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I have no idea whether to be aroused, or laugh or be concerned or what.
This is a dark, erotic tale. I think.
I dunno. I'm just gonna stop thinking of it and read.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Very interesting; can't wait for more!
Celestia should also be remind of dragons and their 'packages' in its lower region.
Pretty good.
Poor Twilight Sparkle, right now she is thinking that Spike is in a hard and fierce task... well, is indeed hard
2851576 yeah man I feel ya, it has a plot, and it's just Celestia worrying over whether or not the world will be safe due to her heat, if Spike can please her... And this goes on just a little too long.
You've caught my interest. Now I'm waiting to see how you deliver. The anticipation is maddening!
MOAR!
well celestia since spike was raised by ponies, I think he is going to love your large, perky breasts and perfect ass.
2851741>>2851576 This is meant to be a slow-building, erotic story: not just some short, quick, meaningless clop a lot of people want it to be or hope it will be. But trust me when I say this: I have been brushing up my erotic writing skills, and I'm hoping the community will be impressed by what I churn out.
...eventually. This story won't run more than 15 chapters... likely.
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Oh, I like clop with plot. (not THAT kinda plot. Kinda)
It just seems odd and dark. Not a bad thing, it works with this.
~Skeeter the Lurker
Even an alicorn such as Celestia has doubts. Celestia should realize that Spike was raised among ponies, not dragons. Of course, he is going to find her quite attractive. However, one thing at a time. First, she has to explain everything to Spike and hope he doesn't freak out TOO much.
2851798 oh... Well in that case... UPVOTE PWERS ACTIVATE!!! *upvote powers activate*
2851806 Don't worry, it gets better: much, much better. This kind of better:
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That... Picture kinda scares me.
But at the same time...
~Skeeter The Lurker
2851798
Fifteen chapters? DAMN!!
I guess that's to be expected. I don't mind build up at all...as long as the payoff is worth it.
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Unfortunately, I can't see the image. I keep getting a '403 forbidden' message.
2851871 I think this will clear it all up.
Oh the social awkwardness... I love you
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yup, the pair of aces in the hole should be a right good surprise for her.
Like it so far. Please continue.
I'm not sure if I should be worried for basically everyone dying literally from an Alicorn's heat cycle, sympathetic for Celestia for having presex nerves, or laugh for seeing how Spike is going to react when he gets the full story on whats going on.
Now this is something special. Celestia of all ponies is not only a unsure virgin, but she is also worried if Spike will even be attracted to her.
This is priceless! I think I love the sexual inexperienced Celestia over an experienced one. It is so HOT!
hmmm if this is going to be anything like your other Spike fic I shall enjoy this! And I already enjoy it so far....the only thing I can imagine is when the get to the island and spike is like "What is the task princess? Defeat an evil lord? save an ancient kingdom? find a lsot treasure that will stop the inevitable doom of the planet?!"
"No Spike. I need you to have sex with me."
"......I'm okay with this"
Bring in the FAP!
cant wait for next installment
HAHAHAHA!! This was sweet! I have to say to see this side of Celestia, innocent, bashful, CUTE! It was like she said, like a little filly with her first crush! Aww!! I remember when Cole was like this... I'm a wake her up to read this.
Well that was a fast update...
"Look! Up in the sky!" Screamed a woman by the temple shrine.
"It's a bird!" Shouted a man who stopped his act of chopping wood to point at the sky.
"It's a plane!" squeaked a petite young woman sitting at a coffee table and pointing towards the object in the sky.
"What in the orbitals name is plane?" Said the young man sitting across from the woman. His eyes transfixed upon her open cleavage.
"No!" Yelped an old man watering his rosé garden. "It's a flying horse woman!"
"Grandpa!" Said a young boy walking off the porch near the old man. "What have you been smoking? What ever it is...it's working."
I do like the fact it's not some quick clop, there's a reason more or less (it sounds a little odd to me, but to each their own) for what's going on.
There was a little more detail on Celestia's figure than I would like, but it still works in the story so I won't complain.
I still look forward to more. Liked and faved
"I'm going to take a clop plot and write a real story"
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have not read it yet i just have to tell you how much i love your frequent updates, i mean seriously its only been a day and you've got a new chapter out like it was pre written so i just wanted to say keep it up.......oh uhhh and here i think you've earned these
man, you would think she was trying to impress him? oh wait, nevermind.
This slow buildup is working really well, I think. Celestia telling Spike what is happening is gonna be hella interesting.
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It's a bird, it's a plane. Man, what DAFUQ are those two so excited about?
oh you tease... I hate and LOVE these slow-building love-making stories
that and I love the ideas of how Celestia and all came about, but it was kinda confusing to me about how dragons came before... but I guess it's like with crocodiles that haven't changed that much in almost a hundred million years (and in comparison, the first primates were around 58 million years ago)
Celestia being so innocent and conflicted was priceless.
Wow. A clopfic got frontpaged without any actual sex in it. That's a first for me.
YEAH SO FREAKIN EROTIC!!!!!!
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The end of the world as we know it, as well as the rain of dark maker satellites.
Need. More.
2852647 but does that mean it's a bad first.
is this antro? I really can't tell, because there's ponies, hands, fingers and hooves, these things usually don't go together.
more please, i like the plot of this story. should be interesting
2852988 There's an anthro tag, so yeah. It's anthro.
damn Celestia be a fine sexy lady bueno
if i remember my dragons right, dragons can use their magic to make their body better i,e stronger, faster, more stamina and endurance etc and that male dragons have two members or something like that if you do go this rout Celestia will be in for a wonderful surprise
While this story is interesting, without any actual clop I can't really favorite it yet now can I? I mean, it's advertised as a clop. Nuff said there. I get that this is also a real story to be taken seriously though, but without knowing if the clop part of the story is any good I can't really favorite it, no matter how good the non-clop writing is (which is very good btw). I'll keep an eye on this and choose when the sex comes around whether I favorite or not. If both the clean and unclean sides are of this quality, then you'll have my little gold star.
One question I must ask though. About how "filthy" is this story going to get?
Well well well, now this is something interesting indeed. Very rare you get a Spikelestia, even rarer that it's anthro. Adding in it'll be fifteen chapters and the current two chapters are 5k words apiece? This has a lot of potential.
2853304 It'll start out slow, like a romantic song. Then, it's just gonna keep building, and building, until... yeah, it's gonna get hot.
2851817 I'm sure it will. Also, I can help you do a proofread. But I may not be the best since I have not done this before. I can help with helping the story flow, grammatical corrections, and the like. But sex scenes, I will leave that to you. Keep up the good writing. I enjoy this.