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Great chapter!! I literally did a double take at tempus and Spatium's names... that was a curve ball of all curve balls. Oh and If I am not mistaken First!!!!
Stopping time to take naps? I already love this little guy.
WOAH MY MIND HAS BEEN FUCKED!!!
WTF???!!!!
also I called it
My feels!
You meant 'by', I suppose...
As always, great chapter. Full of mind-blow!
Keep going!
Hmm, so Tempestive can stop time but is that only 1 of many 'passive' traits he will have? Magically he has to balanced but at the same time his 'passive' must be unbalanced.
So I think Tempestive is going to be a Major part in the conflict with War and the others because Time is all they have left!
I LOVE IT!
"Early Death" because he continues to age while he stops time. Granted this isn't necessarily the intention but I will take this . of hope and nurture it until it is shot out a pea shooter when TB kills him
Wow...
Okay, the story's big enough that I'll start reading it now.
So, are Tia and Lulu ever going to get to know about them once this 'outcome' comes to pass?
Love this story. My only problem is that story, even though I'm guesing it wasn't your intention, can feel slightly sexiest at time. Like how the spartans always tell the mane 6 to leave it to them.
Also more of a plot whole how exactaly does the Spartans excuse of "Im a high ranking soldier of a dead civallation" hold up at all. Im pretty sure they have broken major laws and gone unpunished using just that reason (also the princess being very linenete with them).
Overall I do love the story still. Just some of these things urks me.
So, you are saying that Tempus knew about the assasination because they had already done a whole load of future jumping to get a heads up?
Going to be intresting that, Tempus has already fixed the set of worldlines that they can return to the future in, but that doesnt mean that its those exact points that Miles etc need to pass through.
As for kiddie and time stop snoozing, who is manipulating his dreams if Luna cant access the time stop to defend them?
I still think Miles should build an underground playroom or two, say, about a hundred metres in diameter with the walls cmpacted to say half an inch,. cm thickness, making them not even matter, but degenerate.
3651527 The sexiest thing was actually intended. It's part of the background to the lore, women were view weaker and were not usually allowed to join. Things changed, but the mentality didn't die entirely.
I was trying to imagine Luna's voice during the song but...I couldn't.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1bFr2SWP1I
im not too sure but isnt this a doctor who reference?
good chapter, love the whole "stop time to make naps" lol...
This line...
This fucking line...
This was an extremely pleasant update! My day couldn't get any better! Everything has been perfect!
As always, this made me have a nice, hearty laugh in middle of night, waking everyone, so thanks for that xD and I simply love everything going so well in this chapter. 200th chapter with 200% more happiness and awesomeness!
Give that baby a ball, and it shall be entertained for years! Give it spaghetti, and the kitchen will be fucked!
This chapter was just way too adorable, so also, 200% more cuteness!
And I have to admit that the last part with Tempus went a bit like this:
*reads*
Oh, okay...
*keeps reading*
...wait...
*reads a bit more*
...
*realization hits... HARD*
HOLYMFRSCHHHHSHGCHBMNMNNPFFFBLBLBLBLBLB!!!!
...
[awesome intensifies]
I bet that Miles will have some pretty hectic adventures with his son... may I say... relating to a certain meeting back a couples of chapters...
IT'S ABOUT TO GET HECTIC!
That was awesome, keep up the good work. I can't wait to see Miles kick some more ass, can we see more of that soon?
Well now, that was interesting. Quite the development.
DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM that's the longest story I ever seen on this sight, good job man.
This chapter was so nice and happy! But that only makes me more worried for how it's probably gonna all go to shit because of various evil bastards!
Also maybe when you switch to Miles perspective from now could you specify whether he is human or not. Sometimes you include wings so it's easy to tell that he is in alicorn form, but other times it's a tad confusing. Like sometimes in my mind it's hard to know if I should be seeing a human or alicorn in the room. Just a suggestion.
3652443 yes yes it is and a brilliant on at that. fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/272/c/9/stormageddon__dark_lord_of_all_by_teawiththeginger-d4bajdb.jpg
3653197 awesome, i loved that episode. just like the horse named susan
aw isn't Tempestive adorkable, and spatium and tempus....
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WHAKJSKDSAJAJJS WHHHAAAAA?!?!?!?!
New characters to scream and moan at Miles and he takes it? either all I know tis be a lie, ooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrr.... actually I got nothing else so carry on (or walk on, I dont see what ur carrying)
3620479 I agree
Wouldn't Luna and I be the prime words to use there?
Anywho Im calling cheetsiedoodles on Tempus
3652052
More or less just makes me annoyed at the male characters (Miles less so) cause they tend to act erogent and annoying. Its also confusing that in a land rule by women you could easily sense a layer of gender conflict.
Well, guess that answers my question. Threw me for a loop there.
He also bends space when he farts!
3653408 Susan obviously a companion of a lost season no doubt in my mind. Horses can be companions.
I love this story but I don't like this turn, but that's a personal reason since I HATE the "I am from the future and know how everything will play out but can't tell you" spiel. I just don't like everything being predetermined, plus how can he know the time line won't change for the better/I doubt he has seen every variation of the timeline. Plus, didn't Tempus already screw around with time by saving Spatium?
3655404 you are in for one hellofa ride there mate
3657770 i agree, susan was underrated. best companion so far
3653064 Diaries of a Madman, 'tis ain't got shit on it.
I've said it before, and I'll say it again.
TIME TRAVEL, BITCH!
How many more time skips before the next story arc?
3670396 ...you're in a story arc. I don't understand your question. Are you asking when the time skips end? One more chapter.
3672626 When I say story arc, I meant something like the trips through the cities. All this time skipping, to me, feels more episodic instead of a single continuous plot.
omg love this chapter to many dawwwwwwww Have A great and derpy day and happy xmass my friends
3673917 I'm setting up for stuff. The plot will be continuous soon.
3679193
Isn't Tempestive suppose to have blue eyes?
3679776 Bonus points to you good sir. Indeed, his eyes changed colors. Good job finding that.
Brony on!
3679891 Lol, I notice it, but the parents don't? Miles and Luna are great observers xD
3679963 There was an entire year in which they could have noticed it. Sorry, but I'm doing the time skips for a reason. It's something for the kid, not the parents.
I have no more to read
I have no reason to live (aside from family, friends, and gaming).
Its been a month or two, but I'm FINALLY caught up! Excellent work bro and I hope you keep it up :D
3717754 The pacem joke was made because that's what it sounds like in google translate. And Miles's name is different for reasons yet to be explained.
This should be nephew.
Their alive? Now I'm sad again
Somehow...they know everything...something not right.
Hope miles not dead.