I man teared writing this. Don't look at me like that! If you teared up, sniffled, or any other emotion, thumbs up. If you don't have a soul, thumbs down.

Do I post my OC here?

2139620 No, I have a blog for it....HERE!

Pinkie and her hax...

Psst! LM has almost returned...

2139642 FINALLY! I thought you forgot or something.

2139656 Lol just took a small(< that's a lie) hiatus but I'm going to re-edit the previous chapters and continue onward tomorrow.

2139663 Glad to hear it. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

Brony on!

2139668 Keep it Pony man. (Yes that's mine lol no more stealing)

Ok, that hit harder than I thought it would. I.......I just wasnt prepared.

2139675 I like.

I swear, this is different from what I edited but alright I guess.

2139717 Um.... noooo. This is what you last edited and I copy and pasted. Unless.... inception.

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The only thing I saw that was reverted is the punctuation in dialog.

2139754 Oh, strange.

THE VOID WILL BILL BE THERE FOR YOU, IT'S ALWAYS THERE FOR YOU.

bill?

I whisper to her as I wrap my arms around her, being sure to keep my arms as far from her as possible.

*hands

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I swear man...if you drop a feels bomb within the next chapter I don't what I will do.

Probably clutch my dead heart and throw my iPod at a wall

it has begun!!

Ha, I see what you did there with rainbow.... I need to write a lot faster and attempt to survive the zombie apocalypse less.....

So that's beginning of the end. Great chapter, good that Shadow still got home but Luna will be a mess when she hears it.

FUCK! got my eyes all watery

Welp... Time to go cry in the corner.

...that's gotta suck.

really badly.

congratulations really... This is the second story to which I ever cried to. I really actually shed manly tears.

I just want to tell you that you are a great writer and that it takes A LOT to make me cry for a story. The only other one that accomplished that was that one fic where Twilight is old and Celestia watches her die in her bed.

and I'm still waiting for those fucking guys.

Mfw reading this chapter
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and listening to this song (which is quite suitable for it):

2139610 Can I do both? I have a sniffle but I have no soul. Dilemmas, dilemmas...

2142459 weeeelll.... OK, you can do both. But only this once.

well so far this story as made a feels theme park for me and the only thing i have to say....THIS IS FUCKING AMAZEING

2143642 Some choices are limited. That one only had a choice of the main six..... I set that so the story can be SOOOOOO LOOOOOOOONG!

Brony on!

2148270 lol, if they decided to tell her, yes.

2152310 Story as in what's left or as in the arc? The arc is about to end and there are three more to go. Enjoy.

3 days. FUCK YA! I read the entire story in 3-ish days! I AM GOD!

2153528 I DID IT IN TWO!

K sleeeeeeeeep time.....

2153809
Well in hours i did it in about 12. But over 3 days

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I almost didn't read it because of the chapter's name. Son of a bitch.

Dude :'( I just re-read the entire story and it hit worst then the first time. Right in the feel damnit I am shedding manky tears eight hours before I present my portfolio to work at a hospital in an interview javascript:smilie(''); the feels they hurt so bad. Its an amazing story please find a way to save mine and all of your followers hearts because the feel man they are hurting. As always love the work but jeeze even my little dashie did not hurt the feels like this and it's famous for being a ultra sad feels magnet. Keep up the good work and update soon please

2165915 Well I'm glad someone enjoyed it.

2165918*scoff* who hasn't enjoyed it?!

If it wasn't for the A/Ns I would be throwing my phone across the room in total rage mode…

2139610 Nothing like impending death to impact friends and family, eh? While I didn't cry, I will admit to being moved emotionally.

NOOOOOO I know there's still like 16 chapters and its not done yet but still WHY YOU MAKE ME SAD FACE :(

2139610 I got a mental sickness which makes me unable to feel negative emotions.

FEEEEEEEEELS!

Right in the feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel man

I dont feel emotion whatsoever when reading but after the story my brain finds the worst and best days of the characters and puts me through their emotions. I dont know why and I cant explain it just... happens but yeah this is gonna suck when im finished

OHHHHHHH CRAP man AHHHHHHHH!!! this gets me like the ending of my little Dashie did, EXCEPT EVEN MOAR!
Even in ur final hours u can feel more peace then u have in ur entire life. Life is great knowing that it will always get better, and when it does u stop to say one last "thank you" for being given a life worth living from the Lord.
AWWW MAN WHAT HATH U DONE 2 ME.I NEED SOMETHING SILLY STAT!!!!!!! AHHH THE PAIN!!!
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ahhh thats better

I'm not sad, there are 32 chapters left, that means everything Will turn put fine. ..
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2165918
Although I love the fact that you use Latin extensively in this story, I think you may be using the wrong pronunciation. When Celestia tried to say pacem in one chapter, she said it sounded like possum (also a Latin word by the way) which is incorrect pronunciation. Please research Latin pronunciation so that this mistake isn't made again. Also please please PLEASE use commas and apostrophes correctly. Please.

On a side note, if Miles's name is Latin it would be pronounced like me-less not like the measurement miles. And you should really start proofreading your chapters also. I see way too many mistakes. But I love the story. Looking forward to finally reaching ch. 202.

Brony on!

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When one language is unfamiliar, connections aren't developed to recreate the word effectively, thus an incorrect pronunciation. If she had said it correct the first time she heard it, that would be far moire unrealistic.

TB how the hell do you manage? I was at a funeral for my grandpa today fellt nothing, Now I read this and cry like a baby

2139610 Well, I was sad but I didn't cry since there are still 50 chapters and another arc left. If I read this when this came out, I'd cry though.