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saw this had updated, and squealed like a schoolfilly. almost. my deep voice dosen't allow that high. still good chapter, except...
GET A FREAKING PROOFREADER! THIS CHAPTER HURT TO READ WITH ALL TH' ERRORS I SAW!
OMFG so happy i can sleep now i have been up for 2 days withing for this and now that i read it im happydl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
667713 Just keep reading, the date is explained later... and then again later(but I haven't gotten to that part yet)
BA Miles is best Miles :D
667841 Its beyond me...
I demand a Luna X Miles Arch... If t-that's al-alright wit-th you I mean
667851 define arc...
667853 sidestory... sorry still trying to get use to the lingo here... allow me to hit my self now there we go oh and good chapter
667866 I can't... due to it being so main...
667872 oh well see you next chapter then hope its good as the others
You're doing that thing again where you spoil us with updates. Gotta love Miles going all Kali Ma on the dragon.
668092....... FFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUU
I'm going to read this a second time to be sure I got all. Also I got the feeling
That Blueblood is the unknown. But then again I'm drunk. Curse you Sailor Jerry!
I was hoping Miles would make the dragon choke on his heart
The Darkness
JACKIE ESTACADO
OLOL
I definitely agree with TacoTown.
A proofreader would help the story a lot.
Other than that, I still love the story. Keep it up.
what is this The Darkness 3 or something
loving the story, needs a proofreader tho
Hmmm getting a darkness vibe
"Use us"
"The darkness is comming"
Now what would be more weird is if his name was Jackie
WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED?
Did anyone else think kal-i-ma when miles ripped out his heart? KAL-I-MA! KAL-I-MA! KAL-I-MA ! Ha, we love you Indiana Jones.( lol no homo) .
Feels like a crossover of The Darkness, now we'll just wait until he grows tentacles.
668266 This is one of the best stories I've ever read. The way that you handle the Luna and Miles relationship really appeals to me, as well as the feels you dispense. Excellent work. If I may say so, the only thing that I find unappealing about your work is the mistakes in regard to spelling and grammar, but I'm going to hazard a really longshot guess and say that they're because you are writing quickly and with lots of ideas? Just a guess. Anyway, keep up the amazing work!
Also, Princess Celestia with a chaingun.
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Screw you Xanatos...
So I think the "unknown" character is the gryphon ambassador.
Ugh, I hateeee super villain plans where even when everything goes right for the heroes it's still a plan.....
3394894 AGREED!
But seriously i hate it when the villain has it PLANNED for the hero to win only to later crush them with the reveal that theyve been playing along the whole time.
I kinda hope I'm not the only one that thinks Twi is a bit of a drama queen. XD
Bad guys: hahaha! You'll never beat us!
Good guys: ha! We beat you!
Bad guys: jk! We planned you to win all along! So we really win!
Good guys: how?
Bad guys: because fuck you! That's why!
I'm puttin bets on Blueblood being involved somehow.
3378991 That's Cadence, but it was so awesome I don't care!
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There's no way that's Celestia, how in Equestria did you get those confused?
I hate it when this happens in stories. A villain whose true scheme involves being defeated. I would much more prefer it if he shows some sign of frustration before going over to plan B. Because, as it stands, if his true plan is not jaw-dropping amazing enough... I will be disappointed. You better hit me over the head later with all the benefits he gained by losing rather than winning.
Who is this mysterious guy?
I have my suspicions on a list
-sombra (maybe)
-tirek
-an oc bad guy (I think)
5221828 or really de-formed human freak of nature...
5221828 imma cry if its discord...
Watch it be that douchey dean alumaman or whatever the fuck his bitch ass name was. Bet he killed Celestia's father too.
5803968 Who else would've killed Celly's father. It was Allu-something or someone that works for him. Probably, just in case of plot twists.
I really want the big bad to be spike
I really feel Twilight is under utilized in this story. Not only should she have decent power in her own right, I would think she would be the first to want to study and use the soul energy that Miles uses. If not as a weapon to understand and further her knowledge.
7616663 Basically the issue is Twilight is female and the author has a very low opinion of women's capabilities or roles. "Twilight's a mare, so she shouldn't be fighting," you see.
i'm sorry, i lost my shit at "shinning" and cried a tiny tadbit. i had flashbacks of castlevania: circle of the moon and the battle arena and when the "use us" happened, i had flashbacks of doom 3s soul cube. this chapter is bad memories across the board sparked by a pretty good chapter
7651974 three words luna and celestia
7651974 *sharp inhale* I smell a feminist.
7651974 More like "Twilight grew as a protected pony in a civilized place where violence was a rare occorrence and is jot suited for combat, the cadr point is Celestia and Luna that have ejough power to pulverize a city and are pretty much iseless in combat situations.
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Not really, the issue is it's the authors first story and he's doing an amazing job with it. Do you really expect him to keep up with 1431234 characters interests and personalities on his first try? No it takes practice. Everyone's a critic but noones any help.
"taring three strips of flesh out" should be "tear"
"taring strips of flesh from my legs." should be "tear"
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*sniff sniff sniff sniff snifffffffff.*
Says in deep-ish gravely voice:
Yea, you wont last a day out here.. i can smell the feminism all over ya’
Calling it now before I read further, Regina is the mystery villain