 users online
2,060,860 hits today, 2,561,572 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Bueno!
A Little bit of Gabriel Iglesias humor at the begging was priceless.
Another great chapter.
Yay, Miles is awake! And already kicking ass again!
Guess the magic cat is really out of the bag now though...
i have to admit this is a really great story/plot line, i hope this carries on for ages to come!!!
448896 Well... let me just say this. This isn't really an arc. It is but compared to the next one... yeah. Next arc is my bread and butter arc. Also, I plan on making this a very long story.
I am really liking that Latin more n'more as I hear it. Read it. Whatever. . . >.> I've actually got that phrase memorized and used it as a toast last night when drinkin' some beers.
448998 Wow, really... alrighty then. Deverto pulvis et salutant mortuus.
cheers
lets just hope celestia doesn't find out aboubt him... (i am hopeing she does)
also...
BRING ME ALL YOUR VIRGINS!! (priceless)
448905 very nice to hear also bread and butter arc? mind explaining please? ty
449373 Like... it was the idea that made me write this. It's the most developed and will probably be the longest arc. It's going to be a huge thrill ride for sure and I can't wait to get to it, but will have to to finish this little arc first.
449381 ah fair enough sorry not everything clicks for me, blame my aspergers, anyway, hope the next chapter comes out soon
449436 aspergers ?
449454 mental problem, missig a bit of my brain and i have other....problems of my own, such as social problems or unable to think straight for a small amount of time, rather annoying but its normal, also it means some things i find hard are easy for others and vice versa please dont feel bad, its annoying when people pity me
449489 Ah, thanks for the explanation.
I warned that damn goat to wait for my old ass
"Pinkie? Since when do you work here?"
"I dunno? What would you like?" O...K...
I lol'ed at that part
448905 GOOD this is the third best story I have read out of 500. No offense My first and second are: First: My Second Life by Coal Buck ; Second: My Better Life by Sharky White; Third Man of War by tallestbrony.
Why doesn't miles just open the weapon chest with his magic get his rifle then fuck Gary's shit up
"Twilight..."
"Yes Storm..."
"BRING ME ALL YOUR VIRGINS!"
I love it!
F******* GARY STU!
..is that some sort of metaphor or something?
laughed my ass off keep up the good work
1003565 minotaur said that last line.
what da fakku?
you come in a drug store and they don't sell you the condoms you want, they fucking measure you?
i like this story alright, but this was the dumbest thing i've read EVER.
missing dot
that part is bad, too. Suddenly, a minotaur in chainmail with greatsword in the middle of the bloody Pony kingdom, demanding virgins and using bloody healing magic. totally destroys the flow of the story. and killing him. seriously? then why not just kill the dragons, too? maybe ask Miles to go and cut the other Storm open?
This seems fitting.
...
YOUR WORLD WILL BURN!
YOUR VIRGINS WILL ME MINE!!!
at first i thought it was a dream gone nightmare...
Then i was like
troll.me/images/jackie-chan-whut/da-fuq.jpg
You just gained so much respect from me for the Gabriel Iglesias reference.
Ok, I haven't read past when he goes into ponyville pharmaceutical. Im guessing twilight will be in their and see him.buying the condoms. He'll either try to play it cool or he'll act like ESC.
Damnit...
Wut...
Hold up wait a minute this wasen't a dream!?!?!?!!?!?! Damn Storm really thinking ahead. I really thought this was just going to be a gag and it was all a dream. I was wrong. Really funny though.
~ Techsol
Mr. e-glasias with an I
Dis was da most random ass chapter I have read in a long time... Good job....
lost it here
Yeah. This where I stop. With Miles being a Gary Stu now and that god awful scene with the pharmacy. Seriously, what was up with that? That is not how people that work in a pharmacy act. They would have no customers if they did. Not to mention that you seem to think it's funny to have them be whores. I hope that wasn't a Gabriel Iglesias reference because the only thing it had to do with that set was the stereotypical black chick attitude. Bleh. Another thing. What was up with that Minotaur? The dude came out of nowhere and ruined what flow and mood the story had. If you wanted to include your DnD character why not give him some badass role that actually furthers the story instead of just tossing him in there out of nowhere and having him get killed by Miles. Such a throwaway plot device. There are many more problems with characterization throughout this story so far, but seeing as how I'm on chapter 33 out of 180+ chapters I don't see a point. I hope this story got better as it goes along' but I can't find it in me to bother anymore. I wish you luck with the story and hope you have fun with it.
~Have a good one.
I... uh.... what the... eehhh...
I DON'T EVEN!!!!
This was too much of mindfuck to me, I'm not sure what you were on when writing this but holy shit it must've been fun!
Who in the actual fuck would be allowed to run a pharmacy like that?
You need to check my size before you can sell me condoms? Sign a roster? Offer me sex?
I would have that place shut down so fast their heads would spin and pop off.
Way to make the only black like ponies the most hardcore incompetent obnoxious black stereotypes by the way.
449454 I Really, really don't want to say this, but I need to get it off of my chest.
Asperger's, at least, in my possible mispronunciation, sounds like ass burgers.
Not trying to be degrading or anything to people with it; I Just find that it sounds like Ass Burgers.
Loved the Gabriel Iglesias reference through the pharmacy
3024835
Read my mind...
Pretty much my reaction...
imageclup.com/cata.php?id=3
For a second I thought he was just going to say "It's Raping Time!"
3937574 OK, so I wasn't the only one confused by the random minotaur and him yelling "BRING ME ALL YOUR VIRGINS! "
Beginning of Drug Store scene: [Link]
4202684 ........magic
*Reads first and second line* Oooooo~~~
*reads last line* da fuq?
*reads next line* ooooh
Guys this sucks my dick lost his job would anyone know of any openings he could fill sorry I just thought about that after the pharmacy scene