Words carry power. But is it the words that are left unspoken that carry the most power? What happens when two ponies, madly in love, lose everything that may have been in silence?
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I like it. Short and sweet. Good job.
Ah, how depressing... Doomed, but stable.
There needs to be more to this or at least a sequel pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
What I posted on deviantART sums it up, no reason I should repost it here.
3349531 Thank you. It's shorter than a lot of my other work because it was done on short notice.
3350004 I'm certainly glad that you enjoyed the story :)
3350135 Ah yes, the depressing story's sometimes turn out to be the good ones. I hope that was the case here.
3353303 Eenope. Sorry to say but this is a one-shot. Any and all further ending is left to the imagination of the reader.
3353577 I'm not sure which one was your comment but thank you
3354433 You need only click the link and it will take you there.
I guess some loves don't have happily ever afters... Great job, made me feel all the feels I needed to
3357338 Not all stories have a happy ending to them, but I'm glad you enjoyed it
Imma cry.
I think that the morale of this is that even when there are some things best left unsaid, when you keep your feelings pent up inside it can tear you down with regret like a sword ripping through the flesh without a second thought.
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Mmmmm, yessss. The tears if unfathomable sadness, yesss, let me taste them. 
3391996 That's the great part about literature. It can mean anything you want!! I like your imagery though, man. Got a lot of potential there.
3407566 thank you, hey I have started my first story, if you want to read it once I finish I would really appreciate it.
it's called answers, so when you get the time read it if you want. It would make me twice as happy 
3407587 Alright, just send it in the notes section and I'll read it over. If you want commentary I'll be happy to oblige. But be warned, I am RUTHLESS.
3409407 just so you know I spent a lot of time getting as far as i did just starting yesterday i lost track of my distance into it so forgive me if you find it over loading.
OMG I absolutely love it
That was romantically tragic.
I was listening to this while reading, it went GREAT. Overall, great fanfic.
beautiful I now like fluttermac
ok im not feeling good u hurt me in the feels 
Then came Filli Vanilli and that's that. . . (notice his sweating bullets singing in the school house?)
Love it, it was sad but so true.
3841526 Good, come to the dark side, we need more recruits over here on our ship
5502281 A happy ending to my sad little story afterall :D
5993847 I guess this situation appears in real life from time to time, yes. Though I wonder how often it happens when both parties reciprocate...
6072129 Often I'm sure, its happened to me multiple times I think, though I can't prove it. Besides there's over 7 billion people in this world, at least a million are bound to have this happen to them at least once or will.
Great job on the execution of this story. I like it.
I think you meant to put "they chose" in this sentence. It's a couple of sentences before the end of the story.
6096298 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. The error has been corrected :D
Dang. That's some deep, sad thoughts. Still, good story.