Comet Burst
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I'm more of a ZecoraMac shipper myself, but I can't deny that this was simply adorable! Great job!
D'awwww
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I'm glad you like it. I adore the idea of Cheerimac since it's a school teacher and a farmer, just like one of my favorite novels.
I was wondering when someone was going to do this. I like the paring... and damn I think someone needs to put together a CheeriMac group here.
2121689 And that novel is...? (Gahhh, my inner nerd coming out!)
Ah yes Cheerimac truly a great ship. Cheerillee even came up with a great nickname for Big Macintosh "Sugar Bear".
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Would you believe me if I told you it was Holes?
2121728 I read Holes, and saw the movie. It's that relationship of the side story between the onion guy and the school teacher, right? Shoot, I forget their names.
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Yes, I picture Cheerimac like Sam the onion guy and Kate the school teacher.
2121757 Ah, good way to look at it.
I can sorta picture it that way too, y'know, if I didn't have the "Hearts and Hooves Day" episode scarred into my brain.
Short, sweet, and to the point. I always enjoy a healthy dose of CheeriMac in the afternoon.
...And since we're on the topic...B.M. gets all the mares anyway
, so if an author ships him with any other mare I have no qualms with it. 
I already had my RoseMac prayers fulfilled, now I need a RariMac to sate my hunger.
Edit: Now get started with the next chapter of "Golden Armor" Comet Burst!
D'awwww!! ..... I'm suddenly wanting to write a shipping... I'll be right back. *SNEAK AWAY!!*
2121689 Yes I love to give my iMac a cheer.
That was splendid, I love a good Cheerimac story and you definitely delivered here
Great Job!
Wonderful story, Comet Burst. It actually good timing because while I was so busy today I didn't have much time to read and today would have been tiring to read TGA, though I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and this was wonderful, short and simply awesome. I vote 9 out of 10 Big Macs.
Well done Comet, well done
Very cute story. Happy Hearts and Hooves/Valentines/St. Cyril and Methodius Day.
d'awww. here's to the only legit shipping in the pony fandom!
followin'
I think that maybe Cheerilee was a bit OOC at the end, if you don't mind me saying. However, this is a very good fic, and I can't wait to see the rest of it.
and then my assistant was like, "More d'awws, sir?"
He's a good assistant. You used all mine up.
needs to be longer
Though I more prefer fluttermac this was still super cute!
i finally find a cheerliemac fic, there sssssooooo few of these
Hey cheerilee cheerilee, hey cheerilee cheerilee, hey cheerilee cheerilee I think i'm in love with you. Is what the name made me think of.
D'awws so cute
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Mr. and Mrs. Cake, Shining Armor and Cadence, Rarity's Parents have appeared onscreen as well as Twilight's, I don't know, I'm counting off a lot of confirmed ships here. Oh and Pinkie Pie's parents popped up on screen for a moment there as well. Maybe parents technically don't count though, hrm.
D'aww.
Cool! Ten out of ten Eeyups!
A nice little read. I do wish that it was a full story because of the fantastic writing, but it's effective enough as it is here. Great job.
I rate this a cool out of yes.
Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much that I have put together an audio version on YouTube.
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Oh sweet Celestia, that was awesome!
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This one was great! You had me dawwwing throughout.
:insertCheerileeface:
That was good. There need to be more good CheeriMac stories.
(Also, there needs to be a Cheerilee smiley.)
I like this fic a lot, but i just cant help myself but notice the lack of synonyms...Magenta mare, magenta schoolmare....eeerm...you could've come up with "teacher",just "mare"...
Good work tho.
I have added this story to my new recommendation group here.
Who was drunk enough to downvote this? I love. Keep up the good work!
Yays to to my favourite ship
Cute story though maybe a bit short.
Since you wanted a comment, I'll leave one (the review was not one of my kindest c.c). Suffice to say, I did not like this story, as I can't really believe that Cheerilee and Big Mac would want to pursue a relationship after the traumatic events of Hearts and Hooves Day. Not without a good deal of buildup, anyway. You force the "Cheerilee is sad because no special somepony" angle, and in the end, she comes off as horribly pathetic, so lonely that she'll take being mind-controlled into a false romance over being lonely. I'm frankly disgusted by this, but I'm also really sensitive to mind-control issues. Lastly, the invocation of romance novels at the end felt ironically a propos, because the scenario comes straight out of one, with weak emotions and romance as a character's life goal. The only suggestion I could give is "write something else", which it seems you've done 22 times, so you're okay. :)
listened to scribbler's reading of this and just loved it. very much a cheermac shipper myself and this just gave me the fuzzies for them
Was there really any other way this could've gone? This is the one true pairing.
Why is there practically no Cheerilee x Big Mac stories on FIMfiction?
That needs to stop! That needs to stop now. Why? because I want more cuteness like this. I loved Big Mac's letter, that was my favorite part.
I like this story. Although, I'd like to give a critique. You don't have to say she's a magenta pony with green eyes more than once. We know this after the first time you say it. You just make your story very repetitive, and it can annoy readers. Other than that, it was great. ^^