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Ponyville is peaceful community when there aren't any active threats to Equestria. So peaceful, in fact, that Twilight's life was beginning to edge toward the feeling of boredom. Luckily, she know's just the cure for that: A vacation with the girls. Unfortunately, one of them may have motives for going other then R&R, a reason much more... personal.
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Yay!! It's here! I can't wait to see more of this! Best of luck writing it!
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Seriously, I got the message that this passed moderation like 20 seconds ago, you're like a vulture waiting for your pray to drop dead... or in this case get released to the site.
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Nah, I just reloaded my notifications page at the perfect moment. But supposedly I'm the "Lurker in Training" and what-not.
3144780 oh dear God no!
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What? Don't freak out bro.
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where all doomed
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How so? It was in one of my blogs. You can give that a look. Skeeter even...kind of agrees.
Nice start! Maybe a clinical but that's Twilight...
I really hope for more very soon!
And soooo many Super Saiyan Rainbow Dashs in the comments...
3145112 haters be hatin'
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there.
I don't hate... I like! Maybe I should've added a
Does that help instead?
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3145434 I have both of those as my wallpapers
ones for my laptop and ones for my iPad
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Well... Shit happens!
How about this then?
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Nice setup, looking forward to seeing where this goes
Because I can definitely picture her being so focused on her secret crush that she'd assume everything is related to it, and it would have been totally awkward and funny. But maybe it's better that she didn't tip her hand too early.
But Twilight seems to have forgotten to actually invite Fluttershy... was that on purpose?
I'm also slightly disappointed that Rainbow's response to “A little get away” wasn't "Y-you mean like, just the two of us?"
Woo, another contest entry. Best of luck!
Suck it Skeeter.
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I mentioned in there that she went to see Fluttershy. in all honesty the only reason that it wasn't written in was because this was originally drafted quite a while ago and I didn't want to stretch it out any longer than it needed to be.
Bad luck for Rainbow Dash, just wantet to confess her feelings but Twilight ruined her plan.
I'm looking forward for the next chapters.
Two things, you need a cover :P
and what means R&R?
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R&R generally refers to Rest and Relaxation, basically a vacation.
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Ah thanks!
'Bit of a slow start'? But those are the best kinds, gives us more story.
That, "all six of us" line in the first chapter was pretty annoying. Did Twilight just suddenly forget she has six friends, not five?
Anyway, I sure hope Spike is gonna be able to share this vacation with all his friends instead of getting stuck with a bunch of obnoxious kids.
YAY, MOAR
shame you couldn't make the contest, but if it means you can flesh the story out more, I'm ok with it.
Poor Rainbow, confess your feelings! Then you and Twi can roll in snow, snogging :3
Liked the Lord of the Rings reference and it is a shame that you couldn't make the contests deadline. Oh well!
Somehow I think we'll be seeing Rainbow sitting on a couch in the lounge, scowling at the world, with a shiny new white 'sock' on her hindleg ...
Still, curious to see just how ponies ski and snowboard; it looks like you're having them reared up on two legs, right?
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Yeah, I fiddled with the idea for quite a while (snowboarding was almost always going to be like human snowboarding, not much I could do with that) Skiing was between having all four hooves attached to two snowboard-like skis, so that the front hooves were free but were still on the board while they were skiing, or like normal humans. In the end I've gone with just normal human style, because I really can't be bothered to bend the laws of physics and equine anatomy to devise a better way. And we've seen they don't have much problem balancing on two legs, so it's not that far of a stretch.
Then should be than.
Quit should be quite.
This should actually read:
Any doesn't need to be in this sentence.
Should read:
Same thing here. Should read:
Ok and that's it. This story has potential thus far. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
I liked this chapter, I'm really interested in where this is going
You use the wrong spelling for some words, for example, you used by instead of buy, and many other things, but other than that this story is going really good!
You should of put one bed in rainbow and twi's room, so then they would have to figure something out!
Apple Bloom take it away...
<BUT I WANT IT NOWWW!
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I have something planned for that, don't you worry *evil laugh*
Oh, the awkwardness that I have planned....
punpunpunpunpunpunpunpunpunpunpunpun
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Thank you sooooooo freaking much! I've been looking for a wallpaper that suggested (maybe?) Twidash that wasn't rubbing noses, cuddling next to a lake, or some other mushy gushy scene. Not that I don't like those, they just won't work for my wallpaper.
3776668 uhh....ok?
Match maker Pinkie is best Pinkie.
I really like this story! Think you'll ever continue?
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Yep! As soon as I'm finished with my current contest I'll be making an effort to finish all my unfinished stories before moving on to any other big projects.
I'm really looking forward to more of this one. I've been reading a fiction a day from you, and I just wanted to say thanks for sharing your work with all of us!
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You're in luck; I just finished my contest entry, and this is the fic I want to focus on next. Updates should be starting again soon.
finally! can't wait for the next one!
There's a few errors here and there, but I can't punt them out yet, currently at work reading on my phone. I'll point them out when I get to a computer, if I remember.
Regardless, I think this was a great chapter.you represented Rainbows panic quite well, and I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.
Okay, been through it again. I'm kind of buggered after work, so I might have missed one or two (though I think I picked up a few new ones I didn't see on the first go, so yay me :P)
have to*
sight*
first*
mite*
put* (hurhur butt)
threw* do*
bottom*
to*
fell* Rainbow*
numbed*
meantime is one word.
Again, can't wait for the next chapter.
I almost fainted when I saw this in my feed. The sad thing is thatit was posted just before my break at work ended. I was forced to work impatiently until the next one to crack it open.
Thanks, Kod; you've made my week! :3
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Thanks for these, I actually just read through the chapter myself and it's even worse than I thought it was. I'll make those corrections when I have some time on my hands
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Ha, I finally get around to continuing this and you can't even read it until later. I don't think the universe wants you to read this.
Please make more PLEASE! Your probably the first person to do a holiday theme that isn't beach, at least the first I've seen.
when is the next chapter?
Oh man, this was simply hilarious
All in all:
Pinkie, you're so... so... just Pinkie
Ah, Rarity, just as shining as always, yet seen no interesting stuff of her, i think
Shush, shush Aj, this is nor your time, nor place to put your helpful and honest hoof
Fluttershy was just what i've been excepting, and this cliffhanger in the end made me really amused and creates a lot of intrigue
Representing of Rainbows feels and actions there is just the most hilarious one i've ever seen, which is just great after bunch of other your fics i've read today
D'awww, Twi is lovely there, especially if meant the Rainbows "profesional" snowboarding and (thought it's obvious) her not much better skiing
I really hope that whenever you will be in mood to continue this one, you will be able and want to
Good luck with the fic you've been working for past... Erm, dont know how long you are working with it, exactly
For some reason, Coltensburg makes me think of St. Petersburg.