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Damn, I was half expecting Miles to beat the ever loving shit out of Rumble. But all we got was a "Who the fuck are you?"
Oh well, there's always next chapter.
I can't get up from laughing so much! XD
Wow! It's been awhile but was worth the wait.
Omg yes a chapter.
Love what dirt they found out about him.
Shits going DOWN SON!
fuck Yeah ERPDATES!!!!! Also you guys game awesome pony run is that like shadowrun. But with ponies? I'll go chek it out no matter what it is it's still make believe with rules my favorite
The dinner scene, i can't!
good fucking god, I just died
4640649 Yes! I helped kill a person, love proof reading Damian's lines
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Oh dear, thats a family in jjoke. Many a Fiddle played on an old tune.
If Miles is calling in all Spartans, I hope Rumble gets out of the way, and doesnt end up in splat central.
Rule number 37: Don't ever think that you can hide things from Damian; he will find shit about you that even you didn't know you did.
"calling all spartans"
all of them show up "yes sir?"
"Who the hell is this little shit and why is he dating my daughter?"
(Sigh)Rumble keeps thinking ther are ponies from the Royal Guard involved here. Little colt, Miles Eremita eats guardponies alive and craps out Spartens. Never the less, I find myself rooting for the guy. Good luck kid, your gonna need it.
IT'S ALIVE
Poor rumble....wait what am I saying this is funny as hell XD
4644727 ehh no I didn't?
I said it as in "after the calm follows the storm".
Calm first, then storm.
I know that's not the usual way to say it, but it's not illogical as an array.
"after the calm comes the storm"
"after death comes the peace"
"after despair comes the rage"
"after loss comes the sadness"
"after the rain comes the sun"
I made it a logical follow-up of events, by saying "after the calm, comes always the storm".
The intended message from the original word play "Calm before the Storm" is still apparent.
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Unless I misremember, Miles had yet to connected the platform in the closet to anything. Only later did he connect it to the mountain cave.
I think it was just a story device more than a factual error. Skipping the train ride would have left out some exposition.
well Rumble that whet better that i expected
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That whole dinner I wanted to punch Damian, but at least he got Rumble to own up.
Yay, Miles is back and he's bringing a fight with him! An overdue break from the teenage drama sitcom
I was mildly disappointed but that's not a negative, the chapter just didn't have what I was expecting and OH HEY ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER WELL WHOOP DE HOOP LETS ALL FUCK A TUBE!!!
Good job, and whee! More actjun! \(•3•)/
Is this an Evil Celestia story? Is this a Luna's a Prick story? Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?
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if the first line was so out of line why not use the backspace key... its right there.... waiting for you.... patently.....watching you......waiting for its time...........................
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ah ha that is funny i am reading diaries of a mad man now and you are reading man of war. ha that's funny try reading griffin the griffin next. i look forward to you commenting upon my comments further.
4654558 Already read it. Strange, fimfiction never said you responded. I've also re-read Diaries of a madman, twice now, Also, Griffon the Griffon's sequel. Read em all. And I finally read Past Sins.
4657184 She called him yards which is a meassuremenr followed by miles which is the main characters name.
4659610 hey I was stupid back then.
4661305 yes! Who needs sleep when
You can........'snores'
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Pff I think she deserved that really, It's hard to read all this cushy wussy snuggle stuff between Twily and her lover, seriously i know affection can be a wonderful thing, and I do enjoy some sexy time, but it's kind of exaggerated here, so much that it stresses my nerves.
i eman twi is all like
OH YES! Get me preggers come on! I want to make some babies, I got brainwashed by the sex gods to make babies!
...
Yeah that kind of gets on my nerves, is to much ooc twily.
That said, she deserved her first attempt of birth to go downhill.
CLIFFHANGER AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH
4667441 Shhh. Sleep now. It's alright.
4670823 No, it's just that what he said made absolutely no sense! If anything, your the one being mean by calling me a douchebag for saying he messed something up! Not everything I say is an insult.
Alright, in spite of reading this fic and mostly sticking with it in spite of a few things that drive me batty, there is one thing...one thing...that really makes me want to tear my damn hair out in frustration:
IT'S "SHINING". AS IN "SHINING FUCKIN' ARMOR".
Unless said "Shinning" is some heretofore unseen OC among the endless throng that pop up in this story and then suffer irreverent deaths that no one cares about. In that case, I can only imagine a poorly color-swapped OC married off to Cadence who runs up to his foes and scrapes his hooves against their shins, causing them a great deal of discomfort and absolutely no real physical damage whatsoever.
Really, though, you've got a good premise for your story. It would be so much more epic if you got a few dedicated editors workin' on it, though. Your first few chapters really hooked me in, but the quality later seems to fluctuate between that high bar you first set and "Oh, God, I'm reading fanfic instead of an actual story."
And before anyone asks...yes, my jimmies are rustled. Thoroughly. You could slap a fat woman's thigh and ride my rustled jimmies to the wet spot on a surfboard. That's how aggravated I am.
In spite of all of this, I still find myself reading to find out what happens next.
Seriously, though, "Shinning"?
4683649 I would go back and change it, but I don't care enough, plus, Morpheus is much more badass than MiB
I. Finally. Caught. Up. O-o
And... Done.
I regret literally every single moment of time I spent reading this fic.
5/10 generously.
Man of WarDiaries of a MadmanRainbow Dash Flies East, your ass is next.
Somehow i skipped this chapter.... glad I caught that. Funny as death (of which I find it hilarious at the appropriate times).
That is SOOO wrong! I can't believe you would have done that! Why? There's only one L in Lost!!
4690404 you read over 200 chapters and nearly 1m words to decide that you don't like this fic? It's not even done!
4715462 You figure it's something he would have concluded early in the story before this. To be honest it seems like he just wanted a reason to complain *Shrugs* Anyways fun story, can't wait for Miles to have a "chat" with Rumble.
“Are you trying to diddle her piddle?”
“I… what?”
“Are you trying to diddle her piddle with your widdle fiddle?”
Widdle Fiddle
I was dying this whole chapter!
4649808 Wut? What?!
Few stories make me laugh out loud like this one has. Love your work Tallest! Brony on indeed!
One of my favorite chapters so far
Now I'm just waiting for Rumble to stick his rod in Shadow.
Just wait till you find out her aunt
The will of Kakyoin lives on