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Umm... welll.... okay, I've got nothing, this is by far the most confusing (the potion part) and slightly creepy chapter I have EVER read ... Well done TB you have outdone yourself
Never seen such a long fic in my life... 702k+ words is a real jaw dropper for me.
How the hell have you written this?
2393608 Well, you get some ply wood, some 3 and one quarter nails, three people of equal intelligence, some burritos, a few free hours and Nixon then let it sit at Walmart all night long.
Give it a try some time.
Brony on!
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Did the same thing, only I used a chicken as a binding agent and a few plates of steel.
Got to 123k+. Really startling seeing fics this long, honestly. Guess it just goes to show how creative the authoring mind can be.
Pretty fucking intimidating, too. Like staring down Everest from the foot of the mountain...
2393645 Yeah, but you never get to the top without taking the first step. And when you get there...
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You feel like you're on top of the world. Aye, I know the feeling, but the top of my mountain is still far out of reach.
I hope I'll reach the top of that Everest eventually, though. I have ideas, but I can never time their submission right... they're either buried under a flood of stories, they get approved really early in the morning, or they just don't attract a lot of viewers. But when they're submitted correctly, I usually forget a cover image anyway.
I'll make it. Someday. I just want that day to come soon...
2393678 My advise to you, don't write because you want people to read. Write because you want to read what you wrote. I write my story because I love this story. I want to take it all the way and see it through the end. People will read passion.
Brony on!
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I live by that philosophy, trust me. Just, when I see all the fics up there, constantly praised by others for being near-works of art, I want a taste of that fame as well.
I wanna know people are enjoying what I enjoy. Call me one of those guys who don't feel successful until they've hit that top spot so many others have.
Once I've reached Featured, I'll be happy to just write on whenever an idea rolls along.
2393708 Well then, see ya in the featured box eventually.
Brony on!
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Aye. Alright, Featured Box, time I finally put my flag on your summit!
2393734 I can't answer that without confusing you. Just wait for the next few chapters and all will be explained.
I'm well beyond lost at this point. Only thing I know for certain anymore is that Miles is dying, and that he's married to Luna. And oh, Celestia still doesn't know...
2393765 Well... at least you know that. PM me questions if you really want to understand.
great chapter
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Really, at this point, I'd probably need to start all over from the beginning, and then write down all the OCs, characters, and relations. Just a lot of info, and reading as-it-comes-out is a way to slowly lose some info. With your storyline, forget one detail, and it just snowballs.
And oh, I am poking you for the whole 'Celestia still doesn't know' thing. It's facepalmingly bad, every time something came up.
TB... You know what you did.... You glorious bastard... And never want to see THAT POLE in my living room AGAIN. It's been tainted.
2393812 well then, poke away oh poking poker!
What if miles comes back at some point? Maybe as an immortal alicorn? Like so that then nobody will have to worry about him dying from power increases, and he could stay with luna. oh! he could like be the Alicorn of Harmony! Since he created the elements of harmony and he's the strongest thing since like ever. And maybe his power increases were just him growing into his powers in a human way. So like he meets with the upper powers (maybe the alicorn of creation or some godly equivalent?) and they tell him about all that good stuff, about who he really is and his parents maybe had something to do with it?! IDK some ideas here if you want to use them in some way.
My first reaction... da fuuuuuuuuuq?
Second reaction... What am I reading?
Third reaction... Da fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuq?
Final reaction... Is Miles a phoenix?
Miles' death scene is on chapter 169.
I have no more words to describe my respect for you.
i'm speechless...
Miles better come back
reading this chapter I'm like....wat
then I get to the ending and am like "Dafuq?!"
...Miles better not be dead
Umm Cheesus and Storm????? The whole potion thingy?
so the main character is dead
WHYYYYYYYYYYY
I skiped everything because i didnt understand anything
He Isn't dead yet.
I have to admit, half of the reason I was able to understand whats going on in this chapter is cause I already know future events of the story and such. It is kinda funny to see you write the chapter like this, and I did love the matrix reference.
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lol, TB is the BBC. Don't love any character to much or he'll kill them horribly. Especially if they're an explosives expert.
Great chapter TB. Really outstanding. Sorry I disappeared last night. At some point while reading I pulled one of the crowns on my teeth off.....So I preformed emergency amateur dentistry super-glued it back on.......It took me a lot longer than I thought it would.......I also highly discourage anyone from trying the same thing.
I'm sure it will make sense later, but wtf?
In deer time my friends the truth shall be revealed and your minds shall be blown
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2394455 oh cheesus it amuses me too xD
My mind is full of fuck T_T
I forgot what half of the characters look like and their background stories. Why does True Will not like Flim and Flam again? Why does Night Fury not like Storm again? I really don't want to go back and reread to remember.
2395298 Night Fury blames Storm for the death of his wife. True Will's hatred has yet to be revealed. Storm is light grey with black hair and light blue eyes. True will is a half bread zebra unicorn with red and blue. That's all I can say bout that.
If enough people upvote this comment I'll make a bolg post with descriptions. I'll also post this comment on the next chapter.
Brony on!
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Thanks, I completely forgot Will was a zony; kind of an important detail.
Storm and Night Fury I remember, it's the rest of the OCs that I don't.
well, being the freak I am about this story. I still know every last thing about like every character that was mentioned. TBH it was hard to understand, but I understood what happened in this chapter. Reading the summarization of Arc 3, I anticipate Miles being dead for a looooong time now. It saddens me that he is dead.
Also, he still hasn't begun to do the "thing".
Did miles died?
So, Aurane Died and Fayte is in his village. I don't know why but, Aurane's death seems to make me slightly happy.
I like what you did with this chapter, and Now I need to work on my second chapter, as well as a colab. I was working on with a friend. Can't wait for the next chapter.
No. NO. You can't do something like that to storm without a fucking reason! You just lost a shit ton of respect for that. You HAVE TO EXPLAIN THIS! You can't just have Cheesus fuck over storm without a reason or consequences! STOP BEING A SHITTY AUTHOR! EXPLAIN YOURSELF!
2395843 Whoa, slow down there. Explanations will happen (literally in the next chapter) you just need to be patient.
Chapter 159. Miles states that Storm is a whore.
Also, Trixie is proof that, sense she is a descendent of Dolum, humans and ponies can have offspring which are ponies, unless there was a transformation involved.
And I'm calling it now. Miles was sent back in time to fight Discord, and chases him to the surface. He thens gives the pony from Roam (a descendent of Dolum) the Elements to give to the princesses so they can beat Discord and, when the time is right, free Luna from Nightmare Moon. I still have no idea about Miles' mother and her connection to Luna, though.
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2396006 Next chapter.
ermahgherd. this is pinkie in a nutshell
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Ok so a deal and something with an air ship
Um ok stripper club... Storm wat r u doing? Storm? Stap!!!
DUDE YOUR FLIPPING MARRIED!!!
Ok twilights going to kill you
Aaaaaand que giant monster for the chapter
YAY TWILICORN!
... So.... Miles in a phonex or this is some kind of cruel joke..
Ugh... Twilicorn.
2396003 If I remember that chapter with his mother correctly, she was traveling through time with someone. (Doctor Who/Doctor Whooves?)
2403955 no, it was another female human. She pinned him to a wall. Naked, if I recall.
2409342 Alrighty then. I'm assuming you actually know Latin, because I don't. I use Google translate, and that's what popped up. I'll take you word over theirs though. If you see any other mispronunciations can you be sure to point them out?
Brony on!
This is like some cruel joke right..... miles can't die he is main character there must be more!!!!