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(Joke) Alt. Title: HEY, Macareina!: The Littlest Twist
1943016Hahaha
Usually the female Mac goes by Big Marcy, but interesting concept all the same.
>> Path_of_cloud i prefer red galla for female big mac
i like traking
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Personally l like the r63 version of Big Macintosh as Red Gala, just like the r63 for spike and rarity would be barbara and elusive, among other ponies and other sapient species (thank you "on a cross and arrow" )
1945666>>1945294 Never seen Red Gala, got a link sitting around perchance?
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Haha, So Little Mac's got a fiery temper. Not bad.
For a second, I thought the smooth-talking stallion was Zircon (R63 Zecora)
1946746Hey if you were a mare like Little Mac being chased by every stallion in Ponyville you would have the same type of temper as her.
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True.
WOOP! GO BEAST GO!
Since there is a comedy tag, I bet that Applejack and her friends will be secretly trying to help Mac's date go smoothly…and thus, shenanigans will ensue!
This could go one way or the other
1947353It could happen
hmmm.... I'm liking the premise of the story, and this has a LOT of potential, but there are a few spots that the grammar and wording are painful to struggle through. If you don't already have a person to help you proof-read the chapters in advance, I highly suggest finding one. Again, this looks like it'll be a fantastic read when it's all finished, but be careful about shuffling between points of view, the tense of the verbs, and make the divides between time splits just a bit more clear. Other than that, great job
1949550Thanks, though I never really thought of having some help with the story because I've been doing this all my own lol
1950519Hahahaha if ya want to help Pinkie, then yes you can help me with it. Even you too Twilight unless your friend Music wants to help too.
What he said.
DANGIT! they need more ways to smile on here!
1950571I don't know about Trollesta lol, but yeah I'm not sure how to let you help me with the story because it's my first time.
Wait.
She mutilated some guy for that?! How is she not in jail?
I get that sexist crap like he pulled is bad, but kicking one of his balls clean off is not an appropriate response. Unless it didn't actually happen, and AJ was just making stuff up. I hope that's the case.
1951693She really didn't kick his balls off. It was a metaphor on showing if a male to do anything wrong to a female, then things might go wrong for them.
Two hours had passed since she was in the hot bath tube laying there trying to clear her mind from all of the irritations and frustrations earlier that day.
My good man, I do believe that should be Tub instead of Tube.
Other than that, very good work so far. Keep up the good work old chap!
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But I preffer Little Mac in her "Bad Mod" more than her "Good Mod"
And to be honest i was expecting some Bucking Kick on Beast jaw or something like that. That would make my day
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Don't worry she will have that bad mod in the next chapter or later on. Right now she's just confused of having these types of feelings.
things are going to smoothly and i am losing interest quickly. I know in real life trouble doesn't normally start this easy but its going to well to hold my interest and to be honest you missed some good moments early on, you should have made him work for that first date.
I thought she could hold off on her own.
as this story is a romance story and that true romance is born after hardships i assume that beast will win hands down but mac will be pissed and get angry at beast but eventually they will reconcile.
also can't help but realize here that you said that the green bastard would sell her as a sex slave. what i dont understand is how a random bastard would have this kind of connection please explain this in the future
also to write faster i beseech thee to drink what twilight has had below
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There are time that you could hold off on your own, and there are time you cannot.
Like here she's going up against a stallion that is bigger than her, even though she could handle herself buts vicious world out there lol
1985532
There are people who has dark sides of themselves that they are hiding. Like this green stallion trying act all nice, but he really wanted is her plot. Plus he's kind of a slob at a point that could be connected with some bad ponies. Though trust me he'll come back in the later chapters.
1990324 but any response to the gif?
1991292
Gif?
1995826 i posted an image with my comment
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Hahaha that's a funny one. I haven't seen it before until you posted up XD
1985532
This is what happens when scout gets extra bonk soda.
Woohoo!
He deserves more pain but this is a good start
2050792
Hahaha so true
K-O!
K-O! Beast Wins!
LAHALAHAHLAJGASGHFAFAS HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY MACAREINA!!!
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All of my yes!
Damn she's pretty cute...
SHE'S GONNA HAVE TO BEAT EM OFF WITH BOTH HOOVES...
BOTH
HOOVES
NON-SEXUALLY
2066842 If only Pinkie played that song...
Honestly I think the green stallion is a complete idiot, attacking a mare in the middle of the street, talking about making her a sex-slave or sell her as a slave...that alone is more than insanely stupid but also I don't think he knows who that mare is, after all her sister are heroes of Equestria and have a good relation with the Princesses...all in all you'll have to be very stupid or just plainly insane...I think he is the latter.
Why's she wearing Rainbow Dash/Blitz wrist/knee bands in the cover image?
why was this so short?
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Sorry it was the only new picture of Macareina that I could find that isn't the same one as the one before.
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Because, I want it to be interesting for the next part where Mac is going to get the best rutting ever.
Dat Friday reference