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Yeah, personally I can't see why people would even give it a thumbs down.... It just seems redundant to do so....
ANYWAY, Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one, and I love how the history aspect is so well connected with the rest of the story, good job!
So they are really gonna have to save the planet now
In my opinion the story was going great up until the end of this chapter. I never liked this sudden turn in these kind of stories.
4009132 It wasn't so much a sudden turn as a reminder that they have to have more sex in order to save the world.
I'm such a stickler for keeping the tone serious when I want to.
So, the solar flare is on a direct course for that little island. I hope it doesn't destroy the planet (after everything that has happened that would be so fucked-up.) I think it will make sure that Celestia chose correctly and really make her and Spike equals.
I'm just speculating here.
ahh the love and Spike get ready for balls to the wall extreme alicorn on dragon sex
the story most likely has half the thumbs down from people that just like downvoting stories that have high upvotes while the other half consists of anthro haters/ clop hater / spikelestia haters. I love the story i upvoted it and now i ask how long do you think the net chapter will be because thats a hell of a cliff hanger.
well their may be some thumbs down but 1300 thumbs up will dwarf it all lol. great chapter by the way can wait for the next one
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Heh.
Is it wrong of me for sincerely hoping that Celestia and Spike go directly from being virgins to being parents-to-be?
I'm thinking this ascension scene will be somewhat similar to the "New Regeneration Cycle Get" scene from the last episode of the 11'th Doctor's series: massive amounts of power being flooded into 2 beings, the power bursting out of their bodies in a glorious energy cascade, and one FINAL burst where it just sends a massive amount of wind everywhere, up-heaving huge amounts of dirt, gravel; heck, I'm imagining the same blast reaching the outer-lands, even reaching ponyville, but hoping no fatalities result
The tale to me is as it always is, intriguing. I personally find the lore of this universe to be utterly fascinating, especially given the fact you've melded real world events with the fantasy aspects that come with writing about MLP and I say again this would be a spectacular read without the clop, which isn't even the high point of all this tale, the romance and character development have always been the thing I've enjoyed the most, the porn's just an added bonus. (Truth be told I don't read for boner inducing status... that's what certain websites are for) Now as for the downvotes...
1.) It's clop (MLP purists HATE clop, but for some reason they have it on 'show mature')
2.) It's straight (I guarantee PeppyGreyskull's downvoted this)
3.) It's Spikelestia (Without a doubt Peppy's downvoted this and probably told her followers to down vote it too)
4.) It's Anthro (Lots of pony fans HATE that because they hate furries, and Anthro IS furry...)
5.) Waifu stealing (Spike just 'Flashed' Tia, there is a disturbance in the fedora/neckbeard force...)
6.) It's got over 1,000 likes (The most shallow of us hate it when people are successful, especially when they lack the ability)
Knowing them, I give it 30 rounds.
I've been waiting forever for this moment to arrive and let me tell you; it was definitely worth the wait!:D Great job.
You wanna know why the thumbs went down?
The golden rule of fans in any creative medium; People are Fickle.
So this fic, one of my top ten personal favorites, was updated:
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Finish reading:
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also this line
made me think; "Yeah, things are gonna get wild soon, very soon"
WHOOOO!!
Oh, that was good, Oh, that was satisyin'
Makes me feel kinda...nostalgic, to be honest
Pretty much started and finished catching up in the past few days. I gotta say... This was just seriously well written. This sex in this chapter made all others crumble by how beautiful it was described. Brilliant job there dude.
i hope Celestia get pregnant after this, i would love to see the fallout when she announces that she is with child
.........................
So, in some strange cosmic form of "making a wrong right" as far as history (the way Celestia told Spike) goes, this whole issue of Celestia's heat and having Spike as her lover is the universe's way of redeeming both the ancestors of the Princess of the Sun and ancient dragonkind for something that was done literally a whole different light-year time ago???
Hell, if that's the case, it better mean that if Spike and Celestia make a child, that would be the end all for the fate of the Earth as a whole---and it would be because that child would be the result of the alicorns and the dragons finally working together in harmony, like what was supposed to happen aeons ago. In essence, the equivalent of a giant asteroid that was headed for Earth missing the planet by the cosmic equivalent of "That was way too close".
But beyond that, Spike and Celestia, you both have a job to do. Celestia did say that it wasn't enough to just take her virginity; rather, even though she didn't say it outright, she needs to conceive. She needs to be a mother. And more importantly, we need that future child's father to be a bit of dragon blood as well. More sex for all!! Don't stop until Celestia's so full of dragon spunk that she'll be the mother of triplets!! And then fill her up again!!! She had never even touched another creature in that respect prior to you, Spike!! Don't you think that the both of you have to make up for literally MILLENINIA of lost time?!
I wonder if that prediction that I put out probably a few month ago is finally coming to pass: Celestia and Spike are lovers, and Spike will become Celestia's husband as well as her prince. Though after realizing what history showed us, it's more than adamant that Spike (a dragon) is able to help restore the lost rule of dragons that came about long before the alicorns.
Normally I shy away from Anthro stories, simply because I'm not a big fan of them. You, sir, have the honor of being the only author on this site that I have ever favorited any anthro stories from. That includes this story and "A Dragon's Journey". Don't feel too bad about the downvotes, people are terribly fickle and that includes bronies (neckbeard crusaders or otherwise). And...I'm a huge sucker for any Celestia ships that aren't a lesbian/incest pairing.
4009225 I honestly have no idea how long the next chapter will be, but I usually get the rough chapters out at around 6,000 words, with edits and revisions usually extending them by a good 2,000 words more.
What you did there. I see it.
4010603 Brony haters join this site just to Downvote stories. We never find them because they don't comment or anything.
And their pages are likely missing a comment section.
I don't get the point why so many writers make it seem like that happens every single time you have sex for the first time. Fuck sake I wish I'd see even ONE story without it happening.
Probably the biggest sex-stereotype ever, gah!
Okay now lets continue...
A side note here, you have still succeeded to make possibly one of the best sex-stories so big ups to you for that.
Continue reading again...
I love how you're able to write everything with so much emotion and drama and beauty and then you just randomly throw the word "cunt" in middle of it all...
Final notes:
That ending yo...
Absolutely wonderful! I love the way you were able to create so much emotion during the sex. I appreciate when I read a sex-story that is something more than a one-shot that feels like the characters of god damn My Little Pony would've been turned into pornstars...
...I don't like the fact that I can say that like it's no big deal...
But seriously, there isn't always blood during the first time and the fact that everyone seems to think so is making me
angryslightly annoyed.4012450 Well, she's been a virgin all of her life (over 1,000 years), and besides, that part is gone. So... no more blood from me.
Unless things get... kinky.
shit storm approaching, ETA seven and a half minutes.
shit storm approaching, ETA seven and a half minutes.
shit storm approaching, ETA seven and a half minutes.
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don't forget. Haters gonna hate.
*Applauds* very well done. sex scene and all. the way you gave even old Sol a personality was good.
the virgin blood thing, I have to agree though, that has been used way too much in way too many stories, even in printed books, a female can have it broken by accident, by an op to remove a tumor, so many things that although it might be tight, there ouwld be no blood.
And I hope the next chapter comes very quickly
still very well done I give it:
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It's... acceptable but it still somewhat pissess me off.
And the amount of years doesn't really seem to matter according to this story.... unless there's a hole in the plan... uh... unintentional hole... eh fuck it now that sounds wrong too.
"lol you said "fuck it"."
GOD DAM-
4010171 In other news the sun grew a troll face and laughed at his misfortune.
I wonder how Rarity will react to all this?
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Depends. Is she gonna see Spike in a new light? Hell yes!!
But how is the question.
Is she gonna see the "stallion" that pleasured, seduced (not really, but it fits), and sexed Princess Celestia, the co-ruler of all of Equestria, knowing that Spike is that stallion, in a new light?,
Is she gonna experience the realization of how close in friendship that she is with a future Canterlot noble and basically her ticket to the top of the proverbial food chain?
Or is she gonna see Spike the same way her friends see him: the ultimate knight for Equestria and the ultimate assistant, willing to do whatever it takes to maintain harmony and god knows what else to make sure that Equestria remains a peaceful land?
And going on that related tangent, I wonder how she would handle it, if it is discovered that Celestia is with child? It wouldn't be that hard to connect the dots should that occurs, since the only ponies there when he/she were concieved were Celestia (a FEMALE alicorn in heat) and Spike (a very virile MALE dragon). The mares aren't idiots, though sometimes they seem a bit clueless. Hell, how would Luna, Cadence, and the rest of the Mane 6 handle that?! Obviously, only they, Spike, and Celestia would be the only ponies in all of Equis that would know what happened.
4021733 Wow that's deep!
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Well....when you put it that way.....
And I can totally see what you did there...
Great job. Love this chapter!
Spike has claimed the mare, conquered a princess, and now must best a alicorn!
Good luck, Spike and Celestia. And remember to have fun!
Being in Anthro must be the problem. While it's not my first choice, I still like it. My like or dislike of it does depended on how much more feral then human the characters are described in the stories I read and pics I see.
For me it's, hands and hooves (for ponies), claws and clawed feet (for dragons), and claws and paws (for griffins).
But, your great with Anthro, so why worry about it now. Plus the down votes could be because of pairing. A few to many closed minded reads out there, and they don't even have the guts to say why they didn't like it.
On a side note; when this is done, would a feral rewrite be out of the question. Sorry, but... the image of a teenage Spike being sized up, or slightly bigger then Celestia is still something I love to see and read. With or without them being paired.
Dude, less than 5% of the ratings were thumbs-down. I think you should be proud of that.
well, besides t history lesson on alicorns' rise to power n' apparently t sun's way too early release . I'm glad that finally done t deed ; heh, even tho it seemed to only briefly calm down since shortly afterwards she questioned on when round 2 can begin
I think Spike deserves a little victory fanfare for going through all that.
(Funny how I reference a game about aliens.)
Anyways, you did a damn good job as usual. I really, really the personification of the sun. Only few writers can ever do that so well. The sex could have lasted a lot longer though... I mean... it was three to five paragraphs long. You should extend that a bit.
You shouldn't reflect on why some dickfaces dislike your story, they probably can't comprehend advanced vocabulary and syntax. You should focus on how amazing this story is and how it's hit 10,000 mothafuckin' views. I could only dream of that.
Happy tidings to you, good sir.
-YNA
4045518 Well, technically it was their first time having actual, penetrating sex. Don't worry: I'm not done with the sex of this story.
Not by a long shot.
There will be sex. Lots of it.
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So there will be the aforementioned possibility of ascension for Celestia once she and Spike have done the deed enough times to be covered? I have to wonder if this means if Celestia is the only one who ascends. I have some weird feeling that I think Spike's gonna show Celestia something (other than his genitals ) that neither him nor the princess would have even though would happen. (I.E. I think we will discover if dragons can ascend as well.)
Waiting for more!! And of course, we have to see how the mane 6 react when they know the true secret of why Spike and Celestia were alone, though I doubt it wouldn't be too hard for some, if not all of them to kinda guess correctly when Spike and Celestia returns and they are holding hooves/claws or sensually holding on to each other while talking to the Mane 6.
*reads the last posted chapter, I have to hide my wings as they go POOF*
Yes. Im Winged Wolf. and I got one thing to say about that Innocent Lost chapter.
That was HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!
It went from Sexual Epic to dime store romance novel in a few sentences.
And with that I will Continue to let this sit in my favorites because its actually well written
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"Dime Store Romance"???
I'm a little confused. I thought the premise of a "dime story romance" would basically be a trashy novel, complete with erotic scenes and descriptive prose, but it's basically a story where two characters fall in love and, frankly, they fuck.
In this story, sure, there are sexual scenes, but for the most part it seems to be more of a romance that also ties in with the mythology of alicorns and dragons. It doesn't seem "trashy" at all to me. I love all the internal conflict between the two characters. It shows that one is not just shoehorning some messes up paper-thin plot just to get the characters naked. Also it kinda puts them together--Celestia has never had a lover before, period; Spike's been around females for so long it's ridiculous, but yet he's never gotten closer than being just a friend. Yet, through actual fate (not destiny, fate) it allows the barriers and self-imposed walls to gradually break down, and it's natural that with Celestia and Spike interacting with each other more, and knowing the other side better than they originally thought, It's entirely plausible for our beloved drake and alicorn princess to start having more intense feelings for each other.
Basically, I think this story is a far, far, FAR stone throw's away from being a "dime store romance".
MMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
please?
4012450 You're right about that statement. Having sex for the first time does NOT induce bleeding, at least 99% of the time.
If a woman does bleed it's because some jackass decided to go "Ramrod" on her and just jammed it in her without a care.
Watch this to better understand.
4065259 We'll just assume that Celestia, being several thousand years old, is "tighter" than anyone would expect and experienced minor tearing from Spike's massive tool. Also, come on, I know it doesn't happen "all" the time, but... it gives it a bit more power in the story, don't you think? A visual representation of her virginity being taken-, no, given away to the one she loves?
Maybe I'm over-thinking it: I just hope my writing it doesn't turn people off from the story or dislike it based on what I wrote versus what reality is.