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Oh Storm... *facepalm*
What the buck is wrong with the wine in Equestria...
Poison pa pa pa poison!
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Another wedding!
This story always makes me laugh. I love the humor!
why you so good at writing?
a restraunt called food that serves solidified smoothies and has perverted mares working as waitresses.
where th' hell do you come up with this crap? it's glorious, glorious crap, but still.
Hello yeah I feel good for storm. And Yay super evil twilight FTW I was wondering if you would put her in this at all.
592231It was served by a pissed waitress,
At least he only passed out.. It could have been a lot worse if he became a pompous ass who bought a ton of flaming bananas.
Wait what? I think I forgot a part in the story where Storm can't have wine or summat. That last paragraph made nearly no sense to me. . .
The wine that the whore made was poison.....not surprising
Something tells me its that blood proof wine
Roofies, calling it now.
594552 well, think back in the chapter, random mare comes and tries to be with him, he rejects her, what do you think is in the wine? (use the logic)
*Gasp* I live in a city called Golden Gate... and it has a Tony Romas!!!
Way to cut to the chase, atleast he doesnt have a shotgun to scare you off XD.
they are catching on to luna and miles (damn i almost said sharky there XD, (read all the chapters from 'My better life' in 1 day and 22 hours, what do you expect?)
Kinda like a father saying straight off the bat "I have a gun" Funny
Funny chapter.
An interesting story and I like the twist on the usual HiE. The story is pretty rough at points. With some polishing it could be awesome. It's biggest flaws are plot holes where it is assumed Miles knows something because he is human but doesn't because he lived underground. The other major flaw is that the writing is rough. The story seems more interested in what would be cool then what makes sense.
Ex: Mile's pet wolf is pretty bad ass but how does Miles know what a wolf is, or that it is safe to be around? At least the wolf was built up to a little bit.
Despite the flaws the story is interesting and engaging enough that I can't put it down!
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It's actually explained a few chapters back. You know, when Miles and Luna have wine on the roof of Miles' house. I forget the wine's name, but in the author's note or something tallestbrony explains that even the smallest amount of that wine gets you instantly drunk. Hence why Miles woke up in bed with Luna and with the bottom floor of his house full of magical flaming bananas.
Don't drink the wine it's poisoned
*drinks the wine*
YOU FUCKIN IDIOT!!
Can I just point out how kinky the name Twilight Velvet is?
2546585 I love My better life.
3938584 Can you give me a link to the said fanfic?
3600837 you shouldn't have, NOW I CANT LOOK AT A VELVET ROPE THE SAME WAY EVER AGAIN!!!
1 I just noticed the number of chapters im on 2 storms goona need all the luck hr can get
I havnt slept since i started chapter 1 or left my house 4 days ago...........anyone think im fired yet? *-*
-Girl that is so not your color.
Fashionist Sparrow
3600837 dont worry....she knows how to....'rope' in the fun. She makes sure only the best have the fun. She can stretch in more ways than one. Youll be seeing black lines when she's done. Youll have a rather 'comfortable' ride. Once its veen unclipped the line wont stop coming through. couldnt resist XD
- Girl that is so not your color.
Fashionist Sparrow
" just realized how much I love wine" *fump*
Dude, storm, We've all done that at one point or another.
4772211 taking your name is "Moonshine"
4634672 you cray cray piece of bread....
This is not how you spell SHINING. Shinning is to climb up a tree, aka shimmying
The lumberjack shinned up the tree. Correct use of the word shinned. (Present tense form) Shinning
The princess was saved by the knight in shining armor. Correct use of the of the word (Present tense form) Shining
However, this is a name that is correctly spelled Shining Armor.
Sorry for the grammar lesson. I'm a bit of a Grammar Nazi.
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Oi... Don't fkn diss moonshi-*bllllaarrrghhhh* ne mate. That shis good. *thump*
Ah yes Pony Romas. A nice reference to Tony Romas, an actual restaurant chain in the U.S.
okay remind me never trust berry punch or berry shine. and whatever I do don't drink the equestrian wine. especially in heat season. cant wait for that chapter by the way. heat season is always fun to read
Am I the only one wondering why there was no report filled out about the murders at the Ponyville cloud factory? Or how the killing of some random pegasus, henchmen, and some griffons go un-noticed? I mean, I like the story and I'm going to keep reading, but still.
I guess, Rapidash transformation is unicorn magic , so could not use it while in captivity, etc...
это наверное такой побочный эффект у всех Спартанцев! Терять сознание. Я уже начал думать что это только Майлз болеет...