Jak and Daxter: The Equestrian Front

by distortedtruth92

Hey yall check this out

The sequel to this story is out now. lemme know what you think. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/108417/jak-and-daxter-guardians-of-equestria

Comments

[Savant Sentral]

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! FTW!

[BronyBlast9000]

2682911 DU DU DU DU DU D HELLO AND WELCOME TO GAME THORY

[BronyBlast9000]

PS: I Don't Own That

[IMR1fley]

Before I actually start reading, I've never really finished any of the JaD games, and I've only really played the first, and Jak II. Does this contain any spoilers?

[distortedtruth92]

2698326 maybe a little but not any that will take away from the fun fun of the games

[IMR1fley]

2699224 Actually I guess I worded that wrong. Is there anything in the games that I would need to know in order to not get left behind in this story? The only things I can really remember are:

1: dude gets thrown into vat of dark ego, turns into ferret thing.
2: Jak gets pumped with Sh*tloads of dark ego and gets a hulk mode.
3: Jak
4: Daxter
5: tree dude guy
6: That one chick that Daxter has a crush on.
7: Precursor orbs and power cores.
aaaaaaaaaaaannd that's about it.

..... Yeah, I should start playing those games again. I haven't touched them in years....

[distortedtruth92]

2699378 ok in jak 3 he gets light Eco to balance the dark. That's about it

[IMR1fley]

2699454 OK then! *commences reading.

Oh, btw, I just recognized your avatar.

th08.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/051/d/3/my_little_longhorn__wallpapers_are_magic_by_littlekingkero-d4qghix.jpg

[distortedtruth92]

2699490 texas sux

[Savant Sentral]

2698326 no. ERROLis final boss in Jak 3.

[LuftRaptor]

2701561 3 50 what? Also yes dark maker suit was fun

[distortedtruth92]

3031394 well id say after x but before last frontier

[Xeadin]

As a fan of the Jak & Daxter series myself, this is a good read, though I still haven't gotten past the first 5 chapters as of yet

The only things that gripe me, as far as story content goes, are the high-paced scenes which are just a little difficult to follow, and the way that the paragraphs are bunched together. Both of those things aren't a major concern, though they can be a bit distracting for the reader-- in general terms.

In all honesty, this is a great read. A little touch-up here and there may make it look 20% cooler, but that's just personal opinion

Have a fave, like, and moustache

[BronyHawk30]

6127646 Oh yes I am

[sonicrainbowtion]

7148801 Too real. Although technically, it was a different actress in the first two, Tara replaced her from 3 onward.