The chat between Conversation between Spike and the Royal Family was funny as hell. I also enjoyed the Mane 6's reaction to the pregnancy and Celestia's mood swings. Thanks for this great story.

Great ending and a good fic.

WOW!!!
AWESOME!!!

YESSSS

Good end to a good story. Will read again and again.

Bravo sir, bravo. Part of me thought that they would walk in on Celestia and Spike doing it. But still it was a very good story and I'm glad you were finally able to finish it.

kinda sad to see it end but all good things are sad when they do.

good ending I like it

I loved this story. Celestia and Spike shouldn't of taken the chance of her parents being early. After all, she said the same thing about her cycle and it was early also. Anyway, excellent story. So...any chance we are going to be able to read about Luna 'time' coming around?

so is the next story going to be lunar embrace

That was good. No it was awesome!

A great end to a great story. You do Spike fans proud. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. If your looks for any Spike fic ideas I have more than a few in storage.

Very good chapter. Wish there would be a story when its Luna's turn.

5245153 same oh gods that was hilarious

5245251 very true but that doesn't make it hurt any less

bravo my good friend bravo loved it to the end

Well that was a satisfying ending.

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Beautiful, simply beautiful

Good end. Wraps up everything but yet at the same time leaves me wanting some more. SO you can end it here and be good or you can at a later time come back and say. "Hmm i got some more ideas."

I still hope to see Spike live up to his Ancestors legacy and become more kick ass then all the Alicorns after all it is in a dragon's nature to fight for his hoard and kill anything that so much as trys to take away his family

Great Story. 10/10 to the fav you go

WELL DONE!! *WolfBow* although I think a one-shot of when its luna's time would be interesting!! *WolfishLOL*

I like the whole thing I give this:

Great Story and aww I want to read a sequal But the baby sounded cute.

a damned good story that is,i love it

NEED SEQUEL!!!

good ending to a good story now lets hope luna has a boy that will be a cool kid

Aww no sequel... Well a small spinoff of Spike 'helping' Princess Luna would be nice.

I'm happy with the way this ended. I mean for a story who's plot boils down to: Celestia and Spike f*** to save the planet, it was handled rather nicely. We had adventure, romance, drama, clop and comedy like how they murdered an island with sex and went to outer space to become one with the force. Fun times.

A great end to a fantastic tale!

More.

...Nah, I'm kiddin'.

Ahhh...I feel good now. It's the kind of feeling you get when you finish, say, a good anime and ya just take a minute to sit back, look up at the ceiling and think about the journey. All that had happened and all that ya felt during the ride. It's a good feeling.
Now, I need to go chug a bottle o' coke and fuck my girlfriend and not specifically in the order.
Take it easy.

Dirty liar! You said you had plans for a sequel

*GASP* Spike! You fool!

You didn't have sex with Celestia at all during her pregnancy, when she was growing more beautiful each day with your love child?! Do you realize what an opportunity you two missed?!? Pregnant women are HOT!!!! I'm surprised Celestia was able to control herself, growing hornier each day with the pregnancy hormones and and the feeling of the life the two of you created in her growing bigger each day! Make sure you don't make the same mistake again when you and Celestia conceive your next child and especially when you make a child with Luna!

very fun story loved it from day one thanks for making it

Oh and one more thing. If you do a sequel it'd be a waste not to include a Majora's Mask reference. You know with the whole moon crashing to the planet thing.

And thus, another epic tale comes to a close. Thank you.

Yaay, Spike can now two time with parents blessings on both daughters? Pity Polaris didnt want to get a sample as well, just to make sure her daughters were being well seen to.

And so, the sun sets on another amazing story of life in the day of the baker dragon, and the moon rises, then the other moon, and finally the glowing orb in the sky.

Anyone manage to reboot Twilight yet? Or has Pinkie run off with the sparkles.

5246614 i agree, because on this thread you said that there would be a trilogy

5249075 Well, that was a LONG time ago, and I'd prefer if I could get some other things (like college, life, etc) out of the way first.

I never did say I'd never, ever make a sequel...

5249103 you are playing a risky game my fine sir/madam

This was an amazing story, the best Spike and Celestia story I have seen in a while.

Though it is over I wouldn't mind rereading it in the future.

loved it

To be honest, I was half expecting them to walk in on the sex scene, but I'm happy with this.

Great ending. good clop scenes. And since you have no plans for a sequel, then get moving on Dragon's Journey.

You still have a long ways to go on that one

(PS.) I have no plans for a sequel.

that's a pity
really good story deserves a sequel

A very fitting end to such a wonderful story. I am glad to have had the pleasure to proofread this work, even if I had almost nothing to contribute due to the inherently excellent quality of your writing.

Looking forward to your future works.

What a great story :) the feels :D

Fantastic work. I'm sad to see it go, but happy that it's done.

I know u said u had no plans for a sequel but you should still make one

Truly amazing story!
Give it sometime. A sequel, even if it is a one-shot clop, will come to you. In the meantime, take a well deserved rest before you tackle another one of your stories.

You earned it!

I would ok without a sequel but I would like to have a scene where spike helps Luna with her heat at least

I am a little disappointed that it seems the potential ideas about Cadence and Luna are left by the wayside apparently.

But I have to say it: This is one of the better stories---no, it is one of the best stories that I have had the honor of reading. I salute you Abrahams. You have taken this in such a way that it wasn't like a story with a token dragon and his princess. You made this really show that it was two souls that seamlessly clicked---and two entire different characters on the surface; one is the ruler of a planet, and the other is basically a scribe. Yet it showed that they have so much more in common and ultimately discovered that they were made for each other, both figurately and literally (Who else could satiate a virtual star??)

Sure it was fate (and a little carelessness on Celestia's part---Luna had a point to yell at Tia for waiting until the last minute because of the potentially dire consequences, but ultimately no harm, no foul) and a little luck (Spike's friendship bracelet was the Chekhov's gun here between a fiery demise and satiating Celestia), but it seems that it was destiny that a dragon and an alicorn can show the entire universe they can co-exist and share. And now there is proof---tiny baby Zenitha. Maybe she will turn out to be the first of a potential race of alicorn-dragon hybrids, and subtly spawn other pony-dragon unions. I'm pretty sure that Celestia and Spike are not the only dragon-alicorn union out there in the universe. Hell, it looks like that won't even be the only alicorn-dragon couple on this particular planet if the foreshadowing of Spike tending to Luna when her time arrives actually comes to fruition.

I would loved to have a segment where the Bearers came back to Canterlot to see the baby, though. Twilight and friends were there when Tia and Drake told them what happened, and Twilight and the crew were once again summoned when it was official that Celestia is actually pregnant. We could have a trifecta---have the girls actually see the baby for the first time. Or even better, they could see Zenitha when she is walking and knows a few words (I bet her first two words would be Mama and Dada [daddy]). Personally I would love to see how Fluttershy and Rarity react to Zenitha. can kinda see how the others would react---just want to see those two more.

Also, we have a lot of artist and illustrators on here---I'm pretty sure that somebody will eventually have pictures of Orion, Polius, and Zenitha, as well as how Spike and Celestia look now after the baby was born. I would love to see!! I hope that the descriptions he put in would be enough to have a pretty good image of them.