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I'm sorry... what? This chapter was somewhat confusing, but I'll survive without an explanation.
Hamm I salute you. You died a heroes death protecting Twilight.
How did this come about? Soul eaters? Are they possessed?
...soul energy built up overtime, making them this, but one survives w/o going nuts because he was already severely underpowered.
nice fight scenes.
...awesome.
You soul sucking bastards! You knocked out Dust Devil's gum! You'll pay dearly for that! *Shakes fist*
Wow, very nice chapter! Perfect way to end a day, reading this great chapter! Brony on, man!
Griffin the griffin updates, Man of War updates, and I finally slip out of my writing slump. Could this day get better?
No major errors but the child being reduced to ash was saddening. I'm glad you didn't make that a major focal point of depression though.
With all the written effects it felt like I was reading a picture-less copy of Judge Dredd.
I actually have a question for the generality of this story. If there were a colony of living humans at the last city in Mile's journey and they denounced him. Proclaiming themselves the true terradisian inheritors what would happen? Who would Celestia side with, stay out of it possibly? Would Mile's step down and cede himself to them? Would the pony terradisians still be in that union?
-Sturrn
1447748 That's an interesting question that I can't answer. Ask again after New Garnet. Then you will have your answer.
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I figured you wouldn't answer but it was worth asking. Can't have the comments becoming a spoiler-ridden den of villainy.
I'll copy down the question and bide my time, your story is one of the few that really puts my mind into action with logical workings.
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^This is what I imagined.
1448354 Basically. DOS THE POINTS FOR THE AWESOME PIC!
This...Chapter...is...AWESOME!!! although Aere,Theimara,Hamm strung and Dust Devil (awesome way to die by the way) died .
Also i must say that True Will is somewhat overpowered
I wonder what makes True Wills` and Camos` swords so special.
And ...seriously ,like Camo i didn`t think Fluttershy would even hit anywhere near one of Miles` percecutors ...but she did it
That made me laugh so hard
I`m waiting for your next awesome chapter (Can`t comment for a while cause im moving and have no internet but i will still read through my phone)
Camo Flash OUT!!!
Damn bro. AWESOME Chapter! I really liked the part with the kid. Depressing as fuck! Can't wait to see what happens next!
1448709 You forgot Matrix
1447748 damn wish I was in this story couldent be more epic. The reason they need soul is because their soul slowly deteriorated over the years and the children who have weaker souls don't survive
Finally done with the move, still have to unpack, but at least I can read some stories now.
Honestly, I can picture Fluttershy as a sniper. I have no idea why. I suppose it has to do with the intimacy of watching a target and actually getting a good look at them before pulling the trigger that seems to mesh with her character.
Maybe once you've killed another few rounds of OCs I'll throw one in.
1448097 GOD DAMN YOU TB!!! YOU USED THE LOTR LINE "that still only counts as one" FROM LOTR 3, RETURN OF THE KING!!!!!!!
1447748 Do you recommend Griffin the Griffin?
I found an error
"Come and get it." I growl I try to sit up.... is... is that gas?
KRA-BOOM
That entire thing is an error it shouldn't be there because Dust Devil was an awesome OC. Best one in the group in my opinion
Was there a LOTR reference in there?
(Lord of the rings reference)
this is full of all sorts of references isnt it?
I think that the blue people had their souls replaced by the ones from the Magic blue grenades.
Flutter shy is going to be in faze
2923083 HELL. YES! And its sequel falling feathers
Snipershy!
Seventeen, I suppose, not seventy ( looks like a real number). 70% miscarriages means end of race.
"ain't" is spelled with apostrophe.