Loved it, loved everything about it!!!

one question: sequel?

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Thirding. The world needs more happy stories like this.

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Fifthing the comment.

Dash’s fingers slid through the silky locks of dark blue hair as smooth as silk.

That's some really silky hair.

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Sixthing it!

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I tend to get repetative when I write at 2AM.

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Seventhing it. Just to make sure.

Pretty good story, I'd really like a sequel for this as well.

4057123 I getcha. I'm an insomniac myself. Wake up to read back over what I wrote anda ll the word sare like this.

a little anti climatic, but it was very sweet.

4057700 Friggin' spacebars just doing whatever they feel like.

>> Clonetrooperkev
>> twidashforever
>> Rainbow87dash
>> High Roller
>> Viking Hoof
>> wiiman
>> Battlebread HMS Chapatti

The eighth mark doth strike! Bring forth the continuation!!

Lovely. One of these days you're going to have to stop writing humanized so I can enjoy these stories more!

4058451 *ahem* ninth that mark

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One of these days you'll have to get over your disgust of the human form so you can enjoy these stories more.

4058699 Tenth that.

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Mmm, smut followed with lovey-dovey stuff. Nothing like it at 11:16 p.m.

Sequel, no sequel, whatever. I like how it ended, and if there's more to come, I'll critcize it with the upmost harshness enjoy it.

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Glad I can always count on you to tell me when I suck.

Mark as complete?

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Huh. That was a nice little story. A bit too much sex to be too thoughtful, though,

A very sweet ending. You nicely intertwined sex and romance in this story, demonstrating how each can generate the other. Thank you for a most enjoyable read.

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Glad you enjoyed it. And, "it's not that bad" will always be high enough praise for me!

This is one of the best humanized fics I've ever read. I love your portrayel of Rainbow Dash and Twilight. It's so boring when humanized fics don't get into the little details like skin tone. Color contrast works just as well in humanized fics, as does height contrast and muscle build. I love Rainbow Dash's towering, lean, muscled form compared to Twilight's.

Overall one of the best humanied fics I've seen.

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Never let it be said that Rainbow Dash is indirect.

with the carecter soarin in this story is this a soarindash or a twidash or a sorintwi

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little soran dash... But no, this is a twidash

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still holding my breath for a sequel!!!

Oh ok I don't like twidash but I will still read it

is this ever going to have a sequel? because i think this deserves a sequel about what the issues with college do to our lovable duo.

Sequel, sequel!

Seriously this was so very well written, very well done

I feel like this needs a sequel.

4056890 Like, so silky that the silkyest silk was not silky enough to out silk it.

Ah, this was great! Full of high school love (although it felt like college) and wild young horny SEKS!
Don't make a sequel, leave this baby just the way it is