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Great! Just as I was heading out for work!
Now what do I do...
Hope I don't get fired for reading on the job.
Into vampire shit? or a legitimate vampire? This was a very slow chapter at first but then it just kinda went fuck all.
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Have Flo inside the laptop as a fail-safe? In case Celestia wants to seize it.
well, this chapter was slightly confusing...
i read too fast and did not realize the party was a dream for some time.
good chapter though
*Sigh* Fucking Luna....
Fucking dammit luna!
Another awesome chapter! Sucks for Luna cause Nav's controls the dream device completely now and Luna can't do shit about it cause Nav's trained in control over the dreamscape. Also a Nightmare how stupid can those two get, if Nav had a Nightmare it's not like the two of the could do anything to stop him not without starting a war they couldn't win. Also Luna fucked now cause Nav's never gonna trust her again not after this time
Luna fucked up
Вот это поворооот!!!
Awesome chapter. Ending specificaly. I can`t wait for a new chapter.
Good god man I hope it doesn't take you very long to get the next chapter out.
i hope the next chap come soons.. i needs it...*shakes uncontrollably*
edits: i just realize the things(cant remember what she called em) luna told nav to run from when in dreams are most likely the dream AI protectors
A nice chapter. The whole story is just as awesome. I´m curious what will happen next also when the Elements of Harmony will get into action.
So, Nav now has total control of the dream machine. I can't wait to see the spectacular way in which this goes wrong.
-Mis
Yes! You updated my friend! This chapter was awesome!!!
Why is it always Luna fucking things up
I was sorta hoping he would go to the festival again and compete. But noooo, bitches just gotta be crazy! That Luna photo thou, hot hot hot hot hot hot.
OH my GOD!
I can't help but see this whole thing ending poorly. This shit just came out of nowhere.
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This feel. I know it.
sigh... wahtmustido you never fail to get good old nav into further trouble.... Never change based write fag
I always get a few laughs in when Gilda is referred to as an O.G. I'm hoping to see Spike X Nav (M/M) sometime in the future. Keeping my fingers crossed that he gets it on with Cadance and Shining Armor too. Boy, that ending escalated quickly!
I got to be honest, for some reason or another, I loved this chapter for all of the twists and tricks. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Moar! Also how close is that magic phrase that makes the princesses remember their deal?
O.M.G that ending.
*Cough cough* just wondering but is there going to be any "action" with midnight blossom? And also LUNA STOP FUCKING UP SO BADLY *sigh* welp the shit has hit the fan..... Again
Oh man there's so much suspense I can't take it!
Also goddammit Luna.
He could probably send all the Vagrants to invade Luna's dream as payback.
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Hehehehehehe...
Nice Chap, looking forward to the next one.
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In the case you aren't lying, do you know how stupid it is to announce your age if you're under 18 on a mature fic?
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Cuz bitches be crazy!
-Mis
2848914 Although that would be further proof that he is as young as he claims...
now I'm kind of curious to see what would happen if the elements were used on him and do I see another rape on the horizon?
Luna messes up once more.
She just doesn't know when to give up.
Anyway great chapter, have a fluttershy
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Who said he had total control? He can just access some special commands.
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Give it time.
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It was very much hinted at. Two or three of my prereaders realized it was Luna before the reveal. And she has been hinted to know about Flo.
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You'll see when you see.
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He could, but there are innocent ponies in there. He doesn't want to mess with them.
This chapter is so deliciously evil that I must have more.
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Really, this story has done what it meant to do. And I love it for it.
At first it made you sympathize with the main to a point, and love his logical thinking, be accorded to his statements to the letter by the amount of reason within them.
Then it makes you feel anger to those around him, want him to get his way as many take advantage of him.
But then he begins to go a little corrupted, but you would be with him because you can understand and feel the same way.
But then he goes into a sex frenzy, going into any hole available, be it male or female, HIM being male or female.
Then you start to dislike the way he does things, the way he makes his decisions, most to have sex or for his own personal goals, you feels as if you are about to drop the 'F' to the character.
But then shit happens to him, things go down, actions need to be made, and Nav goes back into the one we once knew, and so we fall to his side, supporting him.
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I love this story for this. And this chapter is a nice resume of what I mean. In the beginning I could care shit for nav, the ways he when into things, all to feel good, I wouldn't judge him for it, but I wouldn't support him for it. I would never wish him wrong, I mean, I was wishing he got hit by a fucking train by the way he was acting, trying to mount everything and everyone in each moment of dialogue. But then the scene with Luna came and I was 100% in Nav's side again, like a dick friend you are still friends with, I'm really amazed.
Well FUCK@^&$NG DONE, Whatmustido, really well done.
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Still love the skip sex feature.
You use have come a long way with your writing since starting this. Setup and execution were superb. Thanks for giving me something fun to read on my day off!
Luna did to Navi what he did to Twilight as 'Z'. I think he kind of deserved that really. Course I could see why Luna would be really concern if Nightmare Moon had corrupted Navi. That's something that hits home for her and honestly with the way this world is set up I wouldn't be surprised if Nightmare Moon was a rouge elemental that leeched on to Luna that long ago. Luna might be wrong doing this, but everything she did was taken out the handbook Navi made. He can give it, but taking it is another matter.
The questions Navi should be asking.
Why were both princesses thinking about hitting him with the EOH even before this rave party?
This dream machine that protects the ponies, what exactly does it protect them from? Something sinister? Is there a machine for every race?
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Obviously not, *grins* but that wasn't very thought through. I've been banned from other sites for doing the same thing. You know, before. When I wasn't 18. *cough*
Flo acts kind of like a mother to Nav.
The fact that she uses his body for sex extremely amuses me.
So Nav now basically has cheat codes for the dreamworld and this chapter revealed EVEN MORE stuff about the history of humans and the end of the world that i will have to speculate about while rambling to myself about the theories ive come up with.
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You're doing it wrong.
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*arouses me.
So very deliciously interesting. So the vagrants are human-made to guard the new species.. in their dreams. That's a strange objective, but must be an important one. If they are guarding ponies against Disco, they must be "effective" to a point. But why only ponies?
With this, i like to think the elementals original objective was to terraform the world and watch over the other species too, as the vagrants do. Maybe they lost sight of this with time and/or Discord did his thing and it crashed.
Hng! Cant wait to see more.
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Fair point.
-Mis
......so beautiful
so now things are back on the upslope, hopefully he doesent get fucked over and/or get raped..or something, man its like the ponies are too inocent to hold power,OH WAIT thats the IS problem!....nav just take the princesses down already acceptable losses and all that allowed and make a united utopia where all the races can live in peace.....or get captured and used as a f*ck toy by a select few and be labeled as "corrupted" your choice
no more mister nice nave they've done to much to this world and you to be let alone
Nav is a dangerous enemy and is getting more dangerous every day. He has connections with the leaders of every race excluding minoturs. He also has increasing control over the dream realms, a source of human knowledge and the elemental AIs. The ponies don't have shit on him.
Luna pulled a Leroy Jenkins and jumped the gun on this, not good.
2849203 I'm sad to say that I actually didn't relize it was Luna :( I'm usually good at spotting that kind of stuff :( NOOOOO I HATH LOST MY TOUCH OF FORESHADOWS or you're just that good. I'm gonna go with the latter :3
I had my assumption that it was Luna because Celestia is normally that forward and she wouldn't know her way around a dream like that. Great chapter once again!
Ok, I love this story. It is amazing. But I have a question: Is Discord controlling Navarone, and making him do all this stuff, and is he aware of this, or is Discord just able to see out of Nav's mind? Also, once again, I Love This Story :D
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That's a question that hasn't been answered in the story and I won't answer it here.
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I answered some of these questions in the chapter.
wat.