Paul a human finds an baby griffon in the everfree and adops it.
hmmm...an HiE... let's see if it measures up to something like mine...
EDIT: A run on sentence, "woody" spelled wrong, hellspawn used a bit too much...
Understandable, english isn't your forte, but maybe you should get a proofreader? Not me, as I got my own.
Well, the story's alright, not exactly subtle for beginnings, unless "subtle" is spelled like
[youtube=pi_AQen5kI8]
But the story is alright.
912047Thanks for the spelling check, it´s much appreciated.
912172 Bitte!
hmmm...an HiE... let's see if it measures up to something like mine...
EDIT: A run on sentence, "woody" spelled wrong, hellspawn used a bit too much...
Understandable, english isn't your forte, but maybe you should get a proofreader? Not me, as I got my own.
Well, the story's alright, not exactly subtle for beginnings, unless "subtle" is spelled like
[youtube=pi_AQen5kI8]
But the story is alright.
912047
Thanks for the spelling check, it´s much appreciated.
912172 Bitte!