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Nailah

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Originally I wanted to write this for the 1000 words contest but I just had no motivation to work on it at that time.

Description: Chitter needs a date to understand the meaning of real love, but they have no idea how any of these apps are supposed to help them!

Please note: Chitter is Non-binary please if you see any mistakes, I or my pre-readers missed let us know!

Pre-readers: Queen Chryssy , Applezombi

Editor: Dreams

Cover art by: daOtterGuy
Chapters (1)
Complete Published: January 2nd Download
9,020 words
Comments ( 4 )
Dreams of Ponies
Dreams of Ponies #1 · January 2nd · · ·
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Everybuggy needs a little love. :moustache:

Aklinstar
Aklinstar #2 · January 3rd · · ·
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I LOVED IT!

“I am helping you, yes.” Pipp began, “Sadly, I can’t stay for extended periods of time. I’d rather laze about all day long, chatting on my phone, or helping more creatures.”

I understand she's busy, Princess duties and all and I know this is what is meant in this paragraph, but "I'd rather laze about all day long" right after "I can't stay for extended periods of time" seems a little off to me? Maybe it's just because she didn't say why she couldn't stay for long, is all. I can see this slipping Pipp's mind.

Pipp clopped her hooves together, and began working. First she reached for a brush and began to smooth out any twists, or knots in Chitter’s chitlin. Changelings didn’t have much to work with, but she simply hummed to an upbeat pop song.

“We’re gonna make you shine, make you a star in the night light. No creature can deny the simple grace of your embrace, now dazzle and sprinkle, and rinse!” Pipp hummed, hoovering back and forth.

I'd never thought about changelings needing brushing, but now I HAVE to use this if I make a changeling fic! This is great! I love your Pipp, you did an awesome job! She's so whimsical, and easygoing but also realistic.

Chitter looked at the garment, or garments Pipp had selected. It was a two piece with lacy trim at the top, to give the blouse a nice v-neck opening in the front. Then, towards the bottom of the shirt, but more so three quarters down was a belt with a big square buckle, that looped around the material. The bottom half looked like just regular dark green pants.

Aww, we need fanart of this!

“How do you know when something is just perfect?” Chitter asked her.

“Oh, sweetie, that’s not something I can teach you,” Pipp paused, leaning over and gently putting a hoof to their shoulder. “It’s something you just know, when you know?”

I feel like this is both great and terrible advice at the same time, but it's sooooooo Pipp. It really depends on the creature.

“I want fun, and adventure,” Whimsy began, leaning forward, both elbows on the table, looking directly at Chitter. "And I am not ready to settle into any long form commitment. I would hate to lead you astray"

Oh…I see.” Chitter managed to smile, despite feeling cold and damp. Just a moment ago, he felt sweaty, and now the whole room felt void of wonder.

Absolutely brilliant. I see what you did there, you clever you~

“I’m off duty right now, I’d love to meet up with you,” Chitter read aloud. Chitter squeaked, jumping up from the pillow and letting out a shrill. “YAY!”

eeeeeeee! That's sooooo adorable! I love Chitter so much. Please consider doing more with them in the future!

Fantastic story, bravo!

QueenChrysalisForever
QueenChrysalisForever #3 · January 3rd · · ·
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I agree with Calypso, we totally need more fanart of our adorable Chitter!

Great story, Nai-Nai, and I'm glad to see it finally published! :heart: :heart:

Herald of Opera
Herald of Opera #4 · January 3rd · · ·
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I'd never thought about changelings needing brushing, but now I HAVE to use this if I make a changeling fic! This is great! I love your Pipp, you did an awesome job! She's so whimsical, and easygoing but also realistic.

It's really more of a polishing than a brushing, but the tools can be the same in a pinch.

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