Night time. Truely a mysterious and wonderful time. What most ponies don't know is that some ponies have a secret night life.
Some of them sneak out to clubs. Some of them just like to party hard. Some are even rumored to be ponies that sleep during the day and are awake at night.
Then there are those select few ponies who serve as the eyes and ears for a secret organization run by Luna, The Princess of The Night.
Pinkie Pie is one of those ponies. In fact she just so happens to be the best of the best in her majesty's royal service, Agent P codenamed 001.
After returning from a trip to the Crystal Empire Pinkie Pie is called to service once again. Her mission this time is to travel back to the Crystal Empire and retrieve some magical artifacts that were created during the reign of the evil King Sombra.
Armed with the latest hi tech gadgets from T Branch 001 will stop at nothing to complete her mission. And anypony who gets in her way will be sorry.
This takes place after the events of "Crystal Empire Part 2" but before "Magic Duel".
Huh other than the a few minor spelling mistakes this story wasn't that bad. I wonder if the people who downvoted actually read this story. Here have a thumbs up!
In case any of you were wondering the gadgets were based off of "James Bond Agent Under Fire" and "James Bond Nightfire". Both of which were video games I grew up with.
I'd like to know why everyone seems to downvoting this. Please tell me it's not the content because if is then don't read.
I have nothing wrong with thumbs down as long as it's not simply because you don't like the title or it's not the type you like. Don't judge a book or a fic for this matter by it's cover.
2022723 welll...... you have some funny points but the flow is like driving over rocks. Pinkie pie is also out of character. A few other things as well.
Wow, Pinkie seems pretty normal in this story. Which is weird. I have to agree that she may be a little out of character, but I get why. Plus I like Spy stuff, and I played those games a lot too. It's probably getting a lot of down votes due to the flow of the story like Mr. Stargazer said. It's very hard to keep focused while reading it. I love the idea, but you could add a few things here and there. Maybe even cut the length of it to include different chapters, it's too long and drawn out right now. Any way you decide, you still have a pretty neat story here.
This feels like it can become a mix of James Bond, Mission Impossible and Metal Gear.
So sombra was searching for powerful crystals? I wonder what type of crystals?
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"I am totally not hinting here"
Interesting…………
001 doesn't quite have the same ring to it as 007, If it were me, I'd have gone with 003.14. because Pi.
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Honestly I think it's problem is that it's underwhelming. A Pinkie Spy story shouldn't be so... Not fun. There's a lot of wasted potential here, what with your Pinkie basically being a Cardboard Cutout of James Bond. I would have expected, and liked to see, some more Crazy antics out of 'Agent P'. As for the writing, you have a slightly annoying tendency here to drop important words or sometimes whole phrases. which sometimes makes it difficult to what you are saying. Your punctuation could also use work.
Rather impressive, a few errors and a small bit OOC but all in all.....a 8/10, very great job.
Pinkie Pie as a spy, now this I can get behind please do keep going!
Looks like I'm not the only one who's made Pinkie Pie James Bond. Check out these awesome PMV's. The guy has said he's working on Live and Let Die.
Pinkie is a bit too characterless in this story, the fight scenes are non existent, and there's no description of your OC characters.
I'm not going to down vote but it's pretty obvious at least to me why some people are doing so
Sean Connery, the first man to play James Bond has been diagnosed with Alzhemier. A moment of silence in memory of a great actor. (He's still alive for right now but his time is running short.)
My favorite Story by you so far
; Everything but the ending I thought was pretty well done aka story structuring was solid; Pinkie was very pinkie 
; Story was very enjoyable to read. The ponies were humorous as well
Cons: Punctuation Problems; Ending seemed very short and unexciting; some choppy sentences; setting descriptions weren't that detailed
Pros: It's always fun when you make a parody of something with ponies
Yup. Gonna take a break from this for a little while
Every instance of "it's" there is wrong. Please learn the difference between "it's" and "its". (One is possessive, the other is a contraction. The possessive one is the one WITHOUT the apostrophe.)
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a minor nitpick, but a point nevertheless.
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(makes the cross sign)
Um...
Is Pinkie gonna be lethal? Just so I can get a heads up.
(I like non lethal, but don't hesitate to tell me.)
6291447 She ain't gonna be lethal.
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Phew.