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Interesting... very interesting, hehehe, nicely done man
Hahaha, let's see how that battle goes...
Keep it up!
money don't grows on trees XD
And here we are, walking towards the peak of turmoil on the world.
Tho I have to say I'm more than worried about that vision Mile's son had...
Hmm... well, can't wait for the next chapter!
7150044 what did it for me was 1 it started "midway" and you had to read 10 chapters before any info became relevant
2 some of the ideas in my mind seems stupid or counterproductive," oh there is my parents killers and reason why i hate humans never seen him before"
3 it got realy slow moving fast. yeah things happen but because of 1 it dosent make sense or straight out feels irelevant exept for that chapter.
Hmm... I think you should do those theoretical games as like a side story. Because i enjoyed reading those! I like strategy
I've got to go make some popcorn.
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7150527 Hmm... I might do that... *cough cough join the man of war group cough cough*
Brony on!
7150628 how do I join the group lol.
7150678 Mowverse Group
7150791 Cheers! I still dont know why you want me to join it... *cough cought* *wink wink*
I am ABOVE such petty things as waiting rooms!
Given how much of this conflict is based on secrecy and machinations of the enemy in the background, I wonder how much resources would be needed to bring such behaviour into open knowledge in such a way that it doesnt look like a set up in return.
So far Miles is so restrained. If he had his bots creating war gear instead of rebuilding the underground cities, the bots would outnumber the global population to such an extent he could hold every induvidual personally if required.
Miles vs. Celestia
Bout of the century!
4:1 in Miles' favor! Taking all bets!
7151189 Miles. sorry to ol' sunbutt but im for the Spartans anyday.
7151189 I bet forty-five golden trumps on Miles
Well, I stuck with this story for 173 chapters, and I actually liked it. Sadly, however, with how the story is now going I find myself uninterested in it now. If what happens had happened sooner in the story, I would be fine, but this was just too late game for me to agree with. I wish you continued success and fame in this endeavor, but I must part ways here.
7151189
Miles, but author might see and change to celestia for spite, so celestia, but miles is better, AH DAMNIT WHY YOU DO THIS TO MY MIND
7151189 20 bucks on Luna
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at the time he wasn't that powerful i don't think
7186504
It's a fanfic, and a very long one at that. This isn't a well polished novel, more like a rough draft
The amount of time and effort it takes to put out a story this long and this complex is insane. If he also went back and proofread all his spelling, grammar, and slight plot inconsistencies (of which there are many), it would take three times as long. You're just gonna have to put up with that stuff.
I think the humor is all right. This is an MLP fanfic after all, you need comic relief. It also gives Miles a personality, rather than making him just a bloodthirsty hardfaced soldier.
The thing I love most about this fic is the whole power fantasy of a human coming to Equestria who, rather than being usless, is actually insanely powerful, skilled, and intelligent. A perfect representative for the human race.
7194149 You saying that made me really happy... then really sad. Mainly because I am going back to proofread all of the story... and have been for awhile now...
Brony on!
Well shit.... Cliffhanger again.
7223361 MSL is one of the stories that inspired me to write. Actually, Coal Buck helped me a little when I was first getting started.
Brony on!
7271313 It is not a cross over.
Brony on!
7014702 Kek.
I tip my hat to you sir. I haven't even started the story yet, but I just LOOKED at the word count and thought "Sweet baby Je-Sus, this man is dedicated!"
7312860 Turn to the earth and salute the dead. I have a blog post wit b all of the translations. I'd link it right now, but my phone won't let me right now.
Brony on!
7334372 It's no longer on the site. The writer took it down. Sorry.
Brony on!
In truth if miles were to pull the food dispensers, the griffons would starve before they could make it to Equestria's border, they would be too weak to continue tge fight. In that same notion, why are thr unfamiliar not providing the griffons food.
Rrguarding celestias power, she could literally blot out the sun, or even increase the heat output, 1000× fold in one section, she could be the praverbial kid using a magnifying glass to burn ants. Or in this case anyone who stands against her, luna, miles and Equestria.
7194425 you are a awesome writer bro. And i love your story, just finished it to this point just now and man the complexity is ridiculous!! I'd never be able to make a plot like that.
7355013 Thank you for the support,
Brony on!
7151189 Thirty coin on the fight getting called off before the decider. Ten on Miles
7334372 it's available in Gdoc, it's linked from a blog post about the cancellation, in all its incomplete glory.
This story is getting bland.
I just start reading your story and I have just gotten to the part about the pharmacy. But the reference to Gabriel Iglesias joke about the Bell and the two girls behind the counter is some of the top notch, writing I have seen the while.
Just finished my second read through, and did you make some changes, or is my memory that bad?
7380809 There have been some editorial changes, but plot point wise, it is the same.
Brony on!
7381534 that is what I was talking about, it feels nicer to read.
I like it, nice job
7404107 I BEAT YOUR RECORD 149 IN A NIGHT.
God I need a social life. (I finished 49 the next day by noon. Making me stay up a consecutive 21 hours.) Damnit Author
7413581 I apologize for nothing!
Brony on!
7414064 hey man I wasn't saying that was bad.
7449046 That's as best as I could translate a good day to die in my prior knowledge of latin
when do we get the next chapter I'm dying to keep reading this
7463811 Soon. I'm about halfway through it. You'll probably see it in the next few days. And about a week or two for the chapter after that.
Brony on!
7464109 awesomesauce this story has been awesome from the get go hope theres some juicy plot twist but this story is amazing keep pumping out chapters
7486923 Mm needs work but I got the gist of it :P About halfway through it becomes gibberish though...