Proof that I'm not dead. I was just in a slumber, waiting for reason to rise again. I might have found that reason.
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And away we go with this enjoyable fic!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Well that was quite enjoyable
3126853 Interesing profile pic you have.
~Lord Popo
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Why thank you! I must say, you have a curious one as well.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Wow only you could make me feel this awkward and aroused at the same time. Good Job
Down voting, not for the idea of the story, but because it was impossible to get past everyone's reactions to the change. Everyone just accepts it at the drop of a hat? Are they all scitzo? Your family dog become a talking two legged thing and you can just move on with that? Or the fact they become embarrassed over her genitals, dispite they are all non-clothing wearing and should have no problems with this?
How she's capable of speech as a reflex action, even though she's never tried to emulate speech before and that requires a physical attempt to form those sounds with her mouth, and not just bark, I can sort of ignore. But immediately deciding to stand ontwo legs?
I couldn't get very far because it felt like you weren't even trying to think how this would realistically would go down, but pulled it from your head in a way that feels lazy.
I would ask you rewrite this and think about every characters reactions and why they do what they do, instead of lazily throw up scenes that don't function in an actual situation.
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agreed! It was quite enjoyable. Went pretty much the way i expected after reading the description, but I didn't expect that solution to it. Had to laugh at the end though. Can't blame a gal fer tryin' one last time
"Maccy"
spotted this, by the way:
Not wanting to venture anything here, but Winona had a lot of fun in this one. She may even be tempted to do this again next year and try to win Big Nac over again...
>>3127117
1. Poison joke... poison joke
2. Wouldn't you be kinda excited/happy to have a man's best friend be able to talk to you? I don't think they would be too disturbed especially seeing how they live in a world of wooden wolves.
3. I'm sorry if you feel like this was a lazy attempt, but to be honest, it wasn't, and I won't rewrite a story if only a few people see an issue with it.
Sucks you didn't enjoy it at all, but at least you came and said why you downvoted. I'd rather know why people didn't like my story than have them downvote and run off.
Can you make another story like this one?
It was an honor to edit this! This story is a riot! A sexy, sexy riot!
How does one "walk intellectually"?
Cool story, but who the hell is Ace, and why isn't he in the tags!?
He played a huge part in this story, and just kind of disappeared afterwards.
3127012 Did you photoshopped it yourself? The image looks magnificent
how does one walk " intellectually?"
3127310 1. Take a book. 2. Open it and hold it in front of your face (be sure to have the whole book in your field of view) 3. walk around while holding the book. You are doing it right when you crash randomly into stuff.
3127807 One doesn't simply walk intellectually.
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3127117 All of this and a bit more.
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So here's a creature that suddenly gained the ability to reason and express said reason with more than a wag of the tail. And this creature is returned, nay lobotomized, back to its original form, by caring people who 'only want what's best'.
I don't see that. I think it's the closest we can come to murder without actually going through the motions with the icepick and the blood.
i WOULD KILL THAT DOG
I liked it cause it was really well written... It actually made me feel worried about appleblooms innocence
3127810 yea, that sounds about right, and we meet again my friend
and I just realized that I am reading two of your stories and have read another . Why have I not followed you yet?!
3127146 Interesting, I 'll give you that. Like but no fave, definite A for concept. Oh, and a for creative use of background pony in a speaking role.
"You guys are probably never going to get an answer to the handcuff question"
Well its obviously because applejack is an undercover agent with a robot twin that takes over her life while she goes out on epic adventures to stop mastermind villains.
3128146
Yes... obviously
I half expected AJ to come back with the Diamond Dog trio... They wouldn't have said a thing about Winona being a dog, what with being dogs themselves.
3128040 Not to mention they tricked an innocent guy into having sex with her.
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But then again, Winona voluntarily chose to return because, even with her intelligence, she would still be nothing more than a dog. Though she enjoyed it, she knew her regular place would be best for everypony. The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few.
3128269 If you have known nothing but blind obedience for your whole life, how can you expect anything else? The shackles in the mind are much harder to break than the ones in the physical world. You read it yourself, that her innermost urges could overwrite the master/servant relationship imprinted on her. How could you let someone like this make an informed decision, when the whole concept of free will is so alien to her? Also, I really don't see where the greater good enters into all of this.
3128040 XD Squishy Squishy Grey Matter. :D
I'm not interested in this story but this bit in description have killed me.
On the other hand I may be wrong and this sentence is good, english is not my language after all.
Finally, a fic where Winona is the main protagonist.
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I don't write stories just to get popular; I write them cause I wanted to, and I have no regrets writing this. Also, way to blame a story getting on the feature box as a reason people quit the site. People quit the site because they feel their story isn't as popular "as it should be" and rage quit on writing. They're in it for the wrong reasons.
If you didn't enjoy the story, then fine. I have no problem with that. But if you're going to point fingers at others, realize that most of the time, Mature stories aren't featured, or at least not at the top. There usually is an even ground of clop and other stories, so the excuse "clop destroys the feature box" is kinda weak. Not to mention, you could always turn off the mature tag Time to stop the finger pointing and just write because you genuinely enjoy it, not because it'll get you infamy
That's all I gotta say...
3128583 I wasn't referring to authors who quit the site. I was referring to people in general, some of them being close friends of mine and a lot of them not even being writers on here. I'm not blaming the stories themselves or even the authors. What they write is their business and there's nothing I plan on doing to change that. Stories by themselves are harmless. An author (theoretically) can't control how popular his story's gonna get. The site itself is okay. Got some problems, but it doesn't suck. Maybe the people on the site suck, not the stories. That's why I'm hardly ever on here anymore, and that's why some people view this as being the "dark side" of the fandom. Not everybody on here is a writer, and I barely even qualify as one. For my smartass comment, I apologize.
3128656
No problem, and I appreciate the clarification. I think people just need to realize that things like these can be avoided. They could keep the mature tag off, they could explore the popular box and read those, and they can generally stop complaining because M rated fics and/or clopfics are hardly the most popular fics on this site.
I only know of one clop that is on the top 10, and generally the box has plenty of friendly stuff for them. I never cared for being on a feature box. I'd rather entertain people with interesting stories, learn what they like and don't like and use that to improve later on. I'm fine with negativity towards my work as long as there's an explanation towards it. I ain't God, so I make mistakes, and I want to learn from them. So even if you did hate the story, that wouldn't bother me; it might sting, but if you gave a decent reason for it, I could learn from that.
Again, no problem with you man. You're alright with me
I'm going to kill you if this turns about to be "not quite clop fic" where no actual sex occurs
EDIT: It wasn't :) Good!
Wow Winona didn't just learn to speak. She was able to speak dirty like no pony.
half a day?
or is this just how applejack talks?
3126853
Why do you always sign off on your comments? That is just weird.
~salsav91
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They don't even know it's poison joke at the beginning, but everyone seems to quickly accept that Winona can walk on two legs and talk.
I can't continue because the beginning is just too silly for me.
Dogs are still dogs in Equestria. Even if they have all these strange creatures, they are only strange to us. Everything in their world is normal to them. A dog suddenly being able to walk and talk isn't normal so a freak out is still justifiable.eh.
~Have a good one.
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A friend made me the pic, I haven't the skill to do so.
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It's just how I am. No other reason, really.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Great story! Thumbs up!
Why do you have hoof cuffs?... Haha
Actually, why AJ has hoofcuffs is the most important question on my mind. The second is why I'm not reading Sherlock Homes.
Genres: COMEDY ANTHRO
Yeah, no. Shame really, I actually like the overall premise of this a lot. Not going to to thumb it down, as it's a matter of personal taste, but I'm not going to read it either. Anthro is a dealbreaker for me, no matter how interesting it is.
>reads story
>my non brony brother comes in
>he starts reading it
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>Brother gets bleach