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- A simple night on the farm even when the night has settled there is always work to do on the farmMsande · 1.4k words · 4 6 · 769 views
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Well my opinion would be to keep doing what you are doing, the story for what you have is pretty good adding some length to it and another chapter would be a good started I read it cause the idea sounded interesting and for a chapter as short as it is it's hard to tell what you plan to do with it in its conception is this a mind game story were SOmbra plays with her perspective, break her will use her as bait? the ideas are unlimited it's all a matter of what you want to do with it.
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