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Dash Attack


Aspiring film editor. When I write I shoot for awesome and nothing less. Anti-censorship and pro free-speech.

Comments ( 126 )

Nice.

Oh. FIRST! I get perks for this being the first editor here. :pinkiecrazy:

Well, I'll be second then. Before I go into this, I do have to say that you did misspell some thing in the description. first off: "sensual", not "sensural", "abnormal": not "abnormale", "month" instead of "mouth", and finally: "he's unsure" and not "he unsure"
I hope this helps:derpytongue2::heart:

Comment posted by Peppy Greyskull deleted Jan 23rd, 2014

3831773 I do wish i could get an editor for these descriptions. Thanks Chief.

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If you want one, then I could help be your editor. The only thing that I ask is that you try out my story, and even if you don't like it, then I will still edit your stories if you want to. One thing, though; I really don't do random stories, or really dark or sad ones, but others I believe I will be ok with.

3831805 Ok, just give me a link and I'll check it out.

You misspelled lewd in the description.

>Big Mac inflation
>Eenope

3831819 It's not inflation. Inflation is when your filled up with air or some liquid. Macro is when you become a giant like Godzilla. This fic isn't for everyone, but this first chapter features normal non fetish sex with Zecora. The rest will get kind of crazy.

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Macro usually isn't my thing, but this was pretty good. You would definitely benefit from an editor. Hope to see more!

3831948 Thanks. I tried ease the fetish stuff instead of slamming the reader with it all at once. I figured it would ease people in better, and make the build up for the macro freaks even sexier. I'm hoping I can lean from this story so that I can branch out.

I will be saving this for later reading, but in the description, you 'write' something. 'Wright' is a person (eg; The Wright Brothers).

love it hope it continues :eeyup:

I :heart: this story already.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: I want to see what happens next.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

3834379 That's great. School starting up again next week so its going to be tough. Also, I have several on going series that probably won't end anytime soon. No matter what I do I'm going to keep people waiting it seems. This next segment may be tough to right, since I will undoubtedly get aroused by own righting. One of the curses of righting about your own fetish fantasy I guess.

In the meantime, I have ton of SFW stories. My personnel recommendation are The New Boss, My Mortal Big Brother, And Putting Here Heads Together.

Macintosh you fool!!!!
HAVE YOU LEARNED NOTHING FROM TRYING TO COMPLETE THE HUGE QUEST!?

Geez. All these comments about the grammar. I got news for you guys. I edited the first 2/3 of this but the last part I didn't. It was added in after I got done with what was already written. Then there's the description. Didn't edit any of it either. Perhaps I should look everything over for Dash Attack. You do NOT want to know what it looked like before I got a hold of it...

3839443 No worries man. The description is fine now, and that last bit can't be that bad. If it is, I'll make those changes on my own. For now, I'm just really glad people are liking the story.

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BUT WHAT ABOUT THE ATROCITIES, AND THE CHILDREN, AND THE CRIMES AGAINST PONYKIND IN ORDER TO FIGHT EVIL!?
NO AMOUNT OF PERFECTLY HUGE AND KAWAI FACE IS WORTH THAT PRICE!!!!!

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THE HUGE WILL DESTROY US ALL!!!!!!!

3850448 May be. But Its one that must be completed if Big Mac has any hope of out Hudgeing the Hudgest.

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YOU'VE DOOMED US ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MACINTOSH SHALL CONSUME THE EARTH!!!!!
THE STARS!!!!!!
GALAXIES!!!!!!!
AND THEN BEYOND!!!!!!!!
CAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPSSSSSS LOOOOOOOOCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!

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I totally read this in the voice of Mr. Torgue. :pinkiecrazy:

Sig hail! There are quite a few spelling, grammar, and repeat errors in there. I can't even name them all.



Good clop. Short, but good clop. Nuf said

very nice read:twilightblush: would you consider adding cheerilee to the story?

3865786 Thank you for reminding me of her. Wile, Big Mac will probably Big to have normal sex with her, I have no doubt that she will be competing with all the others mares for physical contact. I'll be sure that her encounter stands out to please the CheerleeMac shippers.

What is this doing in the fat-pony-literature group?

3866645 I was browsing fetish groups and saw that the FPL had a macro/micro section. It was completely empty so I though I join put this story in said folder.

So many spelling and grammar mistakes in this chapter. You might want to fix those. Also 26 inches != 3 feet.

3868873 I'll have Chaotic Mind look at the chapter again, and I'll correct the measurement derp. His final size is supposed to be 30 inches. :twilightsheepish:

Interesting and unusual story with hot-funny-nasty clop scenes... I like it!:rainbowlaugh: About ColtCuddler Bar and Lime... Please, write this story without any kinds of M/M-shipping here.:fluttershysad:

3870745 There not hooking up, but Lime will probably try and enjoy the show once Big Mac get's to out grow town. I'm not into bromance, but I decided that some light homo eroticism would add variety for anyone who's into that. But based on my own comfort levels, it's mostly going be chicks doing the worshiping and wetting themselves.

Lime will probably try

I already hate this guy.:pinkiecrazy:

I decided that some light homo eroticism would add variety for anyone who's into that.

In my opinion, this would be annoying for guys who NOT into that. I dont like M/M shipping and ColtCuddling, especially when all this stuff happening with my favorite male character - Big Mac. But you are Boss here after all...
P.S. I hope it would be REALY-REALY light homo erotic.

So wait. If he focuses, he can manipulate his size shift. Does that mean he can bring himself back down if he tries. Don't get me wrong, but he's already pushing the border of ever being able to have a real girlfriend. Unless its a fully grown dragon.
If he can't make himself shrink back then I need to dust off my THE HUGE IS THE END sign and get back out on the streets.

3875916 Very observant. He will be able to control it better as well as prevent anyone from getting hurt should he grow massive.

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Oh?
Well, I guess I don't need the sign anymore

3876445 I wouldn't throw it away just yet. One of my favorite part's about macro fetishes is when characters get like this.

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Edit: Thank God it's Big Mac with the power. Who knows what Twilight would be like.

WHAT THE HELL IS THE POINT OF GETTING THAT HUGE!?
IT'S SO UNNESSASRY!!!! UNLESS HE PLANS ON FIGHTING THE ANTI SPIRALS!!!!!!

That's always been my one problem with expansion and Macro. They make the character so proposterously large that they destroy the universe. And for someone like Macintosh, I don't think he would want to risk that kind of damage.

But I do agree as far as Twilight goes. She should never have that kind of limitless power.

This definitely isn't my thing, but I will say you articulated the fetish well.

3905172 Thank you. Been a fan of this kind of stuff for years, and it's only till just reticently that I mustered the courage to give my own shot at it.

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And good on you for that! Diversity, spice, yadda yadda. TBH there's a fic based on a fever dream I had that I'm too chicken to even type out...

So new chapter cumming soon? :pinkiecrazy: tee-hee, I made a funny.

Very nice. Always a big fan of macro (ha ha). I've got a feeling though that things are quickly going to go completely out of control. Not really a big fan of people growing to the size of planets.

3974473 Don't worry. I'm going to play with the smaller sizes before that. And I'm going to make sure that when Big Mac does go Galactus, he won't harm the plannet, or the people livening on it. But for the most part he's just going to go on an ego trip and crush stuff with his apples.

hope to see more soon! and the potion requiring the drinker to have a kind heart for the potion to actually work is a great touch and actually sounds like some you'd hear from the show

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