Everypony has something they fear, some more than others. Rainbow Dash claims to be fearless, but all it takes is a strange creature to show her that everypony has their own phobia.
A paragon of virtue, role model, professional writer and a liar.
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creepy, but interesting
HiE told from the point of view of Rainbow Dash? Surprisingly original. Good job!
Really good, original. Hope to see a new chapter soon, very interesting.
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1417394 Mostl ikely heavily inspired by other fiction from (mostly) Dash view. With similar title but definetly for adult audience ;)
1417461
Nope, wasn't sure a fic like that existed, actually. I wrote this because I felt like noone had taken this direction before.
1417618 Not sure....well fic I mentioned is about diffrent thing at all, only contingency is fact that this is too HiE from Dash perspective ;)
one correction: "This time I got a look on his face" I think you either meant "This time I got a look at his face" or "This time I got to look upon his face"
great story though
1417660
Fix'd!
Duude only one word can describe this so far
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this looks interesting
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Awsome
Also do you edit? You have a great talent for HIE and i am trying to acquire an editor for my first fic also an HIE but nopony is responding or do you know a good Editor you would recommend?
Good story so far. Keep at it!
1417772
Sadly, I don't edit as I am more of a writer. Therefor, I make mistakes and miss things. I can point you to look for the editor groups on FiMfiction.
1417772
I could edit a small ammount every week if you wish.
Though to be honest I am not the best editor by any means
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that would be cool however the fiction will be edited by chapter which is 3000-5000 words and wil require some serious work. If you still want to id be grateful just send me a message about times you will be online and i will meetup and we can talk.
1417772
I could edit it if you want, I have a bunch of free time during the week and or weekends for the most part; Only if you want to that is. PM me if that's what you want!
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Yeah, when I saw this pop up on the Feature Box, and seeing that comment of a HiE story from Dash's view I figured it was a grimdark story poking fun at Xenophilia. It certainly would be a new direction since Xenophilia is a romance story though.
Pretty much the opposite to Xenophillia?
WHAT?! IS IT A NECROMORPH THAT SCARES HER? I got a phobia of things that can't be killed easily, and creepy crawlies.
Xenophilia has Rainbow as a main character as well.
*gives Dashie an injection of propofol and drops her in front of th human* Have at it! *he turns away and grins a creepy smile*
1419284 Yeah but this is good to see Rainbow terrified because of human. Quite the opposite like Discord said before.
I sense an incoming storm of hie fics like this
Wow, this is a very good story so far.
Well written, and an interesting concept, but I just can't see Dash acting like this. She's the only one of the mane 6 that has been shown to have a non-pony friend, and while she does have fears and insecurities she tends to cover them with confrontation and bluster. She wouldn't be running in fear, she'd be attacking something she feared head on, even if only to try to prove to herself (and anyone watching) that she's not actually scared.
I like this take on HiE.
Awww... poor Dashie.
This is pretty cool :D
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Yeah she'd never duck away.
She'll always be like in This one.
Read it, it's with a wiking boy/man and I really recommend it.
Oh and have the link for Xenophilia.
Bronydragon
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Tracking
1417772 Simple question. How does one go about editing?
How is it you never dissapoint me with your stories?
Not a bad read.
Spooky indeed. I'm curious if you're going to go month by month. If so, I wonder how Rainbow keeps staying away from him so easily, if he hangs out with mostly her friends. She's with them practically all the time, and doesn't work all day.
There should be more of an interaction then, in my opinion. Definitely excellent so far though, do continue.
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You... do realize you just linked Xenophilia to it's author... right?
Overall, it's a fairly interesting concept. Not many HiE are told from the perspective of a non-human, so this is an interesting break from the stereotypical "My life sucks and I get teleported to Equestria" thing that's spreading like wildfire recently. However, I do agree with>>1419410. Dash is the type of pony who would rather face her problems head-on, rather than run away from them. I do like the first chapter and the format of the story (journal entries aren't done too often either), so I'll tag along and see where this journey goes. I do hope that we get a better in-depth analysis of the human as the story progresses as he's a pretty flat character at the moment.
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Eeeyup. I indeed noticed that, but the other fic was meant for him and in addition, he isn't the author, he's just the publisher for the story on this site. The Xenophilia link was for Symphony.
Bronydragon
hmm, interesting. Rd being afraid of humans? Odd, but it could have a good explanation.(heck, it could just be that it is something completely alien, foreign, etc. and she does not know how to react to it. Yeah, I don't entirely know how phobias work, so I'm grasping at straws here.)
I will follow out of curiosity to where you take this.☺
It's not far enough along to judge yet, but i'm definitely interested in seeing more.
I haven't read this but from the title I'm gonna guess that the story is about how Rainbow Dash is afraid of foreigners.
This is the first hie fic I have ever tracked. Oh and I'm tracking two new stories in one day that's a record in itself.
Awesome title . Will read as soon as possible
2-3 more chapters and ill start judging this...but your off to a good start
Cool. This is interesting!
Oh, it's HiE. I like HiE, but I was hoping for an Alien crossover. That'd be fuckin' sick.
Oh for f***'s sake.
Xenophilia can refer to either an attraction or love of foreign or alien people, manners or culture; or it can refer to being sexually attracted to a a sapient of a different species.
Xenophobia, on the other hand, only refers to a general aversion or fear of foreign or alien people, manners or culture. It cannot be applied to a singular species or individual.
Change the name to just "Phobia". You seem like an attention whore trying to get recognition of of an obscenely popular HiE ship/clop fic with the same main character and similar name. Not that I care about that fic. It takes itself too seriously for my tastes and it's subject matter IMO.
Interesting reading a "Human in Equestria" fic from this view.
Haha oh my god the cover picture
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Hey now... It takes itself just seriously enough
I certainly don't begrudge Symphony the title. He says he's never read Xenophilia and that is entirely possible, many people stay away from mature tags.
I do however completely agree with you on the term Xenophobia, it's one of the reasons I feel Dash is bad for the role (since she's shown that she's perfectly fine with Griffons at the very least). In all honesty, AJ would be a much better fit for it. She's shown to be adverse to other cultures in the show, and southern stereotypes really don't help her any in that department.
1417461: i know the one your talking about, hehe now i wanna go back and read it since you reminded me.