The First Element
The First Element
The princess of the moon was going to go to bed early that day. Well, early by her standards. The sun was just beginning to rise as she stifled a yawn, watching from her tower as the moon began to fade from the sky.
"Goodnight, my dear," she whispered. She often found it odd that she would hold such sentiment for a place that she had been trapped. Luna had gotten a lot of thinking done during that time. A lot of crying, a lot of remorseful feeling, but a lot of thinking, too.
This dawn was but a few days after the defeat of the changelings at the wedding of the captain of the royal guard, and Celestia and Luna's niece Cadence. She trotted from her bed to the balcony.
Resting her forelegs on the railing, she sighed. Celestia had found Cadence on the steps of Canterlot castle over a hundred years ago. She seemed to possess the same immunity to age they had, but only time would tell if she was truly an immortal. Luna remembered second guessing her sister's decision to allow Cadence to marry a mortal, reminding her of the heartbreak that was sure to follow in a scant eighty or so years.
Celestia insisted that she would do the same for her, should she ever fall for a mortal mare or stallion.
Luna scoffed at the idea. Imagine, her, ruler of the night, giving herself to a commoner.
She rested her head on her hooves, contemplating the jealousy she felt towards her niece. Not for netting Shining Armor, but for simply having somepony to share her thoughts and feelings with. On one hoof, the thought of consorting with mortals in such a manner disgusted her, but she believed that to be simply a holdover from her pre-banishment era. Times had changed since the days of ponies living mostly in darkness, fearing as well as serving their alicorn masters. It was strictly forbidden for commoners to fraternize with royalty. Back then, only the sons of the elite were even eligible to join the royal guard, let alone attempt to marry a princess.
On the other, being alone for so long with only the platonic relationship of a sister that felt it appropriate to curse you with one thousand years of solitude for a teensy little usurpation of her throne can take its toll on a pony's emotional state. Perhaps there was a pony out there for her, but now was not the time to contemplate such feelings.
The sun was now breaking the horizon, signaling it would soon be time for her to retire to her chambers for a good day's rest. Stepping away from her balcony, she noticed her sister standing quietly in her room.
"Sleepy yet?" she asked, taking a seat on her bed.
"No more than usual. We are simply..." Luna placed a hoof to her chin in thought, "tired."
"Well you should be," Celestia replied. "You've been up all night, after all."
Luna sighed. "Not physically. We grow bored in the castle all day," she whined. "We wish to add some excitement to our lives."
Celestia raised an eyebrow. "Sister, you must rest after your royal duties, what kind of excitement would you be referring to—" both eyebrows raised as a smile crossed Celestia's lips. She nodded silently as she patted the spot on Luna's bed next to her as her sister sat beside her. "I know what you need. I have a royal guard who is quite adept at fulfilling the carnal desires of royalty, just say the word and I'll—"
Luna withdrew in disgust. "We didn't mean that! Besides, do you honestly believe We would need your charity? We could pluck any stallion off the street and he would personally thank his ancestors for birthing him for even getting the opportunity to come near the royal flank!" she snapped.
Celestia was none too happy about being snapped at while only trying to help. "Then what is it you want?"
Luna stepped from her bed and turned toward the balcony once more. "We..." she sighed, still unsure of what kind of excitement she was referring to, herself. Outside, on the palace grounds below her spire, she spotted the Element of Magic herself rushing up the palace steps, her saddle bags flapping wildly as her dragon assistant clung desperately to her tail. That was when it dawned on her what she was looking for. Celestia had subjects that were willing to travel to the ends of Equestria at her whim, and would thank her for the opportunity.
Luna had nothing even close. In fact, her subjects still feared her, even after it had been shown she had purged the evil that was Nightmare Moon from her physical being. The stigma would not leave her, no matter how hard she tried to convince the populous that all she was looking for was the love and admiration of her subjects.
"We want one of those!" she said excitedly. Her sister stepped to the balcony, looking over her shoulder. The rest of the Elements of Harmony came charging up the palace steps after Twilight, their saddlebags bulging with whatever they had managed to stuff inside.
"You want ponies?" Celestia asked skeptically. "Do you recall what happened to the last subjects I gave you?"
Luna's expression soured as she turned to face her sister, "It is not our fault that flammable and inflammable mean the same thing," she hissed, Celestia having touched on a sore subject. "But that was not what We were referring to—"
She was interrupted by the door to her chamber being flung open. An out of breath Twilight Sparkle stood with a baby dragon clinging to her tail. "Princess... the vital... supplies... you needed are here," she panted, as the galloping of hooves echoed in the corridor behind her.
Celestia stepped toward her student as Twilight retrieved some of the contents and levitated them to her mentor.
A nondescript package hovered in front of her as she cut a small rip in the top. Glancing in, she looked back at Twilight and took a smell, then a small taste. "Is this the best you could find?"
"Absolutely. It's the purest there is."
Celestia smiled as the rest of the Elements of Harmony filed into the room. "I am very proud of you girls, you've done a great deed for Equestria." Her loyal subjects bowed respectfully, happy to complete any task given to them by their princess. "Please take them down to the kitchen, the head chef will know where to store them," she added, setting the package she had opened back in Twilight's saddle bag. "While you're down there, have him prepare whatever you'd like, you've earned it."
They added their thanks and departed, barely acknowledging that Luna was in the room, despite the fact that it was her room they had barged into. Luna glared at her sister as Celestia returned a slight blush of embarrassment.
"You have them fetching your coffee now?"
"It's been a slow month since the Chrysalis incident, I couldn't very well have them feeling useless, could I?"
Luna scoffed, "Perhaps, but would you care to explain how..." she glanced at the receipt that had fallen out of the package that her sister had inspected, "Artesian roasted coffee beans are vital supplies?"
Celestia raised her nose, going on the defensive, "They are vital to my morning routine, which includes bringing daylight to our kingdom, and do not pretend as though you do not enjoy the fruits of their labors."
Luna turned back toward the balcony, knowing she enjoyed the premium roasts as much as her sister, and it was quite a pain to travel all the way to Equinedor just to procure some of the most sought after beans in the world.
"Getting back to our original point, it is not ponies we request, but Elements. We wish to have our own Elements of Harmony!"
Celestia choked back laughter at the very idea. "Surely you can't be serious?"
"We are, and don't call us—" Her sister's deadpan stare stopped her from completing her joke. That one had been old since before Luna had been banished.
Celestia joined her sister on the balcony, a bit of sympathy for her sister's plight welling inside her. "Sister, the Elements of Harmony were something I worked very hard to create. Why do you believe we need more?" she inquired softly.
"We simply want ponies of our own to spread good will to the subjects in our name! We may have employed the Elements together, but you and you alone got to decide which ponies became the Element bearers," Luna lamented, though her sister was ready with a valid counterpoint.
"The Elements chose them, Luna. What choice did I have after Nightmare Moon's return?" Princess Luna frowned as she turned away from her sister. It was still a tender subject for the both of them. "However, I cannot deny the goodwill the Elements have spread in my name, so it is only fair that I aid you in creating a set of your own."
Luna turned happily back to her sister, "Really? You will help us create our own squadron of noble adventurers?" she asked gleefully.
"I will. On one condition,"
"Name it!" Luna replied.
"You will have to find your own Element bearers. Understand?"
"Oh yes! Thank you sister, you have no idea how much this means to us! Now We can finally begin earning the trust and admiration of our subjects!"
She threw her hooves around Celestia in a tight hug as she continued thanking her. After her flurry of gratitude, she released her sister. "Now then, I'll set about creating a new set of elements. While I am engaged, you must select your Element bearers. Be diligent in your selection Luna. The power bestowed upon the Element bearers is nothing to be taken lightly."
Luna smiled, heading toward the door, "We shall enjoy a cup of your coffee, and then be off to select our bearers!"
"When are you going to sleep?" Celestia called after her.
"Sleep is for the feeble, dear sister!"
Trotting down the hallway toward the kitchen, Luna's hoofsteps slowly faded, leaving Celestia alone in her room.
"Well, it looks like I must dig my old spell book out of the archives of the Canterlot library," she sighed, only now realizing how much work she may have just promised her sister she would do. A smile played at the edges of her regal features. "But I know the perfect mare for the job," she said to herself, retrieving a scroll and penning a letter to her most faithful student.
Princess Luna fluttered down the palace steps in her usual 'going out' cloak, before being stopped at the gate by the royal guards. Her cloak was annoying, but necessary if she were to remain incognito. Without it, ponies would bow to her at every turn, and it would be much harder to chose a worthy Element bearer if they knew she was watching them.
"Princess, we had no scheduled visits into town today, will you be needing a detail?"
"No thank you, we will be fine on our own."
She knew the guards hated letting her wander without their protection, but at the same time they knew she could handle herself in the presence of danger.
Upon exiting the palace grounds, she ventured into the hustle and bustle of Canterlot. Ponies with errands to run and appointments to keep dashed this way and that, zooming by Her Highness without so much as a cursory nod.
Perfect, she thought.
Luna remembered where her sister had started. She had taken a pupil from obscurity; one with power the likes of which she had never seen before, and trained her practically from birth. Luna had neither the time, nor patience for something so horrendously tedious, so she figured an adult pony would have to do.
Twilight Sparkle is a talented unicorn, so We'll just have to find a talented unicorn of our own. She wandered the streets aimlessly until something caught her attention.
"Come one, come all, and witness feats of incredible magic, performed by the greatest showmare on earth!"
Luna turned to see a small crowd gathered around an azure pony in a cape and hat decorated with stars and moons.
Perhaps this pony is already a loyal fan? Luna thought, making her way towards the front of the crowd. Not that she needed to, she was already about two feet taller than anypony around her. And she's a unicorn too! We think we've found our first Element!
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Edited by... Either Razed or Fan. This one's been on the shelf a while, so I'm sure one of them had a hoof in editing it.
Four views and Five likes? This... This cannot be.
Only someone with amazing power could perform such a feat.
I ignored around 20 stories and this one got me to stop, and it got me to fav and like. congrats keep writing!
Awesome premise! I'll favorite for now! Lunar Republic all the way!
4 views
9 likes.
Seems legit.
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Hmm, I think this is the first time i've had to disagree with you on something.
SOLAR EMPIREGRAND CADENCE OGLIARCHY. YEAH BABY!! (but if I had to pick one of the main two, I would say solar empire)nationstates.net/images/flags/uploads/grand_cadence_oligarchy__736581.jpg
TOPHATS RULE, CROWNS DROOL.
But anyway, this is awesome. I like multi-parters, so this will be some good stuff. Look forward to more.
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Ah the memories 
This is the first story I ever edited for you!
This is either going to be an epic adventure or an unbridled disaster. Either way, it will be beautiful.
I can see this as either really good,
or it will turn into an entire disaster.
But still, it's a good idea. Keep writing.
Um..Yes, Trixie will do the things...I guess....
<(What Did ya Said about The Great And Powerful Trixie?)
I read this and all that is coming to my mind are Power Rangers. Luna's band of do-gooders will be the equestrian equivilant to the Power Rangers.
but horrible predictions aside great story and looking forward to what ever layes ahead
Ha ha, the element of magic has been doubled! Which one will be stronger?
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This is going to be funnier than a leak at a laughing gas factory.
Hey! Some things are positively timeless.
Oh...and awesome story by the way.
Dawned.
Also, no tag for The Great and Powerful Trixie? 
Any, insert obligatory "dis gun b good" here.
Trixie!?.......this....could be good.....or very,very bad.
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I've got a feeling that Luna's version of the Elements will be a lunatic's parody of the real Elements of Harmony. Trixie is only the first step of a disastrous crew that I imagine will include Derpy, Lyra and Vinyl Scratch. The suggestion of the name 'The Elements of Lunacy' strikes me as being very, very prophetic.
I'm thinking that it's going to take the real Elements weeks, maybe months, to fix this mess.
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You say that like it's a valid excuse for anything.
...not that I'm disagreeing.
Shesh Celestia, aside from the Royal Guard of Royal Servicing, is there any task you don't delegate to Twilight these days? Gonna teach her how to raise the sun next and then delegate that to her too?
Okay, now I'm definitely intrigued.
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Definitely favoriting.
Loving it! Keep em coming! The other things I was going to say already were said, so it's all gravy. (hit it with the wood and it's all good)
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
This could be very very funny. Depends on how you handle it. Well, i'll favourite it to watch it, I'm interested for sure.
I can't stop laughing!
Moar!
Cute story, watching to see more!
Trixie, the Element of Magic? One of Luna's Elements, to be specific? Where have I heard that one before?
1924006 I am unfamiliar with that group.
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I figured. I was just kidding.
Oooo. This will end in tears. It will be glorious.
Where's the update?
I feel like like the description should say: Luna told Celestia "well fine ill make my own mane six with blackjack and hookers!"
I would actually like to meet ponies that could get along with Trixie.
I thought there was going to be different. Maybe magic can be bluffing.
1st off, GOD NO IT'S TRIXY
2nd off, "I know what you need. I have a royal guard who is quite adept at fulfilling the carnal desires of royalty, just say the word and I'll—" Celestia is dirty. Very dirty. She has a guard.....