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Sombra gets a new lease on life when given the chance, the king is gone and in his place a small pure white colt. But unfortunately Twilight has to keep an eye on him, now playing older sibling to another house guest. this is split from the story long live the king at chapter 11 for a better back story and explanation check that one out

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Gee. I wonder if he'll make up for his PAST SINS. :ajbemused:

Why sully the good name of King Sombra like this

2912212 Its a side story i had to much fun and yes i did get inspired by past sins. a good story but this will work a lot differently then that story since they are both one and the same not a split.

Wow.

You managed to take the Past Sins concept, and make it even worse.

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Wow. There's some real hate for this story for no good reason. I think it's a nice enough concept, but you'd still have to deal with the fact that the crystal ponies apparently hate the Princesses. It certainly has potential, and I don't really see it as a ripoff of Past Sins. It has a similar situation, but the lack of a cult being involved changes a lot of the possibilities. I'd like to see this continued.

4270887 That was refreshing I stopped all thought on this story and well if someone finds it interesting I can make some time for it.

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