August 17th
Alright, lemme just start off by stating that I really didn't want to write in this stupid journal, because writing is a thing for eggheads, y'know? I could say that I was kind of forced by Twi to write this, as she said something about me being able to get my thoughts down in it. But whatever, I guess it will work as I'm already pouring my thoughts in this journal... She also said something about me not being afraid to write down all my thoughts.
Yeah, I'll get to that later on. You see, she wanted me to get writing because they say I've been acting up for a while now, I don't know what they mean by that though... I mean, I am just being kinda protective of myself when I'm around... Him. Well, I guess it's a a dude because of what I've heard, Rarity refers to him as being a gentlecolt. Heck, I don't care about that. I just don't want to be around him.
I guess I should explain what I don't like about him. Well, I should start off by mentioning that he's... Different from the rest. He's not a pony, but he still kinda acts like one though... Don't get me wrong, Gilda was also different, but she was my friend way back to when I was still a filly so that's different from this guy. He's tall, and I mean, really tall. Almost as tall as Princess Celestia, and that says something... He looks kinda like a monkey, but bigger and the only hair he has is on his head. The girls say that there's nothing wrong with him, but there's nothing wrong about being a little careful, right?
Oh, who am I kidding... What I am about to write will never, and I mean never get out as then my image will be destroyed. I am scared of him... Horseapples... Why am I the one to be scared? That's 'Shy's job! But nooo, she was one of the first ponies to talk to him... She and her stupid instinct of helping animals and stuff...
Then the rest of my friends got to know him. But me? I... I just couldn't find it in me to get closer to him than what I was... I honestly can't believe that me, Rainbow Dash of all ponies, pulled a Fluttershy right then and there. I just backed away from him and flew away as fast as I could. Twilight and Fluttershy came along and found me later on, I didn't tell them everything, I just told them that I wasn't feeling that good and had to go and chill for a bit. Fluttershy accepted it, but Twilight raised an eyebrow but went with it after a while.
The point for all of this is only one thing, and that thing is that I have... Oh, what the hay did Twilight call it... Oh yeah, now I remember! That Twilight with her fancy books and all other science...y stuff. She honestly have to get out more, as Pinkie always tell her. But whatever, here it is;
The name's Rainbow Dash, and I have Xenophobia.
Twilight said that I should write in this as often I can with every experience I have with this... Xeno...whatever I wrote before. So, I'll get on with writing that whenever I feel like it. I don't know if this manure will help me solve this thing, but yeah, let's hope for the best, eh? But I have to finish this thing up now, as I have work tomorrow. Clearin' clouds and being all-around awesome is a tiring task, y'know. That's why I nap from time to time during the day. I'm not gonna keep on writing this, as it's starting to get kind of boring. So... Yeah... Bye, I guess.
August 19th
I... I am kinda freaking out right now, so I hope my writing will still be... Somewhat readable. So, I had finished work for the day and decided to head out to AJ's farm to hang out with her for a while. When I got there, Big Mac told me that she was still out bucking trees in the north-eastern part of the orchard. I said my thanks, being polite and all that jazz. I flew out to that part of the orchard and got there within a minute. I'm not the fastest flier in Equestria for nothing, heh.
But when I got out to where Applejack was, I noticed that... He was there and working with her... My breathing hitched and I honestly think I even felt a little jealous. I flew away from there and decided to fly around until he had finished working and had left the farm. I think he lives with Fluttershy, I'm not that sure though.
I flew around for a bit, training some tricks just to kill the necessary time until he had left. After about five minutes of constant flying, I landed on the branch of a tree to rest for a while. I yawned and closed my eyes. Hay, I had woken up early that morning to work so I deserved to take a quick nap! I think I slept for like, ten minutes or so before a kick rustled the tree I was lying on. I didn't have the time to react, so I just fell to the ground.
When I opened my eyes again, I was first blinded by the sun. The next thing I saw was Applejack shouting something to me. I think it was something about me not being supposed to sleep on her trees. Same 'ol thing as always. The reason why I'm freaking out is because... Well, he was standing there next to AJ... He looked down at me with a concerned frown. I jumped to my hooves and backed away from him, didn't take long until my flank pushed to the tree I had been lying on. AJ asked me if I was okay, but I didn't answer her, I just flew away. I just got home when I started writing this entry. I... I don't know what I should do... I need help with this, I can't do this alone...
This time I got a look at his face, his jaw was chiseled, and his chin looked almost pointy. His hair was almost like a dark, brownish color and it was about shoulder-length? Whatever, his eyes were a hazel color. That was the closest to what I've ever been to him... I don't think I want to be closer than that, no I am pretty sure that I'm at a comfortable distance away from him right now... Yep, living in a cloud house is pretty sweet!
When I think about it, I actually feel a little calmer now after writing this entry. Heh, looks like that egghead know what she's rambling about... I got to thank her for that tip someday...when he's not there, thankyouverymuch. I'm getting pretty tired and hungry, and I'm not usually in a good mood when I'm one of those things, so I'll go and grab something to eat then nap. Next entry will be... Whenever. Until then, remember; AJ gets pissy when you sleep on her trees. Don't do that in the future...
Oh, who am I kidding? I'll do that anyway...
August 23rd
What the hay should I do about this? I have been thinking about that thing and his face even since the incident on the Acres. Not many of them were pleasant, though... I had some bad dreams after that, nightmares. After one of those nightmares I could barely fall back asleep again. Those dreams are something like I have never experienced before when it comes to dreams. I usually dream about flying with the Wonderbolts in the Cloudsdale Arena. But these dreams...
They often start with me walking around in Ponyville at night, minding my own business. After a while I can start hearing weird sounds, only to see the human walk out of the shadows with a creepy grin. After that, I run. I run as fast as my legs can carry me. But somehow, he still manages to keep up with me, no matter how fast I run. If I attempt to fly away, my wings won't flap or they just disappear. But when he does catch me, he throws me onto my back, still with the same creepy grin. I know that his eyes are hazel, but in my dreams they are a hellish glowing red. I usually wake up after the chase when he starts gloating.
The dreams are starting to affect my life, as I get barely any sleep at all. Probably just about 2, maybe 3 hours of sleep a night. That doesn't really help my mood very much, as I become easily annoyed and distracted... I still work, but it's not exactly an easy task when I am so tired. I try though, and refuse to let it distract me from my work. My boss asked me what's up, but I just said that I had a rough nights' sleep. I can't say that forever, and I'm pretty sure my friends are starting to worry about me.
I have told Twilight about them, so we talked about them for an hour or two. She told me to take a break from working as long as I still have the nightmares, but heck no, I need the bits from my work to keep everything rolling! I told her that, but she still seemed to be pretty unamused about it. She told me that I risked my well-being if I worked with so little sleep, but I think that was a little hypocritical... She stays up pretty much all night studying and still work during the day, after all... whatever. Her problem.
I guess I should do what she suggested and take the day off tomorrow, in order for me to try and relax and relieve my mind of the stuff that's going on. No point in not trying, right? Twilight has been pretty spot-on with everything about this so far, so the best thing I can do is to continue and listen to her and try to do what she tells me.
Yeah, this should be just fine... I just have to stop thinking about the human for now. I'll just ignore what he does, and with whom he does stuff. Maybe if I don't care, I won't be as afraid? Well, here's to hoping, I guess...
Oh Celestia, I'm gonna need more help than this... Maybe I should go and visit a real psychiatrist? Sure, Twilight knows what she's doing and I trust her, but... Maybe I could talk to somepony who's a professional? I'll look into that later, but I have to try and get some sleep again.
Nightmares, here I come...
creepy, but interesting
HiE told from the point of view of Rainbow Dash? Surprisingly original. Good job!
Really good, original. Hope to see a new chapter soon, very interesting.
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1417394 Mostl ikely heavily inspired by other fiction from (mostly) Dash view. With similar title but definetly for adult audience ;)
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Nope, wasn't sure a fic like that existed, actually. I wrote this because I felt like noone had taken this direction before.
1417618 Not sure....well fic I mentioned is about diffrent thing at all, only contingency is fact that this is too HiE from Dash perspective ;)
one correction: "This time I got a look on his face" I think you either meant "This time I got a look at his face" or "This time I got to look upon his face"
great story though
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Fix'd!
Duude only one word can describe this so far
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this looks interesting
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Awsome
Also do you edit? You have a great talent for HIE and i am trying to acquire an editor for my first fic also an HIE but nopony is responding or do you know a good Editor you would recommend?
Good story so far. Keep at it!
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Sadly, I don't edit as I am more of a writer. Therefor, I make mistakes and miss things. I can point you to look for the editor groups on FiMfiction.
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I could edit a small ammount every week if you wish.
Though to be honest I am not the best editor by any means
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that would be cool however the fiction will be edited by chapter which is 3000-5000 words and wil require some serious work. If you still want to id be grateful just send me a message about times you will be online and i will meetup and we can talk.
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I could edit it if you want, I have a bunch of free time during the week and or weekends for the most part; Only if you want to that is. PM me if that's what you want!
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Yeah, when I saw this pop up on the Feature Box, and seeing that comment of a HiE story from Dash's view I figured it was a grimdark story poking fun at Xenophilia. It certainly would be a new direction since Xenophilia is a romance story though.
Pretty much the opposite to Xenophillia?
WHAT?! IS IT A NECROMORPH THAT SCARES HER? I got a phobia of things that can't be killed easily, and creepy crawlies.
Xenophilia has Rainbow as a main character as well.
*gives Dashie an injection of propofol and drops her in front of th human* Have at it! *he turns away and grins a creepy smile*
1419284 Yeah but this is good to see Rainbow terrified because of human. Quite the opposite like Discord said before.
I sense an incoming storm of hie fics like this
Wow, this is a very good story so far.
Well written, and an interesting concept, but I just can't see Dash acting like this. She's the only one of the mane 6 that has been shown to have a non-pony friend, and while she does have fears and insecurities she tends to cover them with confrontation and bluster. She wouldn't be running in fear, she'd be attacking something she feared head on, even if only to try to prove to herself (and anyone watching) that she's not actually scared.
I like this take on HiE.
Awww... poor Dashie.
This is pretty cool :D
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Yeah she'd never duck away.
She'll always be like in This one.
Read it, it's with a wiking boy/man and I really recommend it.
Oh and have the link for Xenophilia.
Bronydragon
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Tracking
1417772 Simple question. How does one go about editing?
How is it you never dissapoint me with your stories?
Not a bad read.
Spooky indeed. I'm curious if you're going to go month by month. If so, I wonder how Rainbow keeps staying away from him so easily, if he hangs out with mostly her friends. She's with them practically all the time, and doesn't work all day.
There should be more of an interaction then, in my opinion. Definitely excellent so far though, do continue.
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You... do realize you just linked Xenophilia to it's author... right?
Overall, it's a fairly interesting concept. Not many HiE are told from the perspective of a non-human, so this is an interesting break from the stereotypical "My life sucks and I get teleported to Equestria" thing that's spreading like wildfire recently. However, I do agree with>>1419410. Dash is the type of pony who would rather face her problems head-on, rather than run away from them. I do like the first chapter and the format of the story (journal entries aren't done too often either), so I'll tag along and see where this journey goes. I do hope that we get a better in-depth analysis of the human as the story progresses as he's a pretty flat character at the moment.
1420094
Eeeyup. I indeed noticed that, but the other fic was meant for him and in addition, he isn't the author, he's just the publisher for the story on this site. The Xenophilia link was for Symphony.
Bronydragon
hmm, interesting. Rd being afraid of humans? Odd, but it could have a good explanation.(heck, it could just be that it is something completely alien, foreign, etc. and she does not know how to react to it. Yeah, I don't entirely know how phobias work, so I'm grasping at straws here.)
I will follow out of curiosity to where you take this.☺
It's not far enough along to judge yet, but i'm definitely interested in seeing more.
I haven't read this but from the title I'm gonna guess that the story is about how Rainbow Dash is afraid of foreigners.
This is the first hie fic I have ever tracked. Oh and I'm tracking two new stories in one day that's a record in itself.
Awesome title . Will read as soon as possible
2-3 more chapters and ill start judging this...but your off to a good start
Cool. This is interesting!
Oh, it's HiE. I like HiE, but I was hoping for an Alien crossover. That'd be fuckin' sick.
Oh for f***'s sake.
Xenophilia can refer to either an attraction or love of foreign or alien people, manners or culture; or it can refer to being sexually attracted to a a sapient of a different species.
Xenophobia, on the other hand, only refers to a general aversion or fear of foreign or alien people, manners or culture. It cannot be applied to a singular species or individual.
Change the name to just "Phobia". You seem like an attention whore trying to get recognition of of an obscenely popular HiE ship/clop fic with the same main character and similar name. Not that I care about that fic. It takes itself too seriously for my tastes and it's subject matter IMO.
Interesting reading a "Human in Equestria" fic from this view.
Haha oh my god the cover picture
1421191
Hey now... It takes itself just seriously enough
I certainly don't begrudge Symphony the title. He says he's never read Xenophilia and that is entirely possible, many people stay away from mature tags.
I do however completely agree with you on the term Xenophobia, it's one of the reasons I feel Dash is bad for the role (since she's shown that she's perfectly fine with Griffons at the very least). In all honesty, AJ would be a much better fit for it. She's shown to be adverse to other cultures in the show, and southern stereotypes really don't help her any in that department.
1417461: i know the one your talking about, hehe now i wanna go back and read it since you reminded me.