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... Plot Incoming, Btw Magical Relationship Btween Souls ?
556574nope....maybe... i don't know
556576
You Know All Of The Plot
556581 well duh
556581>>556584
Yes....yes he does....if you know what i mean XD
556593 No, can you tell me
556594
Well...plot sometimes means ass get the....reference?
I blame my behaviour on eating tons of siugar
556596 oh...... YAY SUGAR
556581 hehe plot
im 12
Hehe MMMMMmmm dat plot
i prefer to wait and see what comes of this most interesting of occurrences!
Ah to read this while listening to a bunch of brony songs
Hmmmm......'Dont forget who gave you this power'.......Errie.......
...dafuq? this makes about as much sense as Pinkie on a good day. of making sense. and that's really saying something. still, all confusion will be cleared up soon, right?
twilight why did you have to go and jinx the story by saying everythings perfect.... everyone knows if you say that SOMETHING WILL GO WRONG!!!!
i am guessing lunas soulfire is dateig miles soulfire LOL THEY CANT STOP DATEING EVEN IF THEY WANTED TO!!!!
maybe dateing again will "calm his soul" as miles says.
Miles: "Assuming Direct Control!!!"
Taking control of soul fire
LIKE A BOSS
shit won't stop getting real
557190 HA nice
nice chapter i wonder what soul fire meant by progress
Shit just got real as FUCK!
FREAKIN' RAWR BITCHES!!!!
It's a great story and I'm caught up in it, but I've been spotting errors more and more. It may just be me because I'm a picky reader, and as much as I hate to say it, it's starting to distract me. Nothing major; a missing period after a sentence, a word or two missing from a line (making you catch yourself), some words being mistaken for others, missing apostrophes, stuff like that. Like I said, thought I'd bring it to attention, maybe slow down in your writing process? I know I'm in no position to even give a suggestion like that, but it's just my two cents.
Still captivated by the story itself though, look forward to reading more.
561676 Thanks for voicing the concern, I'll be sure to pay extra attention
Da fuq?
Alrighty then. I will come back to this story in a bit. Diaries of a madman just updated!!!! Btw, wat da hell is happen'?
DAMN THOSE CLIFFHANGERS! Next chapter is the last one for right now, I swear...
3100225 but what if the next chapter has a huge cliffhanger?
5664489 Then we have an angry brony, or bronies. Who knows.
I see lots of plot comments. PLOT PLOT PLOT PLOT PLOT. <3
My, miles' soul is an arrogant jerkass. ... So is Luna's for that matter.
7651569
If everyone's soul is an asshole I wonder what it is like in heaven
OOOOOOOOO I see was going on here Luna is feeding off of his power making his week enough so his body doesn't die from it that is amazing and a genius I bet that we're going on the heat in here is it ha ha
Why do I immediately think condoms
Ok I was probably right
Why tho like do the souls need to make it a public conversation, can't they go preform domestic violence elsewhere instead of making out in front of her sister a baby dragon and the others, it just seems overly exaggerated to the point of a cringeworthy attempt at comedy. The rest of the story is great, good pacing and seemingly well thought out themes but the steemy relationship between a random guy and an alicorn mares souls preforming acts of domestic violence and then kissing feels less like storytelling and more like the deranged ramblings of a mushroom addled cave dweller.