Jak and Daxter: The Equestrian Front

by distortedtruth92

Breaking Things (Namely the Fourth Wall)

Jak sits at the table in the center of the library, his head on the table, asleep. Daxter walks in, looks out into space and waves. He then hops over to Jak and nudges him on the shoulder, waking him up.

"Uh, Jak, those people are watching us again."

Jak sits up, looks in the same direction as Daxter had and smiles. "Hey guys. What's up. Thanks for favoriting this story. I mean even though the author isn't that good, you still keep coming back."

"Hey, you two, who are you talking to?" Twilight walks down from upstairs, looks in the same direction as the other and gives a happy gasp. "Oh, hey guys. Glad you could make it. I hope you are enjoying our adventure so far. Even the, er, more 'gruesome' parts of the story *cough* Fluttershy *cough*. Anyway, thanks for the favorites. We love you. The next chapter will be up tomorrow."

Jak sits back in his chair and sighs. "Yeah, hopefully Distorted doesn't screw things up again."

"I'm sure he'll be fine. Besides, he doesn't work tomorrow so he has all day to write." Twilight beams happily at the other two before trotting back up stairs. Jak watches her, grinning goofily.

Daxter smacks him on the head playfully, "I knew you had a thing for her."

"Shut up, Dax."

Author's Note:

100 fav special right here. thought i would do something for that once i noticed how this story took off. anyway, i love yall so much

Comments

[Ambrosia_Firehoof13]

Just keep it coming you!!!
Ambrosia M. Firehoof
DJ Lost B34Tz

[distortedtruth92]

1954572 what gave it away

[distortedtruth92]

1956852 i plan on it

[Ambrosia_Firehoof13]

1956902 Good...good...very good...

[Emerald Zweihander]

GIB SLAP FOR RESPECT!

[MoldyShishkabob]

*jumps into story*
GERONIMOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

[Oni]

Jak sits up, looks in the same direction as Daxter had and smiles. "Hey guys. What's up. Thanks for favoriting this story. I mean even though the author isn't that good, you still keep coming back."

imagemacros.files.wordpress.com/2009/06/oh_you.jpg?w=720 ,
you aren't a bad author, in comparison to others i've seen you're actually pretty good!

[distortedtruth92]

1957116 working on the chapter now
1957203 NCIS reference not bad
1958436 *stops him with the hand of God*. "No this is my story. thou shalt not be in it"
1958460 hey i didn't say it, Jak did. I personally think that i'm not that bad

[Emerald Zweihander]

1959245 t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcS2hON1u_0FhInuowmdd-AF5vznfT1Cmw1aUraKliM24_XEO83E Thank you!

[Oni]

1959245 yes, but you made jak say it. now, stop putting yourself down

[distortedtruth92]

1959524 the voices in my head tell me what to write, i have no control over my fingers

[Enceledus]

MOAR!

[dawn_rising]

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[Progamer]

Good chapter 👍