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Levoanp
Hi I´m Paul, my bio just got shorter!
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hmmm...an HiE... let's see if it measures up to something like mine...
EDIT: A run on sentence, "woody" spelled wrong, hellspawn used a bit too much...
Understandable, english isn't your forte, but maybe you should get a proofreader? Not me, as I got my own.
Well, the story's alright, not exactly subtle for beginnings, unless "subtle" is spelled like
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But the story is alright.
912047
Thanks for the spelling check, it´s much appreciated.
912172 Bitte!
i like it
917178
I´m happy that you do!
homeless dandelion viking
Can my oc be in the story just asking
921182
Sure, why not!
921957 Hoorah his name is pokeblox
He is kinda random and he can be a nuisance sometimes and heres some spiketaches
925213
Sounds like someone I knew in high school...
Edit: Oh and:
925264 seems pretty legit
Thank you I have been waiting to see me
and we might need to run
Edit:BY CELESTIAS NON EXISTANT BALLS THIS STORY IS GREAT
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lol glad for real update..........bit with the sword reminds me of something but too vague to say...>.>......and if one knew how, then technically isn't it possible to put others to sleep whether they are violent or not thru music alone...<,<.....rambling aside
942754
That is an very intresting point!
Care to elaborate?
Edit: Oh yeah, I missed something that was important to the flow in the story...but thats all fixed now!
942797
not all together knowledgeable on it, but from what i gather i say the effect/emotion made thru music can differ between instruments n the one making it. One can't just make a lullaby and expect it to put a young one to sleep, it has to have the intentions of comfort, calm, and peace from the one creating it, like how animals tend to react to people based on their intentions, mood, body language, etc. Generally if you don't put feeling to back up the meaning behind it, then it just becomes flashy sounds n what not.........whether or not this can actually be true realistically is debatable.......but it has merit....
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All I can really say right now is "EPIC!" The only thing I'd say you'd have to do is proof read. Other than that, I will wait wit anticipation for the next chapter. Keep the good work.
Thanks! It´s comments like yours 944756 and yours 944698 that keeps me going!
Edit: And comments in generall
In the next chapter I think I´m going to try focus on Saga to flesh out her character a little since she got almost no screen time and and thats kind of bad seeing how she is important to the story.
Edit: Crap I forgot the cliffhanger... dammit!
Editedit: Is wrong to want to write a scene where someone screams "Leroy Jenkins"?
Can the next chapter be me and saga get separated and have to find eachother
983852
...Maaaaaybe
976654 replying to the Editedit it's not wrong at all it makes the chapter 20% cooler XD
cool
So, why did the Tick show up at the end?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBocpO2XUu0
Leroy Jenkins, 100% acceptable in all situations.
1373370 Because.... Randomness *waves arms around in an over-the-top mystic manner* dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png
5391087
Well... um, the fact is that I´ve lost intrest in the story.
Sorry to dissapoint you.