Jak and Daxter: The Equestrian Front

by distortedtruth92

Epilogue

Kiera, once again, sits on her rock in front of the Rift Gate, the brilliant sunset illuminating her white hair. The Rift Gate is all she has left. Her dad, Ashelin, Torn, every one of them is dead. She turns away from the sunset to once again look at the empty gate.

A blue light starts to build in the center of the gate. Kiera perks up as the blue-white light fills the portal. The light builds to its brightest form just as the gate begins to crack, pieces of it falling at her feet. All at once, the rest of the once majestic looking portal crumbles, leaving nothing but a pile of rubble. Kiera sits back down. She didn’t even know that she had been standing. She looks once more at the fallen Gate before resting her head in her hands and weeping gently.

Author's Note:

Thank y'all so much for reading this story. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it. I also want to thank y'all for sticking with me through the rough patches. Yes I do plan on there being a sequel. Hopefully that will get out soon. I love you all so much.
Love,
Distorted

Comments

[distortedtruth92]

2636159 sorry but yes

[LuftRaptor]

2636174wellllll awkward
......

[LuftRaptor]

2636174btw end or possible seqeul?

[Dirty Bit]

Okay, good, so there's a sequel. You had me going 'What the hell...' back there The epilogue made me think of the ending to Megaman Zero 4, only the protagonist DIDN'T die

[distortedtruth92]

2636188 sequel
2636202 lol never played it

[Bazing]

NO! NOW JAK IS STUCK! :'(

[distortedtruth92]

2636383 yes Jak is stuck. He will stay there forever and die of starvation. That would make a great sequel.

[Bazing]

2636572 best sequel ever!

[BronieMan305]

2636572>>2636684
You are disturbing

[Bazing]

2640206 so I've been told ;)

[MoldyShishkabob]

2636572 Still would be a better love story than Twilight.

[distortedtruth92]

2640206 you know it

[BronieMan305]

2642876
Did you get my PM?

[distortedtruth92]

2643005 yes I did

[distortedtruth92]

2658822 not bad. Gotta love team four star

[Lord Guffington]

Loved this a lot. And a follow to make sure I don't miss out on anything

[distortedtruth92]

2664512 awesome. thanks man

[THS Icicle Chill]

Well.......umm........ that mother frickn' sucks. Still awesome story and I can't wait to read the sequel.

[Fox spirit]

2664794
Her Father is 1-5000 years old so he should be immortal I think?