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Sex Inbound
A shout out to Sine but nobody else? How cruel. . .
You can die happy now miles?Careful what you say!You just might get it!!
yay sexitime incommingdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Luna_lolface.png
Best day ever!
804509 I'm not sure why I get a shout out but I'm not one to look a gift pony in the mouth! Brohoofs for everyone!
And Huzzah for another awesome chapter that leaves a warm fuzzy feeling.
Excellent work!
805216 Hey i don't know why i did
d'aw
children huh..... maybe they will be minotaurs!!
806338 Ponitaurs
806487 centaurs u mean
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becuase.. why not.
I must say that it took me two days to burn all the way through this story, but I've enjoyed mostly every second of it.
First thing I should mention is that I have very little to say negatively about this story. It is very well done and the pacing is wonderful. I mainly enjoy the character of Miles and that I really enjoy reading about his interactions with others. I've even begun to incorperate his, "Oh Sweet Barbara," phrase into my daily life. A true knee slapper if there ever was one.
There are, however, a few points of negativity I must point out. The multiple villainous characters, Miles, Storm, Easy, and Luna, there are few characters with dynamic personalities. The villains, though possessing personalities that force me to hate them, feel as though they are dime a dozen. They have impacts only when they are there or before they arrive. After they have gone their actions are practically rendered moot. Though I do not see this being a severe issue considering the series we're working with here. My final complaint is that you have a tendacy to portray Miles as this super being who solves problems quickly when present. This hasn't proved to be much of a problem in this story, but it is rare that such a character works in another work. Therefore, I would advise against using a similarly powered character if you were ever to write another story.
On the whole I've enjoyed this alot. Due to my issues with the powers of Miles I tried to quit reading, but I must admit that I am genuinely interested in the love story between Luna and Miles. As a send off, I leave you with a mustachioed dragon.
810952 Thanks for the well placed review? (Opinion? Whatever works there). The reason the others haven't really been to in depth is becuase they haven't really had their moments in the light, this is going t charge relativity soon. Thanks for ready, hope you enjoy whats to come.
i beat th' odds and found unlocked wifi in th' woods of Western Kentucky. i win th' badge o' dey' awesome.
also, obvious smexiteim inbound is obvious.
Hey hey, that griffin is a bald eagle, thus making him American.
AMERICA! FUCK YEA! HERE TO SAVE THE MUTHA FUCKING DAY YEA! data2.tymoon.eu/fab/files/134140319027145.jpg
When miles told luna to give celestia a present in the sky or something like that i thought of that song "I just had sex" what if she told celestia "I just got married" like that in the sky
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MURICA!!!
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also if I ever get my hands on steelwing, I'm gonna chop his balls off and shove them up his ass
so when he shits, he shits all over his balls!
Fantastic story. Another day, yet more procrastination.
Curse your story telling abilities.
Wouldn't it be easier to get back if he made one portal platform ready to be connected after he got Luna? You know, having it in the castle or something.
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
YOU FIXED MY FEELS
Finally made it halfway through!
Why do you let other user to pick things? like songs or foods or colors i don't get why, i mean it's cool and it makes the story more interactive but i don't get why have you choose it like that.
2350254 Leave a teleporter INSIDE the castle for all to use leading wherever? Nopelynopenope.
And that's how Tirek the centaur was made. Don't do alicorns, kids... or drugs... Always use protection.
Also, wouldn't it be simpler to cut the connection to the mico platform in his house and make a new one connected to the one on the mountain?
3106282 he would have to know exactly where he is and how far away he is from his house to make it accurate
2547237 and a second D,AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW
Awwwwwwwewwwwwee the las part
3374954 third DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWDAW overload
From what the description makes it look like, Ulif's house is a hobbit hole
They must be taking the hobbits to isengard then....wonder if pipin hired a caretaker......
4635317 Da Fuq??? I know what that is, but what made you say that reference?
Also, just a random comment. I've been reading this fic for so long, that I watch one Youtube video, read one chapter, whatch one Youtube video, read one chapter, and so on so I don't lose interest! Hey, it works!
Family Guy reference ftw!!!
miso soup. awesome. i'm powering though this story in the last two days and its an amazing read.
and those love birds it's way too early for marriage but he's dying so i'll let it slide
Ok things are going too well something bad is gonna happen soon lol
"A few holes have been burroweed out" should be "burrowed"
Also... there is a weird drop in the middle of the chapter. The miso soup is mentioned, then it is mentioned that Luna cooks it, then the story seems to forget about it and Miles is like "the fire is out", with no mention of them eating or doing anything else with the soup. It's just a bit jarring and feels like something was left out.
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I bet my life savings he’s going to get nocked out again
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Your Miles-will-get-knocked-out-again senses are tingling, eh? :D
Yeah, I get that too. I get it each time I start a new chapter.
Well, I guess it's better than him getting knocked up...
I need a full chapter oh the 3 hours