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I always wondered how Facehuggers opened their victims mouths...:applejackconfused:

Definitely favoriting.

Anyone else even more hyped for Colonial Marines after reading this?:yay:

if you go into detail about the xenos killing style, i think this will turn mature very fast.

Y1

I laughed at the bit about the guy with the god complex and how they never learn. It's so true as well, when will these people realize that messing with xenomorphs is a bad idea?
Anyway good so far. Keep writing.
I feel sorry for the dog but hey, better her than one of the Apples right?

Someone's read Stephen King's Cujo

468330 I've always admired King's writing style: especially his take on the thought processes of the St. Bernard in Cujo. I thought I would try it out with Winona, and I think it worked out rather nicely. I am, for the most part, inept when it comes to this sort of thing. I think of it as my own tribute to an amazing author. I'm glad somebody else noticed :pinkiesmile:

Wait a minute, did Discord call her his Queen?:rainbowderp:

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No No! Go away perverted thought! Go away!:twilightangry2:

474605
OH GOD NOW ITS IN MY MINNDDDDDD


KILL IT WITH FIRREEEE

474605 Hmmmm... that wasn't my original intention when I wrote this... but now I'm not sure :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowkiss: another chapter!

and a fine one at that, good sir!:moustache:

I would've personally grabbed the theif screaming, and throw him inot the barrier a couple of time.. but eh.

The strangest features of all, however, were the creature’s front hooves. They were flattened sideways and split into five separate pieces. The pieces appeared to be jointed, as they bent every which way along the neck of the guitar, pressing on the strings.

Biology lesson!
Hooves are equivalent to the tips of our fingers. Our hands would actually be some of the leg just above the hoof.



Oddly enough, the creature appeared to be wearing clothing. It was dressed in baggy grey-green leg coverings and large boots. As Scootaloo looked at the creature’s hooves, she noted that they were elongated like those of a dragon. An unbidden image of Spike, the town’s assistant librarian, popped into her head.



Fluttershy mentions monkeys in The Ticket Master and there is a picture of some kind of ape int the Cake Twin's bedroom in Baby Cakes.


The ponies aren't oblivious to the existence of primates. It would be better if Scootaloo compared him to a big tall chimp with no fur and a bigger braincase. Which opens up for the chance to insult him with this:

"Who ya callin' chicken, you dirty ape?!"




Also, DiscordxAlien Queen?


ME GUSTA.

I am loving this.

Second Xenomorph fic i've ever seen (to date).

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Please; continue. :scootangel:

487037 What was it called? I read another one awhile back and liked it quite a bit. I would appreciate the opportunity to read another :pinkiesmile:
486877 Also, thanks for the constructive criticism! I got literally two reviews on fanfiction.net and only one of those was helpful :applejackunsure: I'll be sure to take your suggestions into consideration.
On another note: that was the last of my pre-made chapters. I'm currently working on the next one and it should be ready in the next week or so :twilightsmile:
Thanks for reading!

487078

I'd love to pre-read for you. I've been free ever since School Daze ended.

487078 here, have a link. :moustache:

the premis is similar to yours, only without the space marines. :applejackunsure:
...and its on EqD.
Personally, I LOVED it back when i first saw it. but i havent been keeping track.:pinkiehappy:

In any case, i hope you enjoy it. :twilightsmile:
~Fecler

488201 Thanks, I might take you up on that offer! We'll see how this next chapter goes :pinkiehappy:
489430 Also, I appreciate the link to the other story! I hope it's not too similar though :applejackunsure: I would hate to get bogged down in an effort to make mine completely different, y'know? Eh... shouldn't be too hard now that I think about it :scootangel:

491071 no problem.
No problem at all. :eeyup:

“Honey!” Discord snickered, “I’m home!”


It's back!:fluttercry:

Keep the awesome flowing man, im looking forward to eventual pony xenomorp encounter.

'His beautifully insectile savior, despite her unfortunate lack of a proper birthing capsule... and fertilization for that matter...'


Dear God, are you trying to kill me??!!:raritycry:

Gotta love Scootaloo in this story, she alone already is a reason to read this fic. :scootangel:

I got a question about the zapper sphere. How can they take Twi's and AJ's hair through the barrier without it being disintegrated, I mean it does it to everything that isn't cataloged in the DNA scanner. That part confused me a little. :derpyderp1:

On the other hand of course, this is an amazing story and I really don't understand why it has only 20 likes this deserves a lot more. :moustache:

531746 Sorry about the confusion there. I guess I didn't make it clear enough that they had the hair completely inside there mouths so it wouldn't come in contact with the barrier. My bad :twilightsheepish:
Also, thanks for reading! I appreciate your assertion that the story should be more popular. To tell you the truth, I'm ecstatic that it's as popular as it is now :pinkiehappy: When I originally posted the story on fanfiction.net it went almost completely unread for months. I got all of two reviews :ajbemused:
Compared to that the comments and critiques I'm getting now are great!

532307

Oh I see well that makes sense then. And yeah that is fanfiction.net for you if you don't post at the right time no one will notice your story.

468187 well... its one of those deals where a few failures (loses) doesn't really matter compared to what can be gained from it, so therefore they will keep trying until it works! its business after all ;)

Sorry for the wait on this chapter :applejackunsure:
I just haven't found the time to post. Luckily, the one I wrote was big enough to be split into two. The second will be posted after I've made a few finishing touches :pinkiesmile:
Also, I've been busy mulling over a new story :rainbowkiss:
Now that summer's here though, expect chapters to come in more regularly.
Thanks for reading!

Great new chapter, with the next one this will be way worth the wait! I still love the idea of carnivore Scootaloo so much.
And do I sense a certain attraction by AJ to Ray?

excellent chapter once more, i especially loved the closing line for ray and jer, as it is only the most respectable thing to do in this type of situation.

Now trollestia got trolled. :trollestia:

Again great job on the chapter I enjoyed reading it a lot.

I find it disturbingly ironic - the best kind of irony:pinkiecrazy: - that Applejack as anxious about her family, and Winnona is the first host. Not sure if that was intentional or not, either way, clever!:pinkiehappy:

I saw the picture and thought, "Alien/Pony crossover? No way...."

After first chapter: salivating on my computer.

Humans have it rough. Given the new Alien movie that came out it only gets rougher for them.
A lot of exposition in this chapter, but I really don't mind.

717212 Hehe yeah I know. Sorry 'bout that :twilightblush:
Had to get most of the background out of the way at some point. Hopefully there won't be too much more of that all at once :raritywink:

Since the movie Prometheus came out, are you adding anything from that movie into your story?

753811 I might throw in something. I feel like it would be a hard to do it justice, however, so I'll wing it and see how it goes :pinkiehappy:

Wow. So you are making Scoot into an omnivore? What's up with that?:trixieshiftright:

Sorry for the delay. I was away for a week and had little to no internet access :ajbemused:
Anyway, I hope you enjoy this next installment! Don't hesitate to click the little thumby-uppy thing either! I mean, if you actually like it that is :rainbowwild:

Thanks for reading! :rainbowkiss:

474605
NOo it's in my brainn...
FETCH ME GUTTING SPOON!


“Clever girl…”

I know have the impression that Ray is the reincarnation of Robert Muldoon and Twilight is the reincarnation of the raptor that pwned him.

So Pinkie is as insane as Jer. that works. Like two peas in a pot I guess. :pinkiecrazy:

819671

You are not the only one. ^^

820024 She seems to cope with it a lot better, though...
Crazy lessons anyone? :pinkiecrazy:

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